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3.58 AVERAGE
3.58 AVERAGE
Contender for the worst book I've ever read. The mmc is literally attracted to her only sexually in almost all of the book. Their pet names are so damn cringe and every conversation they have felt super awkward. I rated it 1 only cause there isn't an option to rate 0. With that being said, I am not continuing to read the rest of the series.
Okay let me just say… this book was pure insta-lust and insta-love (both by wrong with that) but:
- the writing felt a bit off to me and took me out of the fantasy
- he kept calling her goddess like every 5 secs
- mafia where?
- him being a boxer was like an afterthought almost….?
- the surprise pregnancy was like “oh… oh…. we doing this now… okay….”
- the ex, that entire storyline was just WOWZA
Anyways, the plot did hook me in and I am invested in Maddie and Grayson in this will-they-won’t-they so catch me continue reading this series
- the writing felt a bit off to me and took me out of the fantasy
- he kept calling her goddess like every 5 secs
- mafia where?
- him being a boxer was like an afterthought almost….?
- the surprise pregnancy was like “oh… oh…. we doing this now… okay….”
- the ex, that entire storyline was just WOWZA
Anyways, the plot did hook me in and I am invested in Maddie and Grayson in this will-they-won’t-they so catch me continue reading this series
I devoured this book and finished it in one day. This is my second Luna Mason book and she doesn’t disappoint.
Our FMC, Sienna, is finally done moping about finding her fiancé cheating on her and decides to have a night out. While at the club, she accidentally stumbles into Keller. He’s our MMC - club owner, boxer, mafia enforcer, billionaire, playboy, philanthropist.
I loved their story and how they helped each other find their self-worth. He definitely falls first
Our FMC, Sienna, is finally done moping about finding her fiancé cheating on her and decides to have a night out. While at the club, she accidentally stumbles into Keller. He’s our MMC - club owner, boxer, mafia enforcer, billionaire, playboy, philanthropist.
I loved their story and how they helped each other find their self-worth. He definitely falls first
DNF at 65% - every smut scene is exactly the same. There's zero tension or build up. I don't care about any of the characters.
dark
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Character
Strong character development:
No
Loveable characters:
Complicated
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
What I liked:
- Solid writing, actually
- I actually liked Sienna and Keller as characters
- the background attributed to Sienna and Keller and how it impacts their adult behavior
- the boxer scenario
- Max
What I didn’t like:
- insta-love
- pregnancy trope (I hate it like 90% of the time outside of an epilogue)
- “I’m 11 inches” Oh, ok.
Overall:
This was easy to read, but there were too many elements of the plot I didn’t super love so this is a solid 2.5 for me.
- Solid writing, actually
- I actually liked Sienna and Keller as characters
- the background attributed to Sienna and Keller and how it impacts their adult behavior
- the boxer scenario
- Max
What I didn’t like:
- pregnancy trope (I hate it like 90% of the time outside of an epilogue)
- “I’m 11 inches” Oh, ok.
Overall:
This was easy to read, but there were too many elements of the plot I didn’t super love so this is a solid 2.5 for me.
dark
fast-paced
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
I enjoyed myself with this book. I wish there were more Mafia moments, that was fun, could've been funner. Also, this might be the first book where I think it needed more plot and less smut. Don't get me wrong, I love a good smutty book, but it was like all the scenes were the same here. Gimme some variety at least if it's gonna be this smutty.
Finally entered the Beneath Universe. I think I already love it here.