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The Witch King by H.E. Edgmon

schumachr's review against another edition

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i felt little to no sympathy for the narrator wyatt, and i felt that he was too dramatic and self-centered. i understand that he was supposed to be a character that had a traumatic past, but it just felt like he was taking all his problems out on everyone else and never fully self reflected on all the harm he caused. the other characters were not very well developed and the world building was almost insulting in how it was presented. the writing was not well done and was very cringey; i do not really want to read writing reminiscent of 2016 tumblr posts. i would not recommend this book at all.

janagaton's review against another edition

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5.0

Wow, those last 100 pages!! My favorite things about this book are the dynamic/romance between Wyatt and Emyr, and the fact that the humor is so self-aware and cheesy in the best way. I loved all the classic tropes being thrown into this world of fae, witches, and humans. The audiobook narrator is also perfection and really enhanced the reading experience for me. I'm so excited to read the sequel!!

autumnxrose's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.5

hazel_oat's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional mysterious medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.0


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magikspells's review against another edition

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4.0

I forgot to update when I finished this!

So the gist of this story is that witches are the offspring of the fae, so they can do a different sort of magic from their families. This creates an interested dynamic because the fae don't believe witches to be their equals (even though many of them are related). Its very much a social commentary.
I really enjoyed this book. There was a wide swatch of queer characters and identities, which is a nice change of pace from a lot of other stories where there's one background character.

Admittedly Wyatt was not my favorite character, but I think it's normal to dislike a main character when it's written from their perspective, because you know all of their thoughts and plans and faults. I'm sure it would have been the same way if it had been written from Amir or Briar's POV. Also, I really liked Briar as a character, I just struggled with how she always felt like she was conveniently inserted into various situations. It makes more sense at the end, its just a little clunky.

swampbooks's review against another edition

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DNF-ing at chapter 4 (14%) on account of me not yet enjoying anything.

Wow, I only read 3 chapters and already have so much to say. I won’t leave an official rating for it because I’ve decided to stop doing that to books I didn’t finish, but if I did it would be one single, lonely star.

Where to begin… The writing style felt very “How Do You Do, Fellow Kids?” They tried to have an air of comedy but it just ended up feeling like Tumblr in 2014, and a lot of it was un-healthily self-deprecating. Making a joke like “at least I’m gay so no one expect me to be good at math” might be funny on Twitter where your followers KNOW you’re just being goofy, but it’s less funny in a printed book where impressionable teens are going to take it at face-value. We don’t want to be telling the LGBTQA+ youth that they’re limited or have stunted knowledge because of their sexual orientation or gender identity, we want to remind them they can accomplish anything.

With comments like “I don’t have anything good to say about myself, either” and “I’m even more useless than usual” it’s hard to root for Wyatt when you know nothing about him other than he’s emo, he would rather run away (literally) from his problems rather than try and fix them, and he likes to make self-deprecating jokes that try and force you to feel bad for him. He’s just a pity party, and an angry one at that.

I didn’t get in too deep into his relationship with Emyr, but it looked pretty unhealthy from what I saw. Not because Emyr was a jerk, mind you. Emyr is a sweetheart trying to do his best - a fact that Wyatt himself acknowledges. Wyatt is the bad factor in the relationship. I did read the first page of chapter 4 before DNF-ing, and all I saw was Wyatt admitting to lashing out to his loved ones for no apparent reason. Get some therapy, bro.

My last point, which is something I’m SO glad to not be reading more about, is why do the Fae have Facebook? Where’s the magic? The intrigue? WHY DO THEY HAVE AN APP WHERE YOU CAN SEND AND DOWNLOAD MAGIC SPELLS?

I read fantasy to get away from the real world, not to read about a fictional, magical character’s newest social media profile.

All that being said, I can understand why people would be drawn to this book. It’s inclusive, has a trans person as the main character, and tackles real-world issues (if poorly) while including all the other fun bits that make up YA fae-focused fantasy. Like I mentioned, I read to escape. This story appear to do the opposite and wraps up all the problems our society is dealing with into one book. It’s probably better for younger readers who either aren’t as knowledgeable about real world issues or who aren’t emotionally drained by hearing about it in the news every day. That’s just not me!

pixelatedlenses's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging dark emotional hopeful mysterious sad tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

5.0


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fictionalcass's review against another edition

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medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.0

I have complicated feelings about this one. Unfortunately the main character’s personality was just so grating that I kept checking out of the story, despite being really interested in the dynamics of the world. I think all the characters just verged way too far into hot mess territory, which really took away from the best elements of the book. There are some really powerful friendships and connections, but when everyone is making the stupidest choices while all being scholars in miscommunication…it became too much. 3⭐️

greywarlock's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging dark emotional funny hopeful inspiring fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

Edgmon writes protagonists with inner monologues that will feel deeply relatable to anyone born after 1980

millibee's review against another edition

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4.0

The premise of this book has me so excited since before it’s release date. I finally got my hands on a copy!

I really enjoyed the relationship between Wyatt and Emir and the way they were fated mates with a lot of shit to sort out. Reading The Witch King gave me some nostalgia for when I read faerie books like Wicked Lovely as a teenager.

I would have really loved some more world building though and some more dimension to our side characters. I can’t wait to see what’s in stall in the next book!