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emotional
funny
hopeful
lighthearted
relaxing
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
A mix
Strong character development:
Complicated
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
No
LOVED their friendship and their romance. I loved the slowburn buildup so much that I could even tolerate the miscommunication between them without wanting to bang my head against the wall too badly. Their relationship is one of the healthiest I’ve ever seen portrayed in a romcom novel. I love them. They really felt like a real and genuine couple that you know and admire in real life, like your friends that your not-so-secretly a little jealous of but are so happy for them that they found each other because that’s how good they are together.
The side characters were fun and almost solid enough when they were shown, but they could have been fleshed out more. That was one of my biggest hang ups throughout the book. They didn’t have friends. Either of them. I get that she was coming off a 2-year tour and he was moving back after 10-years of playing somewhere else, but STILL. They grew up in Vancouver. They didn’t have any childhood friends to reconnect with? Pippa’s only friend is her sister who she doesn’t spend much time with? Jamie made no friends while he was away for 10 years? He just had one friend, Rory, and when that friendship spoiled, he never made another friend? Hayden on the team seemed like a promising character, but he never became fleshed out or a real friend, which made me think he was introduced more as a set-up for the 3rd book than anything else. Their lack of friends is a red flag, for both of them. I would have such serious reservations about dating a man without ANY friends. But she didn’t have any either, so idk. It’s weird to not have friends. I’m hoping to see more developed friendships in further installments of this series, especially amongst the players. That’s half the fun of sports romcoms.
My only other critique is more of a personal preference, so it’s not something that impacted my star rating. There were too many smut scenes. Every scene included was incredibly well written. In fact, I was impressed. She’s one of the best romance scene writers I think I’ve ever read. But maybe sticking to 3-4 scenes would have been sufficient. 5 would have been a lot but like, okay, sure, if they’re very good. I lost count of how many this book included but it was a shocking amount and I think I read like 80 romance books last year alone. I’m not new to the genre. Maybe if some of them had at least been shorter, that would have been better. There were definitely several scenes that I when I was reading them I was actively thinking, “This could have been closed door.” Like I said, it’s personal preference, so I can’t knock a star for it, but it was just a lot. 5/5 on the spice scale not because anything was so dirty or scandalous but just because of the sheer endless amounts of it once it starts.
Overall, I would recommend this book to my romance reading friends, especially to anyone looking to enter the hockey romcom world. Just with the warning of full spice (and a lot of very sweet, wholesome love) ahead ⚠️
The side characters were fun and almost solid enough when they were shown, but they could have been fleshed out more. That was one of my biggest hang ups throughout the book. They didn’t have friends. Either of them. I get that she was coming off a 2-year tour and he was moving back after 10-years of playing somewhere else, but STILL. They grew up in Vancouver. They didn’t have any childhood friends to reconnect with? Pippa’s only friend is her sister who she doesn’t spend much time with? Jamie made no friends while he was away for 10 years? He just had one friend, Rory, and when that friendship spoiled, he never made another friend? Hayden on the team seemed like a promising character, but he never became fleshed out or a real friend, which made me think he was introduced more as a set-up for the 3rd book than anything else. Their lack of friends is a red flag, for both of them. I would have such serious reservations about dating a man without ANY friends. But she didn’t have any either, so idk. It’s weird to not have friends. I’m hoping to see more developed friendships in further installments of this series, especially amongst the players. That’s half the fun of sports romcoms.
My only other critique is more of a personal preference, so it’s not something that impacted my star rating. There were too many smut scenes. Every scene included was incredibly well written. In fact, I was impressed. She’s one of the best romance scene writers I think I’ve ever read. But maybe sticking to 3-4 scenes would have been sufficient. 5 would have been a lot but like, okay, sure, if they’re very good. I lost count of how many this book included but it was a shocking amount and I think I read like 80 romance books last year alone. I’m not new to the genre. Maybe if some of them had at least been shorter, that would have been better. There were definitely several scenes that I when I was reading them I was actively thinking, “This could have been closed door.” Like I said, it’s personal preference, so I can’t knock a star for it, but it was just a lot. 5/5 on the spice scale not because anything was so dirty or scandalous but just because of the sheer endless amounts of it once it starts.
Overall, I would recommend this book to my romance reading friends, especially to anyone looking to enter the hockey romcom world. Just with the warning of full spice (and a lot of very sweet, wholesome love) ahead ⚠️
Content Warnings
Graphic: Cursing, Sexual content
Moderate: Panic attacks/disorders, Death of parent
Minor: Alcoholism, Emotional abuse, Mental illness, Violence, Grief, Car accident
emotional
funny
lighthearted
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Plot
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
Content Warnings
Graphic: Addiction, Alcoholism, Death, Mental illness, Panic attacks/disorders, Car accident, Death of parent, Alcohol
Moderate: Violence, Blood, Medical content, Abandonment, Injury/Injury detail
emotional
funny
lighthearted
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Character
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
Content Warnings
Graphic: Panic attacks/disorders, Sexual content, Car accident
Moderate: Alcoholism, Toxic relationship, Death of parent
emotional
funny
inspiring
lighthearted
sad
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Character
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
Content Warnings
Graphic: Panic attacks/disorders, Car accident
Moderate: Toxic relationship, Death of parent
funny
hopeful
inspiring
lighthearted
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Character
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Complicated
Content Warnings
Graphic: Sexual content
Moderate: Emotional abuse, Mental illness
Minor: Car accident
The MC is a musician and does talk about her lyrics and songwriting but doesn’t have all her lyrics written out in the book (we do get a couple of lines here and there)
emotional
funny
inspiring
lighthearted
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
A mix
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
Content Warnings
Minor: Car accident, Death of parent
emotional
funny
hopeful
inspiring
reflective
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
A mix
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Complicated
Content Warnings
Moderate: Mental illness
Minor: Car accident, Death of parent
emotional
inspiring
lighthearted
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
A mix
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Content Warnings
Graphic: Sexual content
Moderate: Alcoholism, Panic attacks/disorders, Car accident, Death of parent, Gaslighting
lighthearted
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Character
Strong character development:
No
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
I read really ranty reviews of this book before I started it and I was expecting the worst. But while I didn’t love this, it wasn’t as bad as I imagined it was going to be. I just…once again…think it needed better editing.
Pippa and Jamie end up being really cute together. Jamie is a bit of an ass in the very beginning but once that drops off (early on), he’s a big ole simp and is really supportive of Pippa and her dreams of becoming a professional singer. There’s great close proximity (she’s his love in assistant/dog sitter). There’s a cute rescue dog and interesting side characters and it’s honestly pretty low angst for how many obstacles are built up in the beginning.
Which leads me to why this ended up being kinda meh despite the parts I really enjoyed. There’s multiple obstacles set up for why Jamie can’t be in a relationship. A bad breakup when he was 19, his mother suffering from untreated anxiety/panic attacks, and the whole boss/assistant situation are built up as these HUGE problems he can’t get past in order to date and then….everyone of them is resolved super quick after not ever being an ACTUAL problem throughout the whole book. His mom’s anxiety? Pippa handles it with him like a champ. The breakup? One conversation with the ex and it’s resolved. The boss/assistant relationship? Literally never a problem. What was the point?
This felt so long and it was only 400 pages or about 7 hours on audio (I listen at 1.7 speed). Lots of repetitive discussions and scenes and waffling back and forth over being with each other. The whole “he/she doesn’t remember me from high school” plot line? Resolved so fast. Every obstacle is really nonexistent and it made this feel so freaking long when it’s just Pippa going to the games, Pippa walking the dog, Pippa and Jamie being sweet together. On repeat. Lots of this could have been edited out and not hurt the story at all.
