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acknud's review
3.0
Very shallow without much character development. Has potential but the fact that people seem way too excepting of the supernatural sort of makes the story line weak.
I think I would shoot the editor. Full of tense, person and grammatical errors (to in place of too, switching person in the same paragraph). I will see what installment two is like.
I think I would shoot the editor. Full of tense, person and grammatical errors (to in place of too, switching person in the same paragraph). I will see what installment two is like.
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