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michellemaas's review against another edition
adventurous
challenging
dark
emotional
inspiring
mysterious
sad
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
I wanted to love this book more than I did. On paper (excuse the pun) it had everything most fantasy readers would want: an enemies-to-lovers plotline, knife to the thought trope, found family trope, diversity, strong female leads, etc. Even with all that, while still a good book, it just didn't live up to my expectations.
I will start with the most off-putting thing: the Arabic. I would venture as far as to say that there was at least 1 Arabic word per paragraph (though it felt more like 1 per sentence). I'm not claiming to speak 8 languages or read the dictionary for fun, but I am not often stunted by unknown words but I spent this entire book playing the game of "guess that word". I even tried Google Translating some of the words whose definitions I couldn't decipher from the context, but not even Google knew (likely some fantasy made-up word, though I wouldn't know) and it just became too much. I want to put a disclaimer here that the version I read did not have the glossary that the printed books have. I don't know if any of the ebooks have the glossary but mine didn't and I didn't realize that Hafsah Faizal put the glossary on her website as well until I was 90% done with the book already. I love that the author drew from her culture and language to accurately express her thoughts (and as a bilingual person myself, I know that it is all too easy to think/speak in a combination of languages) but when you are marketing to an international market having 1/2 of your book be in a foreign language might not be for the best. That being said, this is a situation that is easily remedied (although slightly more inconvenient) but I still wanted to mention it.
I saw a few comments about the world-building being difficult to understand due to the language and I wanted to clarify that I don't agree with that. The world-building is very similar to that of The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins (please note I said world-building, not plot. There are no arenas!). There are 5 "districts" (I can't remember the word they used for it in the book) all governed by the Sultan. The Sultan is however a cruel ruler and allows the towns to suffer. We have the badass female MC who goes into the woods to hunt for game and with the help of a friend she provides for her dying town. Everyone is becoming more desperate by the day due to the expanding forest (Arz) and harsh conditions so the MC goes on a quest to a special island to bring back the McGuffin that will save everyone. The Arabic was annoying as someone who doesn't speak it but it doesn't impact your ability to understand the story by any means.
The last issue I want to discuss is that of Zafirah and Nasir's relationship. Mainly the question: love or lust? Nasir is a harashin (assassin) and Zafirah has a huge problem with him being a murderer, especially because he and his friend caused the death of her friend. While this can be said for most enemies-to-lovers relationships what bothers me is how big a deal Zafirah made about it. I am not by any means condoning murder or suggesting she take that information in her stride or anything, but up until like 5 chapters from the end, she was still very hung up on the fact that her love interest is a murderer. Usually, we see the heroin slowly come to terms with her brooding boyfriend's dark past but there wasn't any of that. Zafirah was super bothered by his profession and then suddenly she wasn't because he was hot? I just find it quite annoying that the author made such a big deal of how opposed she was to Nasir's past only to not explore how she came to terms with it. I realize this will likely be addressed in the sequel, but I'm not reviewing the sequel right now so I wanted to get it off my chest.
Though my review was a little harsh, I still really enjoyed this book and wanted to end off by praising Hafsah Faizal for diversifying the pool. Quite a few of the situations in the book were inspired by the Arabian culture and it was cool to read about characters who didn't fit the cookie-cutter fantasy novel mold. Furthermore, this was great work considering that this was her first book and I can't wait to see where her career goes from here!
I will start with the most off-putting thing: the Arabic. I would venture as far as to say that there was at least 1 Arabic word per paragraph (though it felt more like 1 per sentence). I'm not claiming to speak 8 languages or read the dictionary for fun, but I am not often stunted by unknown words but I spent this entire book playing the game of "guess that word". I even tried Google Translating some of the words whose definitions I couldn't decipher from the context, but not even Google knew (likely some fantasy made-up word, though I wouldn't know) and it just became too much. I want to put a disclaimer here that the version I read did not have the glossary that the printed books have. I don't know if any of the ebooks have the glossary but mine didn't and I didn't realize that Hafsah Faizal put the glossary on her website as well until I was 90% done with the book already. I love that the author drew from her culture and language to accurately express her thoughts (and as a bilingual person myself, I know that it is all too easy to think/speak in a combination of languages) but when you are marketing to an international market having 1/2 of your book be in a foreign language might not be for the best. That being said, this is a situation that is easily remedied (although slightly more inconvenient) but I still wanted to mention it.
