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The Right Move

Liz Tomforde

4.35 AVERAGE

emotional lighthearted medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
emotional funny medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
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erikawarrix's review

4.75

“sometimes the quietest love is the loudest.”

RYAN SHAY. RYAN FREAKING SHAY. Why is he literally the best MMC I have ever read?? Right from the point he bought her a bed with the sheets of her favorite color, l loved him. His actions just kept getting better and better as the story progressed.
Every time I thought I couldn't love him any more, he proved me wrong. But the part where it was revealed that he was learning ASL to communicate with her father?? The moment he got his sign name I cried! As a deaf women I loved the representation of a deaf character and the use is asl! The way the signs were described were perfect!! Also the fact that he paid for her fertility treatments right after knowing what she was saving the money for And he bought a house for them right after they got together!!  I felt soo giddy over him that, sometimes, I actually had to pause in between to take breathes and adjust to the things I felt lol.


related so much with Indy about her people pleasing habits and some other things (most things actually except her love for hosting and being such an extrovert), so maybe that made this book stand out even more to me.
I loved how Indy's heartbreak was portrayed as well. Too often I see the scenario of the heroine being cheated on by a long term boyfriend and it's always so cliched and glossed over. I understand the need to focus on the current romance but humans are not robots, there isn't a reset button and we do carry our past with us even if we heal from it. I liked her progression of getting over the ex. I liked that she still suffered from the betrayal but day by day she blossomed more and more and eventually got to have so many realisations about herself, her friends, her ex relationship and she saw her heartbreak as blessing in disguise.
 book could've been 100 pages less tho, the pacing was slightly off because the ending felt like it should've been around the 80% mark; the last 20% unnecessarily dragged on for WAY too long the conflict was so pointless and could've been skipped bc the reader wouldn't miss anything.

“you should never have to beg someone to be ready for a future."
lighthearted medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

smiller8261's review

4.0
emotional lighthearted fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No
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mstrang24's review

4.75
emotional funny hopeful sad medium-paced
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
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sholcomb54's review

4.25
emotional hopeful lighthearted fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
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butterpup_kate's review

4.25
emotional funny hopeful medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
emotional funny hopeful inspiring reflective sad medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
emotional funny hopeful medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes