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cemeterygay's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.0
For me, the main POV characters can make or break a book. Zafira and Nasir are amazing characters to read through their perspectives. You very quickly get a basic understanding of each character's motivations, personality, and challenges. The ability to so quickly empathize and understand each character really helps you root for each character and want them to succeed and just be okay. Even when Nasir or Zafira make choices that aren't the best, you can understand why these choices were made and The supporting cast of characters are also great and distinct. Altair in particular was a character I absolutely adored. He initially starts as more of a just humorous character but as you get to learn more about him, you understand just how deeply caring and impressive he is. Kifah and Benyamin were also great additions to the cast who had very different personalities which made reading the sections where they are on the island a lot easier to navigate. I also was very invested in the wellbeing of Zafira's family and friends and understood the loss both Benyamin and Nasir were experiencing throughout the novel.
I will say while the villain is definitely menacing, he just doesn't quite have the depth needed quite yet for me to rave about him.
The romance only was just starting to build but it was very fascinating watching the enemies to lovers arc. You can clearly tell that these are two people who have been forced into really terrible circumstances that lead to them ending up enemies when their goals are often times compatible and are just two people who want to do the best they can. So many scenes between them are either quite emotional or intense and I adored reading them.
I could not sing enough praise for both the world and the writing style. The two are not separable as if even one was poorer, the other would suffer. The rich descriptions and storytelling allow for the world which is incredibly well-designed to shine. I loved learning about the different affinities, the history of the world, and the culture of each caliphate. The history and knowledge are little intense in the beginning but I was very quickly able to adjust. The knowledge you receive either is incredibly relevant to the characters/plot or really helped to flesh out the world.
The pacing was just a bit too slow between Zafira receiving the quest and her then heading out to Sharr but beyond that I didn't have significant problems with the pacing.
Overall, I really adored this book and would absolutely recommend it.
Graphic: Physical abuse, Murder, Violence, Misogyny, Child abuse, Torture, Blood, Grief, and Emotional abuse
Moderate: Gore, Animal death, Kidnapping, Death of parent, and Child death
CW: Ableist language, blackmail, death of a friend, death of a cousin, death of a mother, death of a father, death of a child (past), imprisonment/captivity, hunting, child neglect, attempted murder, dead bodiesbooksanna's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.75
Graphic: Torture and Murder
Moderate: Death, Injury/Injury detail, War, and Violence
Minor: Gore
michellemaas's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
I will start with the most off-putting thing: the Arabic. I would venture as far as to say that there was at least 1 Arabic word per paragraph (though it felt more like 1 per sentence). I'm not claiming to speak 8 languages or read the dictionary for fun, but I am not often stunted by unknown words but I spent this entire book playing the game of "guess that word". I even tried Google Translating some of the words whose definitions I couldn't decipher from the context, but not even Google knew (likely some fantasy made-up word, though I wouldn't know) and it just became too much. I want to put a disclaimer here that the version I read did not have the glossary that the printed books have. I don't know if any of the ebooks have the glossary but mine didn't and I didn't realize that Hafsah Faizal put the glossary on her website as well until I was 90% done with the book already. I love that the author drew from her culture and language to accurately express her thoughts (and as a bilingual person myself, I know that it is all too easy to think/speak in a combination of languages) but when you are marketing to an international market having 1/2 of your book be in a foreign language might not be for the best. That being said, this is a situation that is easily remedied (although slightly more inconvenient) but I still wanted to mention it.
I saw a few comments about the world-building being difficult to understand due to the language and I wanted to clarify that I don't agree with that. The world-building is very similar to that of The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins (please note I said world-building, not plot. There are no arenas!). There are 5 "districts" (I can't remember the word they used for it in the book) all governed by the Sultan. The Sultan is however a cruel ruler and allows the towns to suffer. We have the badass female MC who goes into the woods to hunt for game and with the help of a friend she provides for her dying town. Everyone is becoming more desperate by the day due to the expanding forest (Arz) and harsh conditions so the MC goes on a quest to a special island to bring back the McGuffin that will save everyone. The Arabic was annoying as someone who doesn't speak it but it doesn't impact your ability to understand the story by any means.
