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Graphic: Physical abuse, Rape, Sexual assault, Slavery, Torture, Toxic relationship, Violence, Medical trauma, Murder, War
#𝚛𝚘𝚖𝚊𝚗𝚝𝚊𝚜𝚢 𝚜𝚎𝚛𝚒𝚎𝚜 • #𝚍𝚊𝚛𝚔 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚖𝚎𝚜
♡₊˚⊹ Top tier romantasy: loved the writing, felt invested in the leads. This takes obvious inspiration the handmaids tale, so do mind the trigger warnings. although it’s low spice, there’s lots of slow burning tension.
I will comment for those wondering how close this is to the original fanfic, that as someone who hadn’t read the auction, I wouldn’t have known this was based on dramione had I not been told. The world has been changed significantly to the point that this felt more like a new romantasy world, not at all related to muggles or even the magic system.
Cons: Because the world is so changed, side characters would benefit from additional development. It was hard to logic out their motivations. Finally, the ending is very abrupt and to be continued... in book 2.
▶︎ •၊၊||၊|။||။|• 🎧 Great narration by Ella Lynch on audio! Easy to follow and love her accent.
Graphic: Misogyny, Rape, Sexism
I will admit the magic system and the world is interesting, at first glance at least. Then you keep on reading and it just falls apart: mind reading? Metamorphosis? Mind magic and heart magic? Come on, it’s Harry Potter reworked, and not very successfully nor creatively.
This was a watered down version of Manacled that doesn’t even begin to compare. It lacks the depth and complexity of the characters and their motivations, which are absent at best and replaced by horny teenager attitude at worst (the characters are supposed to be 25 and over, mind you).
I was intrigued at first, but it just kept getting worse and worse. It completely lost me when we spent half a chapter discussing blowjobs without any reason for it, and without any actually happening. Pair that with the “virginity magically extracted to keep us unnecessarily waiting for a sex scene long overdue, and kept in a jar by the bedside table” (I’m serious), and you begin to understand this raging review.
There were several moments where blood purity was mentioned either directly or indirectly, which shows the lack of effort put into actually making this story its own.
So many plot holes, not enough time: why would the countries want to subjugate one another? Why the ruthlessness in the treatment of the losing side of the war? What makes the two countries so different and opposed besides what kind of magic they use? Speaking of which, what’s the difference between heart magic and mind magic, besides the source? How do we go from centuries of cohabitation and mutual respect to “let’s kill and abuse them in every way imaginable”? There’s no motive for this war besides a prophecy from 600 years ago, which also means there’s no actual commentary about ruthless war and it’s consequences to everyone involved. This is the least I expect in a book this dark, but alas, I was left wanting (and infuriated for it, tbh).
This also applies to every character’s motivations (Serena excluded. She was the only interesting character and I want to know more about her).
The FMC was insufferable to say the least. I lost count at how many times I said “how dumber can you be?” and “did you really need to ask that?” to myself about her while listening to this book. She embodies the worst character traits of Hermione Granger (special emphasis on the entitled and bratty ones), with none of her wit, intelligence, moral ambiguity and maturity, which are actually what defines her and makes her interesting as a character in fanfic lore (Fuck JKR, no TERFS here, thanks)
The same goes for the MMC: boring as a wet cloth and as transparent in their intentions and motivations as see through fabric (to everyone except the FMC apparently). We just know from the very beginning he’s playing a part when it comes to the winning side of the war. Again, there’s no grey scale for morals here, because there isn’t (and I bet my ass there won’t be) a redemption arc: it’s not possible when the narrative is “he was one of the good ones all along”.
At least he didn’t infuriate me with stupid questions, since he was just there to be though of as hot and *complicated* by the FMC, so there’s that I guess.
This shouldn’t have been traditionally published because it doesn’t stand on its own: the world building was interesting but lacking in depth and, well, building, and because the references to the Harry Potter universe are so prominent you just know who the characters are supposed to be in the original fanfic (Rory, really?) without having read said fanfic.
Even the “plot twists” were literally the same as in HP canon
The spice itself, sparse as it was, was cringe as fuck. There’s no tension and therefore no payoff: we’re supposed to believe the main characters have been lusting and having a crush on each other for years, but that attraction is not believable at all as we don’t know these people (Again, it relies heavily on the character depth and shared history Draco and Hermione have in fanfic lore, which doesn’t and shouldn’t be needed here for the reader to connect to the characters).
I don’t really think the slave/ slave master relationship applies here because beside the auction scene (awful and dehumanizing as it is), and the MMC being a bit of a bully in school to the FMC (not that I’m excusing bullying in any way, but this is a dark romantasy), that dynamic is nonexistent between our main characters.
The MMC just ignores her or looks at her in silence for the majority of the book, honestly.
However, We can see that specific dynamic between other characters in the book, especially in the revel scenes, but those are not romanticized at all but exposed for what they are, if heavy handedly.
The emotional reaction of the FMC to all the dark things she witnesses and all that she has lost is pretty inconsistent:
Also, miraculously, none of the heavy and dark situations in the story really touches the FMC, only the people around her. What a surprise.
Most importantly, None, and I mean NONE of the pretty grim themes in this book get addressed with the nuance and the thoughtfulness that they require: rape, forced sterilization, physical and mental abuse, slavery, forced drug induced submission, etc. This things just *happen* and then are forgotten about both by the FMC and the people they happened to in the first place.
For example, Larissa (Pansy 🙄) is drugged and raped with the consent of her father at the beginning of the book. Then she just reappears later on and is not worse for wear because of it. It’s as if it never happened, and it doesn’t get mentioned again.
We as the reader are more traumatized about this horrendous and vile things done to women than the women they happen to.
Ridiculous and an obvious use of violence against women as background for a supposed love story that isn’t even good.
Which takes me to the conflict and the distrust between the MMC and the FMC: it doesn’t feel real at all because there is NO conflict: all she does is ask him questions (obvious and unnecessary ones) and she just trusts he’s being honest. On his part, he tells her everything she wants to know, even though they’re supposed to be on opposite sides of a war. Sure, why not.
I could keep going but I would just repeat myself, so I’ll end with this: If you haven’t read any Dramione fanfic at all, are new to romantasy and want to read a darker take on some tropes, you could enjoy this book. However, If you’re planning to read this because you love Dramione, save yourself the trouble,
it’s not worth it.
All in all, I wouldn’t recommend it and I will not be continuing with the series.
Lesson learned: Julie Soto is definitely not for me.
Moderate: Infertility, Physical abuse, Rape, Violence
Graphic: Death, Infertility, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Rape, Sexism, Sexual content, Sexual violence, Slavery, Violence, Medical content, Medical trauma, Death of parent, Murder, War, Injury/Injury detail, Classism
Moderate: Bullying, Cursing, Emotional abuse, Blood, Grief, Alcohol
Graphic: Sexual assault, Sexual content, Slavery, Trafficking
Moderate: Death, Gore, Rape
Minor: Death of parent, War
Graphic: Rape, Sexual assault, Slavery, Murder
Graphic: Slavery, Violence, Trafficking
Moderate: Emotional abuse, Sexual assault, War
Minor: Rape, Grief, Death of parent, Pregnancy
Make sure to check out the content warnings because this book has a lot going on.
Graphic: Bullying, Death, Infertility, Misogyny, Slavery, Torture, Violence, Blood, Grief, Medical trauma, Death of parent, Murder, Abandonment, War, Injury/Injury detail, Classism
Moderate: Rape, Sexual content
Graphic: Death
Moderate: Rape, Sexual assault
Graphic: Bullying, Child death, Domestic abuse, Genocide, Infertility, Miscarriage, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Rape, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Slavery, Violence, Grief, Death of parent, Pregnancy