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filipacarvalho's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
The tags are: soulmate au; popstar x hockey player/artist romance; texting; social media; no beta we die like men. And the rating, I would say, Teen and Up Audiences (I realize me saying it's a fanfic might make some people think it's filthy, but it's actually a closed-door romance).
The things I didn’t love: for me, the book is too long. I think it would've worked better if it had been edited down quite a bit. Because, and this is the second thing that wasn't my favourite, the book is all tell not show. To the point where in one chapter we're discussing something, and then in the next or a few chapters latter it's told to you that it’s been worked through and now is no longer a thing / issue.
One thing I noticed as well, is that the relationship is about 50% of the book, the other 50%, the main characters leading with their own stuff.
The social media bits were kinda fun and definitely rang true to what fandoms are like. Even if at times they were a little bit confusing (but I don't have twitter so that might be on me).
What I loved: I'M A SUCKER FOR SOULAMTE AU's. And that was what carried most of the book for me. AB and Mathew are very cute together, and the cast of characters around them was pretty fun as well (I would love a book about Maddie and Zoe!)
I love when characters get to know each other through texting, and even if it was so little here I still appreciate it.
I also loved Mathew's magic. Again, I'm a sucker for when characters have some sort of insight into their partners thoughts / feelings, so Mathew's ability to see sound was a really fun version of that.
About the magic system: at the beginning I just accepted that it was very cool and unique and I was never going to fully understand it. I just rolled with it. Because after all, this is a romance, and the only magic that mattered was the one directly linked to AB or Mathew.
I also want to point out, that this is a 'I thought I was straight until I met you' book. Not because of the soulmate bond which I appreciate the author not going for a 'oh shit, we're soulmates so now I HAVE to be gay' thing. But they do fall in love. Obviously. Again: romance.
The TL:DR is: I had a lot of fun with this book, because of specific things I love to read about. But I feel like this might not work for most of people.
Graphic: Biphobia and Homophobia
analenegrace's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.0
It just played too much into stereotypes and other things. also there were typos in the book and the magic system was wildly confusing and the world wasn't well built up.
Moderate: Homophobia and Biphobia
leolizard's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
2.5
Moderate: Biphobia and Homophobia
Minor: Sexual content
anna_wa's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
4.0
Matthew Hellman-Levoie is convinced he could not possibly be queer because he has seen enough men in his life as a hockey player that he feels he should've figured it out already - but then he meets AB Cerise. In the bathroom, of all the most romantic places to meet in. But you know, can't choose where or when you meet your soulmate.
Even though my review of "Love Blooms" didn't even exist yet in February, I feel like Hoyt still heard my gripes and fixed a LOT of them in this book. The world-building was superb; this time I actually felt like I knew what was going on all the way around her magical world. It felt very well thought out and created.
And another thing improving over her previous novel was that there were actual difficulties, there were actual misunderstandings and complications. The characters' anxieties actually made tangible sense to me and a lot of times I felt worried for them (and honestly, sometimes it's extremely hard to make anxiety make sense in writing because anxiety doesn't make sense a lot of times).
Holding this book to its own merit, separate from the author's previous work: I learned more about OCD thanks to this one book (even though I know a queer fantasy romance can't teach me everything about OCD, I still understand more now than I did before it started). I don't know that I learned very much more about hockey than what I knew before (which already wasn't much) but it was still endearing. I loved that Matthew also had an equal passion for art and used his superpower to make art (kind of like one of my artist friends with synesthesia, hehe).
I still feel like I can't give this a full five stars because, as much as I enjoyed the main characters, the magical world, and the concept, I feel Hoyt has a long way to go in way of learning how to show some things rather than just tell them. She is really really great at dialogue, but I couldn't help but feel some of the discussions the characters had about their fears could've been turned into scenes where they are confronted with those fears in real time.
And, just on a technical note, there were a lot of times where there were no dialogue tags for a few quotes in a row and I got confused on who was talking. It's not *always* necessary to add a dialogue tag if the same two people are talking to each other for long periods of time, but there were several moments where a lack of dialogue tags confused me a lot and I couldn't tell who was talking - or, also important, what tone they were saying it in. A lot of times the side characters felt a little mean?? to their best friends. And I know a certain amount of sarcasm and playful teasing is part of most friendships, but it just seemed like there were so many moments where the side characters were being unnecessarily aggressive - however, I could have also just read the tone incorrectly (which a dialogue tag would've helped with).
