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cherbear's review against another edition
3.0
This was a really short passable scary story. Nothing too terrifying but worth the five or so minutes it takes to read.
universalbookworm's review against another edition
2.0
Very short read, and a very interesting idea; however it was not developed well enough to be great. It is a passable "scary" story but I think the fear factor was hindered by a lackadaisical first person narrative.
jcwesner's review
4.0
what a cool concept
Interesting short story! I will definitely check out this author again. I’ve not heard of this kind of concept about the subject matter before. (No spoilers) but now I want more.
Interesting short story! I will definitely check out this author again. I’ve not heard of this kind of concept about the subject matter before. (No spoilers) but now I want more.
schrodingersakane's review
2.0
I can see this being a very enjoyable short story, if it were written with a bit more...care.
The themes in it were interesting and creepy but I felt like it was written as though the author just wanred to get the ideas down and didn't go back to fill anything in or expand.
A very cool and creepy concept, so I'm disappointed it hadn't been given more care
The themes in it were interesting and creepy but I felt like it was written as though the author just wanred to get the ideas down and didn't go back to fill anything in or expand.
A very cool and creepy concept, so I'm disappointed it hadn't been given more care
ebees's review
3.0
I don't think it's quite fair to give it a 1-star review. I think it's worth a read if you like interesting stories and/or if you like short reads. I mean, it's 0=$1 on Amazon for Kindle and it's like 15 pages long. You seriously could read the story on your phone from start to finish as you brush your teeth. In that sense, it is worth reading.
However, come into the story expecting a short, interesting read. This has horror elements, but it isn't scary, suspenseful, or thrilling. The main character gives explanations of her experiences with her grandfather's teeth and, while it's interesting, that's essentially all it really feels like.
Don't come into it expecting perfection. Be accepting of an couple of errors. And just read an interesting free story while you brush your teeth.
However, come into the story expecting a short, interesting read. This has horror elements, but it isn't scary, suspenseful, or thrilling. The main character gives explanations of her experiences with her grandfather's teeth and, while it's interesting, that's essentially all it really feels like.
Don't come into it expecting perfection. Be accepting of an couple of errors. And just read an interesting free story while you brush your teeth.
nesshawk's review
1.0
Wow. Don't quite know how I stumbled across this one. Guess I'm amazed what constitutes writing these days. Seems anyone can publish an ebook. Juvenile, simplistic, unskilled writing. No sense of time and place. If intended, story had no element of surprise.
cherbear's review
3.0
This was a really short passable scary story. Nothing too terrifying but worth the five or so minutes it takes to read.
callyjean's review
2.0
This was a pretty typical horror story. Nothing special in the plot, more silly than scary, underwhelming writing. It's short and to the point, so maybe if you're really bored give it a try.
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