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4.12 AVERAGE


3.5 but Part One was 5 stars and well worth the read.... and you KNOW why!!
I'll be writing fanfic of how I wanted this to go for the rest of my life
adventurous challenging dark emotional tense slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated
adventurous funny hopeful mysterious tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated
adventurous dark emotional tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

3.5 stars. I was entertained the entire time and couldn’t put it down. But ONCE AGAIN, the dialogue in this series was so cringey it was almost unbearable. Bryce feels like a 10-year-old girl in the 90s. For instance, her favorite insult in this book seemed to be “pathetic loser”. If I read her call her father that ONE MORE TIME I was going to lose my mind. SICK BURN BRYCE, YOU REALLY TOLD HIM GIRL!! Also alphahole. Stop trying to make alphahole happen, it’s not going to happen! I physically cringe every time. And lastly, “They’re not desserts! They’re people!” I burst out laughing at that, and it was not supposed to be a laugh out loud moment.

The crossover was not everything I wanted it to be, and several of the events at the end felt so corny I nearly rolled my eyes so hard they got stuck. But all in all I enjoyed the plot and the good outweighed the bad for me.
adventurous dark emotional funny hopeful inspiring medium-paced
adventurous emotional medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: No
adventurous dark hopeful medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Rating HOFAS a 3.5 ⭐⭐⭐
adventurous challenging mysterious medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated