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livlamentloathe's review against another edition
3.25
I would like to start this review by pointing out that most of the angry one-star reviewers are over the top. This is not a simple story with black-and-white characters. Although there are blurred lines, there is no cheating. I think context is important to this story—there is a lot going on underneath the obvious. And it’s easy as heck to judge from behind a computer a world away. There are real feelings displayed by the story. And I think the characters were equally real.
I can’t tell if the lingo is just out of date or if the dialogue felt uneasy. There was a lot of slang that didn’t feel natural, BUT I’m very white and I know how white people will steal from black culture and burn it into the ground. So I cannot speak on it much, but it’s possible the lingo IS true to the characters, and I’ve just been burnt out on its use by other white people.
I think I wanted a bit more of a natural flow to the relationship between Feyi and Alim. They barely knew one another! I think the before: them joking or discussing things, etc. could’ve made it feel smoother.
As it was, their relationship did seem unfair to pursue over his children. I was kind of with them. Although they were entirely unfair to Feyi. Nasir, especially, really frustrated me. He acted like a fuckboy when she didn’t deserve that. Also I’m annoyed with how the kids had handled (and continued to handle) their father’s sexuality.
All that aside, I think this was a lovely book about the tide of grief and loss. How it never goes away; just recedes temporarily.
I can’t tell if the lingo is just out of date or if the dialogue felt uneasy. There was a lot of slang that didn’t feel natural, BUT I’m very white and I know how white people will steal from black culture and burn it into the ground. So I cannot speak on it much, but it’s possible the lingo IS true to the characters, and I’ve just been burnt out on its use by other white people.
I think I wanted a bit more of a natural flow to the relationship between Feyi and Alim. They barely knew one another! I think the before: them joking or discussing things, etc. could’ve made it feel smoother.
All that aside, I think this was a lovely book about the tide of grief and loss. How it never goes away; just recedes temporarily.
Graphic: Grief
Moderate: Car accident, Biphobia, and Homophobia
zelinacarstens's review against another edition
emotional
funny
hopeful
reflective
relaxing
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
fountain_of_book's review against another edition
adventurous
emotional
funny
hopeful
inspiring
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
teensyslews's review against another edition
adventurous
challenging
dark
emotional
reflective
relaxing
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
elianneyoung010's review against another edition
emotional
hopeful
inspiring
sad
fast-paced
5.0
Such beautiful writing! I love dense romance that's different than expected <3
ellaluka's review against another edition
2.75
just finished this & I was actually v disappointed.. I had been looking forward to this for so long.. I’ve realised I just don’t like reading about rich people & their extravagant lifestyles.. whole thing seemed v far-fetched.
also the same “should I, shoudn’t I” debate over & over
HOWEVER, the SMUT???!!! Excellent!!!! The kitchen scene! the mountain?!?? yes please & thank you! 🔥🔥🔥
also the same “should I, shoudn’t I” debate over & over
HOWEVER, the SMUT???!!! Excellent!!!! The kitchen scene! the mountain?!?? yes please & thank you! 🔥🔥🔥
hyac1nthgirl's review against another edition
emotional
lighthearted
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.5
i <3 feyi
reading her moving forward and acceptance of grief and all emotions was my favorite part of the book. i was refreshed by how mature she was throughout the book that i don't often see in romance. also... who doesn't love a little mess?!
reading her moving forward and acceptance of grief and all emotions was my favorite part of the book. i was refreshed by how mature she was throughout the book that i don't often see in romance. also... who doesn't love a little mess?!