I saw a few comments about the world-building being difficult to understand due to the language and I wanted to clarify that I don't agree with that. The world-building is very similar to that of The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins (please note I said world-building, not plot. There are no arenas!). There are 5 "districts" (I can't remember the word they used for it in the book) all governed by the Sultan. The Sultan is however a cruel ruler and allows the towns to suffer. We have the badass female MC who goes into the woods to hunt for game and with the help of a friend she provides for her dying town. Everyone is becoming more desperate by the day due to the expanding forest (Arz) and harsh conditions so the MC goes on a quest to a special island to bring back the McGuffin that will save everyone. The Arabic was annoying as someone who doesn't speak it but it doesn't impact your ability to understand the story by any means.
The last issue I want to discuss is that of Zafirah and Nasir's relationship. Mainly the question: love or lust? Nasir is a harashin (assassin) and Zafirah has a huge problem with him being a murderer, especially because he and his friend caused the death of her friend. While this can be said for most enemies-to-lovers relationships what bothers me is how big a deal Zafirah made about it. I am not by any means condoning murder or suggesting she take that information in her stride or anything, but up until like 5 chapters from the end, she was still very hung up on the fact that her love interest is a murderer. Usually, we see the heroin slowly come to terms with her brooding boyfriend's dark past but there wasn't any of that. Zafirah was super bothered by his profession and then suddenly she wasn't because he was hot? I just find it quite annoying that the author made such a big deal of how opposed she was to Nasir's past only to not explore how she came to terms with it. I realize this will likely be addressed in the sequel, but I'm not reviewing the sequel right now so I wanted to get it off my chest.
Though my review was a little harsh, I still really enjoyed this book and wanted to end off by praising Hafsah Faizal for diversifying the pool. Quite a few of the situations in the book were inspired by the Arabian culture and it was cool to read about characters who didn't fit the cookie-cutter fantasy novel mold. Furthermore, this was great work considering that this was her first book and I can't wait to see where her career goes from here!
Content Warnings
Graphic: Body horror, Bullying, Child abuse, Death, Death of parent, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Gaslighting, Gore, Grief, Injury/Injury detail, Misogyny, Murder, Physical abuse, Sexism, Torture, and Violence
Moderate: Blood
Minor: Animal death, Slavery, and Trafficking
aseel_reads's review against another edition
adventurous
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
obsessed 😍😍😍 this was definitely an Arab inspired fantasy, all the language, food, clothes, political system, loved it!! I really liked the characters and their personalities/dynamics!! said NO WAY so many times at the end, which is always a good sign!! the plot was semi unique but I really enjoyed it. can't wait to read the next one
Content Warnings
Graphic: Death of parent, Emotional abuse, Grief, Murder, Misogyny, Sexism, Torture, and Violence
Moderate: Confinement, Injury/Injury detail, Kidnapping, and Mental illness
sadiefc's review against another edition
adventurous
emotional
funny
mysterious
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
Content Warnings
Moderate: Abandonment, Blood, Confinement, Death, Death of parent, Injury/Injury detail, Torture, and Violence
veilchen's review against another edition
adventurous
lighthearted
mysterious
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Set in world inspired by ancient arabia, this book follows the story of Zafira, a hunter, and the prince Nasir. They both get sent to the deathly island Sharr on a mission to restore magic to the world. But there are other missions, people and problems as well.
The book is... fine. It's not bad but also not very memorable. The most exciting thing is definitly the middle easter setting, giving it its own special flair. Especially for me, coming from a country where a lot of arabic words have found their way into slang, it's really cool (but also a bit strange) to this kind of vocabulary worked into a fantasy setting.
