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3.35 AVERAGE
3.35 AVERAGE
This feels like a bad rough draft.
It's a vomited collection of every possible petname Death could use on the FMC, about 3 different directions for where the FMC's development arc might stem from, and a very rough outline of a love story that is meant to be romantic and deep.
Oh and sprinkle in gratuitous DP with Death and his shadow.
I don't care or know any of the characters, a lot of the writing has the potential to read well but lands flat every time, I don't understand why Death wouldn't take Lilith or why exactly he "chose" her after the accident or why he randomly disappeared at times when she needed him.
It has potential if it were a first draft. Nearly every facet of the story, characters, and plot needs to be fleshed out more, and for the spice to really "spice" for me, it needs to feel purposeful.
1.5 ⭐ 2
It's a vomited collection of every possible petname Death could use on the FMC, about 3 different directions for where the FMC's development arc might stem from, and a very rough outline of a love story that is meant to be romantic and deep.
Oh and sprinkle in gratuitous DP with Death and his shadow.
I don't care or know any of the characters, a lot of the writing has the potential to read well but lands flat every time, I don't understand why Death wouldn't take Lilith or why exactly he "chose" her after the accident or why he randomly disappeared at times when she needed him.
It has potential if it were a first draft. Nearly every facet of the story, characters, and plot needs to be fleshed out more, and for the spice to really "spice" for me, it needs to feel purposeful.
1.5 ⭐ 2
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Plot
Loveable characters:
Yes
Damn.
The definition of shadow daddy lies in this book
dark
emotional
sad
tense
medium-paced
dark
mysterious
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Character
Strong character development:
No
Loveable characters:
No
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
No
Content Warnings
Graphic: Sexual content
Moderate: Death, Car accident
Minor: Infidelity, Gaslighting
dark
dark
emotional
tense
fast-paced
i’m ashamed to say i read this in full and somewhat enjoyed it.
Great cover, great name. I don't enjoy first person's thoughts narratives. It's like hanging out with a narcissist who talks to much. I also should start paying attention to the number of pages a book has. I was unaware that this is a short story and I felt like I'd been thrown into the middle of the story.