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fionamclary's review
adventurous
dark
emotional
funny
lighthearted
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
This book was funny and full of heart. I loved our main characters and especially related to Mallory given that a chronic illness has been increasingly disabling me for the past year and a half. I enjoyed the take on a magical culture/society that maps nicely onto the human diversity of the real world.
However, I found the lore to be frustratingly thin. It didn't make sense to me how many seemingly basic aspects of magic were unknown to Occulture before the events of the story(such as spells and people being able to travel via witchlight) , and the history of the Ternion remained vague and confusing throughout. It meant that by the end I still didn't understand what it would actually mean for someone to summon or join the Ternion , and what the motivation/thought process would be that would lead someone to this decision. I also felt that the details of how the ritual murders themselves worked were very poorly fleshed out. E.g. how does one make the death blade ? How does it work? This was super frustrating and majorly detracted from the quality of the story. However, I think this author has a lot of potential, and I'd be intrigued if a second book happens, as the ending of this book seemed to be allowing for. There's still some mysteries unsolved!
Also, I really want a movie version now just so that Nathan Foad can play Theodore. I think that would go so hard.
However, I found the lore to be frustratingly thin. It didn't make sense to me how many seemingly basic aspects of magic were unknown to Occulture before the events of the story
Also, I really want a movie version now just so that Nathan Foad can play Theodore. I think that would go so hard.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Chronic illness, Death, Grief, Injury/Injury detail, and Kidnapping
Moderate: Animal death, Ableism, Toxic relationship, Blood, Body horror, Cursing, and Murder
Minor: Medical content, Stalking, Fire/Fire injury, Infidelity, and Violence
lbelow's review
adventurous
emotional
funny
lighthearted
mysterious
medium-paced
5.0
I am a person with fibromyalgia in a flare reading about a fantasy character with fibromyalgia fighting off a flare and it is everything. This book made me feel so seen! I love the complex relationships between Mallory and her friends, and how they all vow to do better in the future. I love the little nuances sprinkled through that seem inconsequential but become turning points in the book. I love the humour and the love and the depiction of grief. Everything, EVERYTHING in this book was just magical!
Content Warnings
Graphic: Alcohol, Animal death, Blood, Chronic illness, Ableism, Grief, Kidnapping, Medical content, Toxic relationship, Violence, Cursing, Death, and Murder
displacedcactus's review against another edition
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
This could have been a perfectly OK debut novel except the main character did something crappy for a crappy reason which I found pretty unforgiveable and her friend who she did it to completely forgave her without even a proper grovel.
Spoilers ahoy!
Due to a chronic pain condition, the MC has been kind of left behind by her friends, and one night she's holding the queen of her friend's beloved magic beetle colony and the beetle bites her, and she SQUISHES THE BEETLE QUEEN which causes the rest of the beetles to go into a frenzy, killing each other, and the survivors go dormant waiting for a new queen to emerge. It takes her DAYS to confess to doing this, at which point her friend was all "Oh I already knew you did it because of how sad and guilty you looked anytime someone mentioned the beetles, and I understand you did it because Other Friend and I went to a concert without you, it's ok, I forgive you." And I was like "DOUBLE YOU TEE EFF in what world is it ok to KILL SOMEONE'S PET because you're sad your friends have fun without you?"
Like seriously. If Mallory had killed a cat or a dog, no reader would forgive that. But because it's "just a bug" it's ok? But it's not ok. It wouldn't be OK if someone was upset at being left out by their friends and smashed one friend's car up, or destroyed their favorite sweater or deleted their video game file, let alone killing an important if miniscule living creature, causing serious damage to that creature's colony.
I almost DNFed right when the beetle squishing happened, but I kept reading, because the way it was written with a bit of distance, I almost thought that it would come out that some magic was making her extra volatile, but no. We're never given a satisfying reason beyond "I was pain and my life sucks and my friends have fun without me and this tiny animal did me a tiny hurt so I killed it."
Spoilers ahoy!
Like seriously. If Mallory had killed a cat or a dog, no reader would forgive that. But because it's "just a bug" it's ok? But it's not ok. It wouldn't be OK if someone was upset at being left out by their friends and smashed one friend's car up, or destroyed their favorite sweater or deleted their video game file, let alone killing an important if miniscule living creature, causing serious damage to that creature's colony.
I almost DNFed right when the beetle squishing happened, but I kept reading, because the way it was written with a bit of distance, I almost thought that it would come out that some magic was making her extra volatile, but no. We're never given a satisfying reason beyond "I was pain and my life sucks and my friends have fun without me and this tiny animal did me a tiny hurt so I killed it."
Content Warnings
Graphic: Injury/Injury detail, Violence, Death, Animal death, and Chronic illness
Moderate: Cursing
purplepenning's review
adventurous
dark
emotional
funny
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
3.5
A unique serial killer thriller in an urban fantasy setting that follows a trio of Gen-Z magical folk as they investigate — a fresh, spooky season read for murder mystery fans!
I picked it up for the tagline: "Be Gay. Solve crimes. Take naps." The writing didn't immediately click for me because I couldn't quite get a feel for the setting and characters, but I stuck with it for the absurdly endearing character of Theodore (an irrepressible ghost stuck in the ridiculous cat costume he died in on Halloween), the excellently portrayed chronic pain rep, and the Gen Z voice of it all. By the end, I found myself hoping that this is going to be the first in a series.
I picked it up for the tagline: "Be Gay. Solve crimes. Take naps." The writing didn't immediately click for me because I couldn't quite get a feel for the setting and characters, but I stuck with it for the absurdly endearing character of Theodore (an irrepressible ghost stuck in the ridiculous cat costume he died in on Halloween), the excellently portrayed chronic pain rep, and the Gen Z voice of it all. By the end, I found myself hoping that this is going to be the first in a series.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Death, Murder, Body horror, and Chronic illness
Moderate: Animal cruelty, Toxic relationship, Violence, Blood, Grief, Ableism, Animal death, Classism, Confinement, Cursing, Gore, Infidelity, Injury/Injury detail, Kidnapping, and Medical content
Minor: Alcohol
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