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4.0 AVERAGE
4.0 AVERAGE
I’ve come to realize I’m not the biggest fantasy book fan. This book took me a bit to get into but there end had some good stuff. I believe this is a trilogy so I need to read the rest now so hopefully it gets better. Avry and Kerrick are a dynamic duo and I need to see how they work things out.
This book was absolutely beautiful! Love everything about it. From the adventure to the romance, everything was written so perfectly! Definitely a five star read!!!
adventurous
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
A mix
Strong character development:
No
Loveable characters:
No
Diverse cast of characters:
N/A
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
adventurous
dark
emotional
hopeful
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Plot
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
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I actually had to double check that this book was by Maria V. Snyder because, uhm, what happened to her writing? I adore her first novel, Poison Study, though I adored its sequels slightly less, and while I haven't read the Glass series or the Insider duo, I was looking forward to this one. I just don't understand what happened! The book was a sloppy mess, and Snyder's writing seems to have de-matured between Poison Study and Touch of Power. Touch of Power just seemed like a slapdash collection of plot elements, including:
-flower that may or may not be able to kill you
-eleven types of magic, many of which seem to contradict each other and none of which are properly explained
-multiple princes
-a religious cult
-fifteen realms, one of which randomly has a president that is very out of place
-way too many caves
-a plague that kills anyone who tries to cure it
-a missing sibling
-zombies
-a romance that doesn't really ring true
So. While I liked how healing magic works in Touch of Power, with a healer assuming an injured/sick person's maladies and then healing herself by just getting better ten times faster than a normal person would, that was pretty much the only good part of this book. Everything else just feels like Snyder cobbled together a bunch of different story lines, any one of which would have made a respectable novel of its own. It just felt like this wasn't actually the novel Snyder wanted to write. I couldn't decide if she wanted to write a zombie novel, a school story about the children of powerful/royal families, a book about a plague-ravaged land, a tale of rescuing a lost sibling, a narrative of struggle about coming to terms with a hated power, or a chronicle of trying to bring down an evil king. All of those were present here, and it was just too much. Not a single aspect was explored fully, leaving the book a hurried rush from one plot element to the next without anything actually being settled.
Additionally, every single one of the characters in this book lacks dimension. They are all single-faceted, which makes their "growth" come across as false, especially Kerrick. What was up with that sudden romance? While it's not insta-romance in the sense that they fall in love right away, when it does happen, it's pretty instantaneous, with no build or maturation of the relationship at all. And while Avry is a perfectly nice protagonist, she isn't someone you can really root for, because she's not really struggling. She's just kind of there. We're just supposed to accept that Avry is Special, and that is why everything goes right for her.
Speaking of that, what was with that ending? I have NEVER seen a more blatant cop out on explanation. NEV. ER.
Overall, while I'm kind of curious as to what Avry &. Co. will get up to next, I'm not curious enough to slog through another of these when there's much better stuff out there.
I actually had to double check that this book was by Maria V. Snyder because, uhm, what happened to her writing? I adore her first novel, Poison Study, though I adored its sequels slightly less, and while I haven't read the Glass series or the Insider duo, I was looking forward to this one. I just don't understand what happened! The book was a sloppy mess, and Snyder's writing seems to have de-matured between Poison Study and Touch of Power. Touch of Power just seemed like a slapdash collection of plot elements, including:
-flower that may or may not be able to kill you
-eleven types of magic, many of which seem to contradict each other and none of which are properly explained
-multiple princes
-a religious cult
-fifteen realms, one of which randomly has a president that is very out of place
-way too many caves
-a plague that kills anyone who tries to cure it
-a missing sibling
-zombies
-a romance that doesn't really ring true
So. While I liked how healing magic works in Touch of Power, with a healer assuming an injured/sick person's maladies and then healing herself by just getting better ten times faster than a normal person would, that was pretty much the only good part of this book. Everything else just feels like Snyder cobbled together a bunch of different story lines, any one of which would have made a respectable novel of its own. It just felt like this wasn't actually the novel Snyder wanted to write. I couldn't decide if she wanted to write a zombie novel, a school story about the children of powerful/royal families, a book about a plague-ravaged land, a tale of rescuing a lost sibling, a narrative of struggle about coming to terms with a hated power, or a chronicle of trying to bring down an evil king. All of those were present here, and it was just too much. Not a single aspect was explored fully, leaving the book a hurried rush from one plot element to the next without anything actually being settled.
Additionally, every single one of the characters in this book lacks dimension. They are all single-faceted, which makes their "growth" come across as false, especially Kerrick. What was up with that sudden romance? While it's not insta-romance in the sense that they fall in love right away, when it does happen, it's pretty instantaneous, with no build or maturation of the relationship at all. And while Avry is a perfectly nice protagonist, she isn't someone you can really root for, because she's not really struggling. She's just kind of there. We're just supposed to accept that Avry is Special, and that is why everything goes right for her.
Speaking of that, what was with that ending? I have NEVER seen a more blatant cop out on explanation. NEV. ER.
Overall, while I'm kind of curious as to what Avry &. Co. will get up to next, I'm not curious enough to slog through another of these when there's much better stuff out there.
I did like the book, the plot was good and pacing as well as the characters. Yet there were so many things that didn't work for me like the love interest who was abusive at worst and inconsiderate at best. The dialogue was weird and too modern for a fantasy book, there were so many modern sayings and modern devices that just felt really out of place in a fantasy book like curling irons and hair dyes.
I did like the magic system and the different types of mages that went beyond the normal water, fire, earth and air, there were death and life magicians as well as forest and moon magicians all with really interesting abilities. I'll probably pick up the next book in the series soon
I did like the magic system and the different types of mages that went beyond the normal water, fire, earth and air, there were death and life magicians as well as forest and moon magicians all with really interesting abilities. I'll probably pick up the next book in the series soon
Recommended to all you YA fantasy fans out there!
Great character dynamics. Slow burn hate-to-love romance, understandably flawed main love interest, a truly upsettling villain. ;)
Great character dynamics. Slow burn hate-to-love romance, understandably flawed main love interest, a truly upsettling villain. ;)