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readintherainbow's review
2.0
I really wanted to like this book. I felt like it had an interesting twist on mpreg. Yet, I came away feeling like the story as a whole was rushed. Granted, it is a novella (at least I saw that it was listed as one somewhere) so I suppose you should take that into account.
I think character development and character relationships should have been given more depth.
Editing, word switching, an accidental "why" instead of the character's name "Wyatt", and a large handful of other "easy mistakes" caused me be pulled from the world that the author was trying to build.
I really wanted to like this book.
I think character development and character relationships should have been given more depth.
Editing, word switching, an accidental "why" instead of the character's name "Wyatt", and a large handful of other "easy mistakes" caused me be pulled from the world that the author was trying to build.
I really wanted to like this book.
leeann725's review
3.0
While I really enjoyed this story, it felt like the author felt rushed to finish as the editing is quite atrocious towards the end of the book.
tricklolly's review
2.0
The worldbuilding is interesting but the romance is both light and lackluster. There's no getting to know Wyatt and Grayson as a couple, more emphasis is on the world crisis at large. There are also some typos (the author's name is even spelled incorrectly at the end in my copy) and wrong word usage.
orrla's review
5.0
An amazing story! From the summary I expected the story to be dark and frightening, and there were light elements of that, but nothing as extreme as I feared. I loved Wyatt and the secondary characters and the uplifting end. Other then some strange editing errors (and I'm on a tablet so I can't talk!) This was a sweet and fun read. Do not miss this one!
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