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theleppy's review against another edition
adventurous
hopeful
mysterious
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
** spoiler alert ** Warning: I'm going to flirt the spoiler line here but it's mostly without spoilers.
Off the top I did a combination of listening to the audio book version and reading the physical copy. I mention this mostly because Wil Wheaton is fantastic. This is the 3rd book read by him that I have experienced and he lends a lot to it. He's enthusiastic or earnest when appropriate which adds a layer of depth. I have a lot of respect (and some fangirl like) for him and he helped me read through some of the more...difficult/ frustrating sections of this book.
This book has a lot of problems that I find frustrating. I loved the first book enough to listen to/read it 4 times. It's an interesting alternate future with a lot of interesting ideas it explores and that carries over here. The first book's ending was pretty perfect though so this book wasn't necessary imo.
The first problem this book has is that it's front loaded with way too much information dumped on the reader. Half of which seems unnecessary and/or obviously setup to be broken rules. Most of this could have been shortened, broken to small pieces and placed later in the book for better effect and pacing.
In the first book I found the nerd-out tangents were largely interesting and fairly controlled. Here they go on and on and on and become boring and lose meaning. This makes me sad honestly because if they ended a sentence or paragraph sooner I would have enjoyed these parts!
The "formula" of the quest being repeated isn't an issue in my opinion. It works and I'm not going to knock it but I would have liked to have time to mull over the clues more like in the 1st novel. Part of the excitement was trying to unravel it along with Wade. There is a time crunch that stops this from happening which is a shame.
Wade crosses a few lines that made me pretty mad at him and he admits he's wrong but I think the line crossing wasn't necessary and only harmed my opinion of him. He doesn't face enough consequences for it either. He invades people's privacy in order to...do nothing that couldn't have been figured out in a better way.
I was disappointed most of the other characters barely get time to shine this time around. Shoto is probably done the most dirty. He's shunted to the background like the author didn't know what to do with him. Aech and Art3mis get some characterization but I wish there was more. Art3mis is part of the heart of this story and I find her the most likable alongside Og and Kira who we do get to learn more about.
I feel like this book is trying to juggle too many big topics and the author should have dropped a few of them. Sexual experimentation, racisim, and transgender being least important to the plot and the mentions felt liked they were a bit forced and hindered the flow of the book. Aech complaining about how white 80s movies are when a literal clock is ticking is frustrating and isn't helping that discussion (it's a valid argument but there isn't room for it to be explored here). Additionally Wade invading the transgender character's privacy to go "we are inclusive!! Here is a cool Trans chara!!" Is gross. Let them exist and elude to it instead. The impact of Aech's reveal in the first book was so good and makes this all that much worse here. I don't think the author intended to be gross about it and he tried at least. Especially since I feel he did right by Kira and Art3mis. There is a running theme carried from the first book about sexism causing women's roles in history to be down played or even erased. They should have hammered it home a smidge more at the end though but again, too many big topics are covered to go deeper on nearly all of them.
Honestly though I think the ending redeemed this book (mostly). I got misty eyed over parts of the ending. I didn't expect all of what happened and was pleasantly surprised by a few things. The book has good parts it's just clunky. After I struggled through the first 100ish pages tit gained enough momentum that I burned through the rest in less than 2 days.
For fans of the first book hungry for more (even though it had a perfect ending) and willing to hold out for the ending.
3.5 stars
Off the top I did a combination of listening to the audio book version and reading the physical copy. I mention this mostly because Wil Wheaton is fantastic. This is the 3rd book read by him that I have experienced and he lends a lot to it. He's enthusiastic or earnest when appropriate which adds a layer of depth. I have a lot of respect (and some fangirl like) for him and he helped me read through some of the more...difficult/ frustrating sections of this book.
This book has a lot of problems that I find frustrating. I loved the first book enough to listen to/read it 4 times. It's an interesting alternate future with a lot of interesting ideas it explores and that carries over here. The first book's ending was pretty perfect though so this book wasn't necessary imo.
The first problem this book has is that it's front loaded with way too much information dumped on the reader. Half of which seems unnecessary and/or obviously setup to be broken rules. Most of this could have been shortened, broken to small pieces and placed later in the book for better effect and pacing.
In the first book I found the nerd-out tangents were largely interesting and fairly controlled. Here they go on and on and on and become boring and lose meaning. This makes me sad honestly because if they ended a sentence or paragraph sooner I would have enjoyed these parts!
The "formula" of the quest being repeated isn't an issue in my opinion. It works and I'm not going to knock it but I would have liked to have time to mull over the clues more like in the 1st novel. Part of the excitement was trying to unravel it along with Wade. There is a time crunch that stops this from happening which is a shame.
Wade crosses a few lines that made me pretty mad at him and he admits he's wrong but I think the line crossing wasn't necessary and only harmed my opinion of him. He doesn't face enough consequences for it either. He invades people's privacy in order to...do nothing that couldn't have been figured out in a better way.
I was disappointed most of the other characters barely get time to shine this time around. Shoto is probably done the most dirty. He's shunted to the background like the author didn't know what to do with him. Aech and Art3mis get some characterization but I wish there was more. Art3mis is part of the heart of this story and I find her the most likable alongside Og and Kira who we do get to learn more about.
I feel like this book is trying to juggle too many big topics and the author should have dropped a few of them. Sexual experimentation, racisim, and transgender being least important to the plot and the mentions felt liked they were a bit forced and hindered the flow of the book. Aech complaining about how white 80s movies are when a literal clock is ticking is frustrating and isn't helping that discussion (it's a valid argument but there isn't room for it to be explored here). Additionally Wade invading the transgender character's privacy to go "we are inclusive!! Here is a cool Trans chara!!" Is gross. Let them exist and elude to it instead. The impact of Aech's reveal in the first book was so good and makes this all that much worse here. I don't think the author intended to be gross about it and he tried at least. Especially since I feel he did right by Kira and Art3mis. There is a running theme carried from the first book about sexism causing women's roles in history to be down played or even erased. They should have hammered it home a smidge more at the end though but again, too many big topics are covered to go deeper on nearly all of them.
Honestly though I think the ending redeemed this book (mostly). I got misty eyed over parts of the ending. I didn't expect all of what happened and was pleasantly surprised by a few things. The book has good parts it's just clunky. After I struggled through the first 100ish pages tit gained enough momentum that I burned through the rest in less than 2 days.
For fans of the first book hungry for more (even though it had a perfect ending) and willing to hold out for the ending.
3.5 stars
Content Warnings
Moderate: Confinement, Death of parent, Cursing, Death, Grief, and Violence
Minor: Addiction, Drug abuse, Drug use, Panic attacks/disorders, and Toxic relationship
hillarydanielle's review against another edition
adventurous
emotional
lighthearted
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
Content Warnings
Graphic: Death of parent, Grief, and Stalking
Moderate: Death, Sexism, and Toxic relationship
Minor: Drug abuse and Drug use
marmmatto0's review against another edition
adventurous
funny
inspiring
reflective
slow-paced
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
This book is good. But, i can't stand how Ernest over describes EVERYTHING in this book like. I like immersion, but over describing a setting only makes the reading tiresome and heavy. Is the story enjoyable? leaving two chapters The pretty in pink shard, and the incredibly boring prince shard (i spent weeks trying to end this chapter because of how tedious it was to read it) every other one was really really enjoyable and i had a lot of fun. Though i gotta say... The end... doesn't sit right with me idk.
Do i recommend this book? If you enjoyed the first book, yes absolutely, if you didn't... i'm so sorry but it only gets worse.
3.75 / 5
Do i recommend this book? If you enjoyed the first book, yes absolutely, if you didn't... i'm so sorry but it only gets worse.
3.75 / 5
Content Warnings
Graphic: Deadnaming, Eating disorder, Toxic relationship, and Panic attacks/disorders
Minor: Bullying, Cancer, Suicide, and Suicidal thoughts
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