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fangirljeanne's review
2.0
This was fun and surprisingly accurate with the BDSM, for the most part. It is an office romance (Boss and employee) with a dash of light BDSM play for flavor. The characters were likable, though not relatable for me, but that has more about me than the characters/writing.
While Mona (aka Ms. Whitman) had never experienced BDSM play prior to the start of the story, she was well versed in it thanks to porn. This won her a lot of points from me, because I’m sick and tired of all the wide-eye, innocent, female leads who somehow make it into adult life with absolutely no contact with pornography or masturbation. Not Mona. She’s knows what she likes and isn't afraid of asking for it. Oh boy does she ask for it.
Mr. Marks resembles the typical buttoned-down alpha male of most office sex romps, only he’s hiding a secret in his private office bathroom (namely a play kit that would make most sexual Dominants green with envy). He’s well versed in the scene and hesitant to mix business with this very private part of his personal life.
It was refreshing to read about a Dom/Boss in a position of power who never crosses or even skirts that sexist, dickbag threshold that most Alpha males in these kinds of romances always piss on. He is strong, restrained, but also so very into Mona’s curves.
Oh, yes. She’s curvy and sassy, and these are the things he loves about her. See, I like that a lot and it made me enjoy them.
If those are things you want in a smutty, fun with some light BDSM than this is the book for you.
However, I should point out that this book needs a good editing. Sentences ended with prepositions, some of the phrasing was confusing and words were used incorrectly. It happened often enough to pull me out of the story.
It isn’t horrible. I've read worse, but I wish that it wasn’t there so I could give the book a higher rating. I know a lot of friends who would really love this book if the errors weren’t there.
Still, if you don’t mind these kinds of things then I suggest you give the book a read. It is smutty fun, with likable characters and sexy spanking play.
While Mona (aka Ms. Whitman) had never experienced BDSM play prior to the start of the story, she was well versed in it thanks to porn. This won her a lot of points from me, because I’m sick and tired of all the wide-eye, innocent, female leads who somehow make it into adult life with absolutely no contact with pornography or masturbation. Not Mona. She’s knows what she likes and isn't afraid of asking for it. Oh boy does she ask for it.
Mr. Marks resembles the typical buttoned-down alpha male of most office sex romps, only he’s hiding a secret in his private office bathroom (namely a play kit that would make most sexual Dominants green with envy). He’s well versed in the scene and hesitant to mix business with this very private part of his personal life.
It was refreshing to read about a Dom/Boss in a position of power who never crosses or even skirts that sexist, dickbag threshold that most Alpha males in these kinds of romances always piss on. He is strong, restrained, but also so very into Mona’s curves.
Oh, yes. She’s curvy and sassy, and these are the things he loves about her. See, I like that a lot and it made me enjoy them.
If those are things you want in a smutty, fun with some light BDSM than this is the book for you.
However, I should point out that this book needs a good editing. Sentences ended with prepositions, some of the phrasing was confusing and words were used incorrectly. It happened often enough to pull me out of the story.
It isn’t horrible. I've read worse, but I wish that it wasn’t there so I could give the book a higher rating. I know a lot of friends who would really love this book if the errors weren’t there.
Still, if you don’t mind these kinds of things then I suggest you give the book a read. It is smutty fun, with likable characters and sexy spanking play.
avocadoeverything's review
2.0
I'm not really sure why this even qualifies as a book instead of just a short story. It took all of 15 minutes to read and is marginally fair spanking porn.
I suppose we have Fifty Shades of Grey to thank for this, but at least that was an actual book and made efforts at having a plot.
I suppose we have Fifty Shades of Grey to thank for this, but at least that was an actual book and made efforts at having a plot.
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