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Stay with Me

Nicole Fiorina

3.97 AVERAGE

challenging dark emotional hopeful inspiring reflective sad tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

what in the Harry styles drug lord fanfic is this

Stay With Me
Nicole Fiorina
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dark tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

This is very over the top and dramatic. But I had fun with it, i honestly do not believe relationship bc they were “in love”
In a week lol but I like the suspense element. 

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Such a great story. Tugged at me heartstrings (tears fell... more than once) and left me needing to turn the pages! Onto the second book I go..... !

• 4/5 ⭐ • 2.5/5

tayhesk's review against another edition

DID NOT FINISH: 61%

I don’t think I can emotionally handle this book right now
challenging dark emotional hopeful inspiring reflective sad tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: N/A
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

I really loved these characters. Ollie and Mia are so real! The author's talent really shines in the emotional and traumatic aspect of the story, and I love the poetic descriptions.

This book would've been 5 stars, except for a few major issues. First, the side characters were more like cardboard cutouts next to Ollie and Mia. Second, the whole book needs editing. Seriously! There's a lot of repetition that should have been edited out. Most notably, when Mia remembers her past. That chapter was an emotional punch, but then I had to read the whole story again a second time when she revealed it to Ollie. Not only did I not want to read that a second time, but it lacked the emotional punch I'm pretty sure the author was going for because of the repetition. There were several smaller bits that seemed repetitive also, and several inconsistencies that could have been caught by a good editor, like in one scene Ollie was in his underwear, but in the next paragraph, he was in sweatpants. This is an amazing story that just needs some polishing.

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