I’m also continuing a theme of restricting nickname privileges because “songbird” was used 67 times (yes I counted) and I got so tired of it so fast. Plus “bossy” and “my pretty assistant” were used over and over again. Just so repetitive to the degree that it’s noticeable.
There’s not really any hockey for this to be a hockey romance. There’s cringy one liners that ended up sounding like bad 80’s porn dialogue. “Do you have a fever? Cause you’re burning up” is straight from a porno and you can’t convince me otherwise. And the sweet moments get overrun by cringy conversations that no real human being would say.
I can see why people like this one. Jamie is a teddy bear once he stops being a hard ass and Pippa is likeable (if very not like other girls). But I think this was written too fast with too little editing. Which really could have made this a great read. Archer is talented but I think the need to hop on the hockey romance trend may have pushed her to churn out a book that wasn’t really ready for release.
Will I read the next one? Probably because she roped me in with teasers about Pippa’s sister and the cocky hockey star and the coach and the bartender. But I won’t be rushing to preorder it, for sure.
Pippa and Jamie end up being really cute together. Jamie is a bit of an ass in the very beginning but once that drops off (early on), he’s a big ole simp and is really supportive of Pippa and her dreams of becoming a professional singer. There’s great close proximity (she’s his love in assistant/dog sitter). There’s a cute rescue dog and interesting side characters and it’s honestly pretty low angst for how many obstacles are built up in the beginning.
Which leads me to why this ended up being kinda meh despite the parts I really enjoyed. There’s multiple obstacles set up for why Jamie can’t be in a relationship. A bad breakup when he was 19, his mother suffering from untreated anxiety/panic attacks, and the whole boss/assistant situation are built up as these HUGE problems he can’t get past in order to date and then….everyone of them is resolved super quick after not ever being an ACTUAL problem throughout the whole book. His mom’s anxiety? Pippa handles it with him like a champ. The breakup? One conversation with the ex and it’s resolved. The boss/assistant relationship? Literally never a problem. What was the point?
This felt so long and it was only 400 pages or about 7 hours on audio (I listen at 1.7 speed). Lots of repetitive discussions and scenes and waffling back and forth over being with each other. The whole “he/she doesn’t remember me from high school” plot line? Resolved so fast. Every obstacle is really nonexistent and it made this feel so freaking long when it’s just Pippa going to the games, Pippa walking the dog, Pippa and Jamie being sweet together. On repeat. Lots of this could have been edited out and not hurt the story at all.
I’m also continuing a theme of restricting nickname privileges because “songbird” was used 67 times (yes I counted) and I got so tired of it so fast. Plus “bossy” and “my pretty assistant” were used over and over again. Just so repetitive to the degree that it’s noticeable.
There’s not really any hockey for this to be a hockey romance. There’s cringy one liners that ended up sounding like bad 80’s porn dialogue. “Do you have a fever? Cause you’re burning up” is straight from a porno and you can’t convince me otherwise. And the sweet moments get overrun by cringy conversations that no real human being would say.
I can see why people like this one. Jamie is a teddy bear once he stops being a hard ass and Pippa is likeable (if very not like other girls). But I think this was written too fast with too little editing. Which really could have made this a great read. Archer is talented but I think the need to hop on the hockey romance trend may have pushed her to churn out a book that wasn’t really ready for release.
Will I read the next one? Probably because she roped me in with teasers about Pippa’s sister and the cocky hockey star and the coach and the bartender. But I won’t be rushing to preorder it, for sure.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Panic attacks/disorders, Sexual content
Minor: Alcoholism, Medical content, Car accident, Death of parent
emotional
funny
lighthearted
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Plot
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
No
it was gas. it was fire. it was gas and it was fire. this book blew me out of the water. am i back in my sports romance era??? did i ever truly leave??? jamie and pippa for life <3 so delicious and yummy
Content Warnings
Graphic: Sexual content
Minor: Car accident