I thought the inclusion of the tweets by AB fans and Hockey fans was a nice touch and I enjoyed Victoria Newberry's illustrations a lot. I thought those tweets worked in some ways as showing rather than just telling (because rather than just talking about what the fans are saying, we SEE what the fans are saying).
(spoiler for ending right here)
All around, I enjoyed reading this book a lot and, as I said in my review of Love Blooms, Stephanie Hoyt is only going to continue getting better and better and I can't wait to see what magical genre-b(l)ending adventure she takes us on next! :) Highly recommend this for any fan of Check Please! or Heartstopper (but it's not a teen book. No, this is definitely not a teen book. Hahaha.)
Moderate: Cursing, Panic attacks/disorders, Sexual content, and Biphobia
Minor: Homophobia
sglance9's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Graphic: Homophobia and Biphobia
littlesmaug's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
For me, this was a wonderful read. I actually got all kinds of nervous when I clicked over to mark that I was reading this one and saw its relatively low ratings on Goodreads. But, I stuck to my guns, and didn't look at the reviews until going to post my own, because I really did enjoy this one.
What I found curious was the amount of people who DNFed so close to the beginning. Because I'll be the first to admit - that beginning <i>was</i> rough. It was incredibly info-heavy, with no real indication what the story would be. And then some people complained that the flashbacks provided a boring backstory, which I can see being the opinion <i>if</i> you only make it that far. Also, Gabby and AB aren't twins? They're just best friends whose moms are best friends and were raised <i>like</i> siblings. So also that was a weird criticism.
Reviews shouldn't be just trying to complain about other reviews, though. I know this. If you've made it this far into my review, you may be rolling your eyes. I apologize. So let me get into the actual review of the story itself.
The ebook was 428 pages and I agree that it could have been far shorter. I often complain that books don't give the various storylines enough time to breathe... in this case, I felt like there was perhaps <b>too</b> much breathing room. But I actually really liked the way the storylines were intertwined. I thought, at first, it was too much. There was hockey and pop-stardom and college. There was the hidden relationship trope, the soulmate plot, the coming out plot. But they actually <i>do</i> work incredibly well together.
The story itself was really unique, in part because of these intertwined plots but namely because of the magic system. It was a bit like playing a caster in Guild Wars 2, which is a niche reference. But in it, you have to pick a school of magic. Like in GW2, if you're an Elementalist, you can control the elements but can specialize in one. But it was definitely a more-intricate version of that. Yeah. I'm not doing my best to explain it. In summation, I love a unique magic system very deeply in books.
Also? I love sports gays. So much. So it was kind of a given that Matthew would be my favorite of the two MCs. I also love found family, which AB's band most definitely was.
Gosh, I'm rambling. This is clearly my bad attempt at explaining why such a trope-heavy and long book was something I loved a lot more than other people clearly did. It definitely wasn't one of my 5 star reads but it was a really fun one! I would love some novellas so we could see the story through Maddie or Gabby's eyes.
So yeah! If you're willing to wade through a <i>slightly</i> too-long story and really like sports gays like I do, you'll like this book. If you're looking for a unique magic system, you'll probably like this book. Maybe it takes a certain level of patience and love for this one to hit just right. But I do recommend it!
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Graphic: Biphobia
Moderate: Homophobia
little_mo's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? N/A
- Loveable characters? N/A
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? N/A
4.0
Moderate: Homophobia
aexileigh's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Graphic: Biphobia and Homophobia
Moderate: Panic attacks/disorders and Bullying
everence's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
5.0
Moderate: Homophobia
kennyscoffee's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
The magical realism aspect of the book was hard for me to grasp. I got the basics after a while but the later half was very confusing as nothing is explained since the characters already know about the magic.
Coming out and mental health issues are a major topic in this book!
Graphic: Panic attacks/disorders, Homophobia, and Mental illness
OCD, Coming Out, Sports/Media Homophobia, Famous individuals, Social Media