The story and the characters, unfortunatly, lack uniqueness and charm. We got the young protagonist with a bow, wanting to fight the inequality in the world despite not knowing anything about it. Then, the childhood best friend, who feels unrequited love for her. Of course, the mysterious, handsome, dark prince, who hides his tortured past, meaningful scars and any sign if affection under the for adept fantasy readers well-known mask of stone and indifference. Spice that up with some sisterly bonds, a funny/flirty side-kick and a lot of family drama and - tada - the perfect YA-fantasy cast. By now, we all know it, and we want something new, sorry.
The story also fails to bring up anything new. Unknown magical powers, a quest with unlikely companions and a lot of lore that suddenly - oh, the surpirse! - plays an important part in the story.
Now, it might not be the most original, ut that doesn't make it a bad book. I think it's great for getting into YA fantasy and for readers who either don't know or don't mind the stereotypes. But for veteran-readers like myself, it gets repetitive and boring, therefor only 3 stars.
I might read the second book, if I get bored, but not anytime soon, not exciting enough for that.
The book is... fine. It's not bad but also not very memorable. The most exciting thing is definitly the middle easter setting, giving it its own special flair. Especially for me, coming from a country where a lot of arabic words have found their way into slang, it's really cool (but also a bit strange) to this kind of vocabulary worked into a fantasy setting.
The story and the characters, unfortunatly, lack uniqueness and charm. We got the young protagonist with a bow, wanting to fight the inequality in the world despite not knowing anything about it. Then, the childhood best friend, who feels unrequited love for her. Of course, the mysterious, handsome, dark prince, who hides his tortured past, meaningful scars and any sign if affection under the for adept fantasy readers well-known mask of stone and indifference. Spice that up with some sisterly bonds, a funny/flirty side-kick and a lot of family drama and - tada - the perfect YA-fantasy cast. By now, we all know it, and we want something new, sorry.
The story also fails to bring up anything new. Unknown magical powers, a quest with unlikely companions and a lot of lore that suddenly - oh, the surpirse! - plays an important part in the story.
Now, it might not be the most original, ut that doesn't make it a bad book. I think it's great for getting into YA fantasy and for readers who either don't know or don't mind the stereotypes. But for veteran-readers like myself, it gets repetitive and boring, therefor only 3 stars.
I might read the second book, if I get bored, but not anytime soon, not exciting enough for that.
Content Warnings
Moderate: Death and Torture
Minor: Death of parent
amethyst_'s review against another edition
adventurous
emotional
funny
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Content Warnings
Graphic: Child abuse, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Murder, and Physical abuse
Moderate: Slavery, Death of parent, Grief, and Sexism
Minor: Child death
lunep's review
adventurous
dark
emotional
hopeful
mysterious
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Funny how the two times I've started this book it was in July
Anyway
I remembered this book as a solid 3 ⭐, I liked it but actually didn't understand the hype...but I always wanted to read the second one anyway, and with Hafsah publishing another book recently I recided to re-read this one, read the second one and read her new book, and boy am I glad that I did it. This time around I definitely liked it more!