The last issue I want to discuss is that of Zafirah and Nasir's relationship. Mainly the question: love or lust? Nasir is a harashin (assassin) and Zafirah has a huge problem with him being a murderer, especially because he and his friend caused the death of her friend. While this can be said for most enemies-to-lovers relationships what bothers me is how big a deal Zafirah made about it. I am not by any means condoning murder or suggesting she take that information in her stride or anything, but up until like 5 chapters from the end, she was still very hung up on the fact that her love interest is a murderer. Usually, we see the heroin slowly come to terms with her brooding boyfriend's dark past but there wasn't any of that. Zafirah was super bothered by his profession and then suddenly she wasn't because he was hot? I just find it quite annoying that the author made such a big deal of how opposed she was to Nasir's past only to not explore how she came to terms with it. I realize this will likely be addressed in the sequel, but I'm not reviewing the sequel right now so I wanted to get it off my chest.
Though my review was a little harsh, I still really enjoyed this book and wanted to end off by praising Hafsah Faizal for diversifying the pool. Quite a few of the situations in the book were inspired by the Arabian culture and it was cool to read about characters who didn't fit the cookie-cutter fantasy novel mold. Furthermore, this was great work considering that this was her first book and I can't wait to see where her career goes from here!
Graphic: Body horror, Bullying, Child abuse, Death, Death of parent, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Gaslighting, Gore, Grief, Injury/Injury detail, Misogyny, Murder, Physical abuse, Sexism, Torture, and Violence
Moderate: Blood
Minor: Animal death, Slavery, and Trafficking
the_paperbackprincess's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Physical abuse, Emotional abuse, and Child abuse
Moderate: Blood and Gore
Minor: Misogyny
gilliane's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? N/A
4.5
Minor: Death and Gore
sapphic_reader's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
5.0
Gay side character
Graphic: Violence, Murder, Grief, Gore, Death of parent, and Blood
Moderate: Child abuse, Confinement, Misogyny, and Torture
Minor: Kidnapping, Child death, and Animal death
caseythereader's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
- The pacing was a bit slow - a lot of sitting/walking around and talking, though that may have just been misguided expectations on my part.
- Strangely, Zafira felt like the least-developed character. Everybody else on the quest had a distinct personality and backstory, but she didn't have much beyond being The Huntress (and the fact that she was obviously in love with her best friend Yasmine, why were we wasting so much time on the boys?)
Graphic: Blood, Child abuse, Child death, Death, Death of parent, Emotional abuse, Gore, Grief, Kidnapping, Murder, Physical abuse, Torture, and Violence
Minor: Rape and Suicidal thoughts
booksthatburn's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.0
I loved the setting and most of the characters. I was frequently lost in the prose of an individual moment but I find myself now able to recall the entire story, somehow whole in my mind even as the scenes sometimes felt scattered. If you’re reading this for the beautiful setting, twisting quest of a plot, and intense yearning to belong, you’ll love this. I plan to read the sequel because I want to know how this story ends. It’s literally part one of two, so a lot of stuff was left open to be handled later, but there’s a definite endpoint to the initial quest which brought everyone together.
The world-building is really really good, especially around language. The text is full of places where a word is left untranslated from the speaker's dialect (or possibly a completely different language, depending on the instance) and the point-of-view character thinks about the meaning in a way that conveys the translation. It happens a lot and helps to deepen immersion in the setting, since the the various regions having different dialects/languages is a very important part of this world.
If you’re planning on reading this because you heard it was queer, my answer is that it probably is, but I cannot predict whether you’ll be satisfied by the portrayals within.
Moderate: Blood, Confinement, Death, Gore, Kidnapping, Misogyny, Murder, Sexism, Torture, Violence, and Xenophobia
Minor: Animal death, Child abuse, Child death, and Death of parent
CW for major character death.melaniereadsbooks's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
I love this book! The world building (based on ancient Arabia) is so rich and vivid. I love the information we learn about the caliphates and how they are ruled, understood, and how magic (and it's disappearance) affect the people.
Zafira is an amazing MC! She is badass but also soft and flawed. She is seeking acceptance from her people and learning to be proud of who she is.
Nasir is also so amazing. Perfect brooding bad boy with a heart of gold. The slow burn enemies to lovers romance is completely to die for!
The supporting cast of characters are probably the best part of this book! There are so many great ones- from Yasmine, to Altair, to Benyamin, and beyond. The villains are complex and original.
Overall, I really love this book!
Graphic: Animal death, Blood, Death, Death of parent, Emotional abuse, Gore, Grief, Kidnapping, Murder, Physical abuse, Misogyny, Sexism, and Violence
brynn_books's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Xenophobia, Blood, Murder, Grief, Death, Gore, and Violence