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3.68 AVERAGE
3.68 AVERAGE
2.75
This has potential but the dialog is a bit wooden and there are plenty of things that crop up that seriously test credulity, much less suspension of disbelief.
Will give this another book to see if the voice shakes itself out.
This has potential but the dialog is a bit wooden and there are plenty of things that crop up that seriously test credulity, much less suspension of disbelief.
Will give this another book to see if the voice shakes itself out.
CNF at page 130. FYI, kidnapping people to mate with them is gross, wrong and scary. It is not heartwarming and cute no matter what planet you commit your rapes on. Additionally, the writing is at about a second grade level. Seriously? Not only am I appalled, but I have now lost 100% of my respect for humanity. I hope I get beamed up soon.
The story was excellent. I totally loved it. I understand the complaints that she needs an editor for the book, as it is very true. But to be honest after a while I did not notice because I was engrossed in the story.
It just like that sometimes. If there is a connection to a book, I can overlook quite a few things. But that is just me and I know that not eveyone feels that way.
It just like that sometimes. If there is a connection to a book, I can overlook quite a few things. But that is just me and I know that not eveyone feels that way.
I would have rated it higher if it was edited better. The story is good, the writing atrocious.
Appalling editing - if it was edited at all! - but the Mars Needs Women trope (caution: that link takes you to tvtropes where you may be trapped for days) is one of my guilty pleasures and not since [a:Kaitlyn O'Connor|99326|Kaitlyn O'Connor|https://www.goodreads.com/assets/nophoto/user/f_50x66-e0ba3b90c110cd67123d6a850d85373e.png]'s [b:The 9th Orb|1610650|The 9th Orb|Kaitlyn O'Connor|https://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1185846907s/1610650.jpg|1604319] has it been so well achieved. Yes, even with all the misspellings, tense shifts and wrong words.
So, if you're looking for a sexy, engaging, mindless sci-fi romance to unwind after a rough day, give this one a chance!
So, if you're looking for a sexy, engaging, mindless sci-fi romance to unwind after a rough day, give this one a chance!