2.91 AVERAGE

dark mysterious sad slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
dark mysterious fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

This was not my favorite story in the Shivers collection. In this workplace horror story one employee seems to be seeing horrible accidents before they happen. Are they just tricks of the light or something more. The writing was disjointed and did not flow smoothly. Since it was a short short too much time was spent on characters and events not necessary to the story. 
dark tense fast-paced

carly13lynn's review

2.0

Maybe even a 1.5??? It’s a no from me.
dark sad fast-paced

bookedalexc36's review


audio
quick read
supposed to be spooky-bits and pieces- no story
dark emotional funny fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: N/A
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: N/A
Flaws of characters a main focus: N/A
dark mysterious fast-paced
dark sad tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
adventurous dark slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

I know all these short stories were written by different authors, but compared to the first one, this just did not do it for me. The scariest thing about it was the thought of working in an office building and attending conferences all day.