At first I felt it was a little too trope-y but nothing unbearable and I said to myself "well, arent most debut books a little trope-y anyway? specially with young authors" (specially having re-read the Eragon series this past 6 months lmao) so I decided to try and not to focus on that (tho just to mention, I felt Zafira at the beginning of the book,when she started working with Nasir and Altair to be a little not-like-other-girls) and eventually I stopped feeling that way
Another thing that bothered me a bit was how it didnt make sense to me that only the Ra'ads knew that she was the hunter: 1) they live in a village in a culture that's very much oriented around helping each other and community (Yasmine's wedding comes to mind), so I assume everyone knows everyone, specially because it sounds like it's a small village, 2) everyone knew the Ra'ads were close to the hunter, and Zafira's POV mentions multiple times playing with Yasmine and Deen a lot when children, 3) everyone must have known Zafira's family consisted only of her, her little sister, and their ailing mother, no men 4) Zafira uses the same horse as Zafira and as The Hunter, and 5) the day of the voyage she arrives at the Arz as The Hunter, on the Iskandar's horse, with Lana bint Iskandar and the Ra'ads...like cmon, make it make sense. I will blame it on it being Hafsah's first book that she wrote when she was 19, and it's not like, a HUGE deal, but it was a little hard to suspend my disbelief on that specific thing
However, I really liked the characters, I liked the development of Zafira and Nasir's relationship, and how everyone interacted with one another. I specially liked the female friendships, tho they don't have a lot of page time, I felt Zafira and Yasmine's bond was very sweet (also, I went a little mad in the first 200 pages because I couldnt believe no one had written Zafira/Yasmine fanfiction with THAT goodbye scene), and Zafira and Kifah's bonding was also really nice, I hope we see more of that in the second book. And I enjoyed the story overall, it kept me hooked, and I felt intelligent because I saw a couple of the plot-twists coming lmao (others I didn't, but I really should have, hindsight is 20/20). I remembered very little of it, so it was basically like reading it for the first time
I'm DEVASTATED about Deen's death, at first I wasn't sure if it had been necessary, it felt a little like a "oops, I made my MC who will fall in love with another man promise this man she would marry him after this mission, what to do?" cop-out, but a lot of stuff would have been had to be changed if he hadn't died (am I convinced he HAD to die tho? still not, but I get it would have changed things)
Also absolutely depressed about Altair growing up feeling like second-best, a dirty secret to the whole kingdom, and then feeling like the zumra willingly abandoned him 😭😭 and the fact that it was his own MOTHER who told the zumra not to go back for him?? kill me dead please
And...did Misk, Yasmine and Lana leave Zafira and Lana's mom in the village when they were gassed?? I-- speechless, I imagine if the answer is yes it's because they quickly got a ride with the Caliph's men, barely escaping, but STILL, what the fuck man
Anyway
I remembered this book as a solid 3 ⭐, I liked it but actually didn't understand the hype...but I always wanted to read the second one anyway, and with Hafsah publishing another book recently I recided to re-read this one, read the second one and read her new book, and boy am I glad that I did it. This time around I definitely liked it more!
At first I felt it was a little too trope-y but nothing unbearable and I said to myself "well, arent most debut books a little trope-y anyway? specially with young authors" (specially having re-read the Eragon series this past 6 months lmao) so I decided to try and not to focus on that (tho just to mention, I felt Zafira at the beginning of the book,
Another thing that bothered me a bit was how it didnt make sense to me that only the Ra'ads knew that she was the hunter: 1) they live in a village in a culture that's very much oriented around helping each other and community (Yasmine's wedding comes to mind), so I assume everyone knows everyone, specially because it sounds like it's a small village, 2) everyone knew the Ra'ads were close to the hunter, and Zafira's POV mentions multiple times playing with Yasmine and Deen a lot when children, 3) everyone must have known Zafira's family consisted only of her, her little sister, and their ailing mother, no men 4) Zafira uses the same horse as Zafira and as The Hunter, and 5) the day of the voyage she arrives at the Arz as The Hunter, on the Iskandar's horse, with Lana bint Iskandar and the Ra'ads...like cmon, make it make sense. I will blame it on it being Hafsah's first book that she wrote when she was 19, and it's not like, a HUGE deal, but it was a little hard to suspend my disbelief on that specific thing
