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3.54 AVERAGE
3.54 AVERAGE
emotional
fast-paced
I haven’t cried reading a book in a fat minute. This was one hell of an emotional rollercoaster, y’all. You could feel the tension, the guilt, the passion but I just don’t know if I feel like he deserved or earned her forgiveness. I think she will always feel insecure in their relationship because of him.
Smut is A1 though 😙😙 real fucking spicy fs
Smut is A1 though 😙😙 real fucking spicy fs
hopeful
sad
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
A mix
Strong character development:
No
Loveable characters:
Yes
It’s a good read. Lana was so stubborn. I know she become that way to protect herself but still. Connor is a bit dense. Seriously man just bite her.
Not enough groveling from Connor. I want that boy pathetically begging for an ounce of her time and energy. I wanted to see more of him actually apologizing through actions rather than punching his dad.
The author could definitely take some time to review and edit the story. There’s a few random fancy words thrown in the first chapter that (ex. verboten) yet that style of writing doesn’t match the later chapters. Also, there’s quite a few sentences missing punctuation, namely periods at the end of sentences. And the MMA scene at the end felt out of place. That chapter could be used for something like Connor groveling!
Also, “dick thick as a Coke can” isn’t attractive. I get that omegaverse is supposed to be anatomically different but the smut was just…eh. Like I don’t understand how Lana was feeling pleasure half the time.
The author could definitely take some time to review and edit the story. There’s a few random fancy words thrown in the first chapter that (ex. verboten) yet that style of writing doesn’t match the later chapters. Also, there’s quite a few sentences missing punctuation, namely periods at the end of sentences. And the MMA scene at the end felt out of place. That chapter could be used for something like Connor groveling!
Also, “dick thick as a Coke can” isn’t attractive. I get that omegaverse is supposed to be anatomically different but the smut was just…eh. Like I don’t understand how Lana was feeling pleasure half the time.
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
A mix
Strong character development:
No
Loveable characters:
No
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Character
Strong character development:
No
Loveable characters:
Complicated
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
adventurous
emotional
hopeful
sad
tense
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Character
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
medium-paced
3.25 stars for the story overall, but 5 stars for hitting the “rejected omega” brief. This took me back to my fanfic reading days, when I used to filter for “angst”.
fast-paced
slow-paced