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honeysbookobsession's review
3.0
Okay.
It was okay. Very fast and sometimes hard to follow who said what. The sex scenes were okay as well but you can't expect much when the story is so short. I wish it was longer even though I know there are other parts to the story. I just wanted more depth.
It was okay. Very fast and sometimes hard to follow who said what. The sex scenes were okay as well but you can't expect much when the story is so short. I wish it was longer even though I know there are other parts to the story. I just wanted more depth.
mousegoddess's review
2.0
Look if you're not going to bother paying an editor don't ask your readers to do it for free. There were typos and tense errors galore and at the end the author had an email address for reader corrections. The core of the story was fine, the characters barely developed, typos ridiculous, and there's no way I'm spending money on the next installment.
danaichristopoulou's review
2.0
Although the premise itself was not bad and I found some parts of it entertaining, the overall feeling was that of reading a first, rough draft. I was equally surprised by the lack of editing as I was by what I can only call "jump-cuts" between plot points. It felt as if I was only reading parts of the book and that's a pity because I think I would have liked to read the full, edited one :-)
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