However, I really liked the characters, I liked the development of Zafira and Nasir's relationship, and how everyone interacted with one another. I specially liked the female friendships, tho they don't have a lot of page time, I felt Zafira and Yasmine's bond was very sweet (also, I went a little mad in the first 200 pages because I couldnt believe no one had written Zafira/Yasmine fanfiction with THAT goodbye scene), and Zafira and Kifah's bonding was also really nice, I hope we see more of that in the second book. And I enjoyed the story overall, it kept me hooked, and I felt intelligent because I saw a couple of the plot-twists coming lmao (others I didn't, but I really should have, hindsight is 20/20). I remembered very little of it, so it was basically like reading it for the first time
Also absolutely depressed about Altair growing up feeling like second-best, a dirty secret to the whole kingdom, and then feeling like the zumra willingly abandoned him 😭😭 and the fact that it was his own MOTHER who told the zumra not to go back for him?? kill me dead please
And...did Misk, Yasmine and Lana leave Zafira and Lana's mom in the village when they were gassed?? I-- speechless, I imagine if the answer is yes it's because they quickly got a ride with the Caliph's men, barely escaping, but STILL, what the fuck man
Content Warnings
Graphic: Death, Misogyny, Torture, Child abuse, Confinement, Blood, Violence, Murder, Emotional abuse, Grief, and Kidnapping
Moderate: Self harm, Child death, Death of parent, and Mental illness
Minor: Medical content, Suicidal thoughts, Toxic relationship, Injury/Injury detail, Cursing, Fire/Fire injury, Alcohol, Physical abuse, and Vomit
nefariousbee's review against another edition
adventurous
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Content Warnings
Moderate: Child death, Death, Death of parent, Emotional abuse, Misogyny, Murder, Physical abuse, Sexism, and Torture
coolbeancat's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
funny
hopeful
mysterious
tense
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.0
Content Warnings
Graphic: Death, Torture, and Violence
Moderate: Misogyny, Physical abuse, Child abuse, and Death of parent
lainiereads's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
emotional
medium-paced
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
5.0
This book was BEAUTIFUL. I knew it was gonna be good, but I didn't expect to fall in love with the characters and writing as fast as I did. After getting past the initial confusion that comes with starting a new fantasy series, I was completely engaged and wanting to know what would happen next. Seeing all of the characters develop and getting to learn more about them slowly as the story progressed was SO rewarding! I loved them all and I am so excited to see more in the next book.
Now, obviously, there is a major factor that made me love this book so much- ZAFIRA AND NASIR'S ROMANCE, OH MY GOD. They are so cute??? I love them so much!!! All of the enemies to lovers, slowburn tropes you could ask for were found here, and they were done perfectly. Since the tone of this book is pretty serious, I wasn't sure if there would be any major cutesy, swoon-worthy moments, but oh my gosh was I wrong. I found myself having to look away from my book and gush about how amazing their interactions were. Something that really made their relationship as perfect as it is, was being able to see everything from both perspectives. It was so fun to see the contrast between Zafira's description of herself and how Nasir views her. It made the developing feelings so much more believable and worth the slow buildup.
Speaking of Zafira, I love her so much, she is the best. She had the perfect mixture of kindness and anger and wit and bravery and every other good trait possible. Seeing her grow throughout her journey was one of the best parts of the book, and I am really looking forward to seeing how strong she is in We Free the Stars.
Love you Hafsah Faizal, you are a queen.
Now, obviously, there is a major factor that made me love this book so much- ZAFIRA AND NASIR'S ROMANCE, OH MY GOD. They are so cute??? I love them so much!!! All of the enemies to lovers, slowburn tropes you could ask for were found here, and they were done perfectly. Since the tone of this book is pretty serious, I wasn't sure if there would be any major cutesy, swoon-worthy moments, but oh my gosh was I wrong. I found myself having to look away from my book and gush about how amazing their interactions were. Something that really made their relationship as perfect as it is, was being able to see everything from both perspectives. It was so fun to see the contrast between Zafira's description of herself and how Nasir views her. It made the developing feelings so much more believable and worth the slow buildup.
Speaking of Zafira, I love her so much, she is the best. She had the perfect mixture of kindness and anger and wit and bravery and every other good trait possible. Seeing her grow throughout her journey was one of the best parts of the book, and I am really looking forward to seeing how strong she is in We Free the Stars.
Love you Hafsah Faizal, you are a queen.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Death, Death of parent, Violence, Torture, Sexism, Murder, and Misogyny
Moderate: Animal death, Child abuse, Physical abuse, and Kidnapping
Minor: Alcohol and Child death
sophiapinheiro's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
emotional
funny
informative
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
Content Warnings
Moderate: Death, Emotional abuse, Murder, and Physical abuse
Minor: Child death, Death of parent, and Slavery