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Make Your Move by J. Bree

natacha_mo's review against another edition

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adventurous funny tense fast-paced

4.75

aprilhawthorne's review against another edition

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4.0

  • i actually think i liked this one more than the first, which is rare for these types of series’
  • the guys got more redeemable for the most part, treating the FMC with more of the respect she deserved
  • and holy shit she got SO MUCH MORE BADASS in this one i absolutely LOVED IT like they were so wrong to underestimate her and i love the shock that comes with her reveals
  • there was one point where a rumor was going around that she had sex with a random guy in their school and the MMCs who had just started becoming close and tolerable with her immediately all took it out on her and shut her out and were rude as hell while at first refusing to hear her side of the story even though they knew her for OVER A YEAR while the guy who made the rumor had been there a few MONTHS and they all HATED HIM ALREADY
  • it was kinda odd how the MMCs went from immediate jealousy with each other about the FMC to just being totally fine with sharing after one conversation, but seeing as i hate internal conflict, it’s not that big of an issue i guess
  • i still hate that her name is Lips and that they also only call her Mounty, it’s just cringe in both regards
  • Lips is also SO oblivious and naturally driven toward blaming herself and self-hatred when there are problems with the guys which usually annoys me but for some reason i found it kind of endearing in these circumstances
  • it’s kind of hard to believe how Avery went from being a traumatizing, roofie-ing, item-destroying bitch to all of a sudden just being Lips’ best friend who she spills her deepest secrets to, like Avery is the literal reason she has more trauma now than before so it just felt more unrealistic than usual lol
  • and Avery being pro-MMC romance but then every time something even slightly romantic between them happens she goes all “EW COOTIES I’M GONNA KILL YOU BOYS” just annoyed me a lot, like bitch you said you supported this, so support it 🤨
  • i don’t know if i have the stamina to read the next one as it is a lot more gang-focused from what i can see, but i will be going through now and reading the boys’ point of view of this story in the later-released book by J Bree - i wanna know what these bitches were thinking bff all throughout

lexijas's review against another edition

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5.0

NAH BRUH THIS

lexxacat's review against another edition

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challenging dark emotional tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.0

monanava123's review against another edition

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mysterious fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.0

momandy's review against another edition

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adventurous mysterious slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

5.0

cerentha_reads's review against another edition

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dark emotional funny sad tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.25

barb_ie's review against another edition

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dark emotional tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.0

hcaticha's review against another edition

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5.0

Second read and I liked it as much as the first time around. Her friendship with Avery is adorable and the pinning is perfect. Harvey is a gentleman, Blaise is incredible and Ash, well, he’s just my favorite. The perfect blend of asshole and caring.

peachrose8515's review against another edition

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dark emotional funny tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0