damn you christina, good work
lighthearted reflective fast-paced
mysterious slow-paced
challenging dark mysterious fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
dark mysterious tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Technically this is a poem, but it's a narrative poem so I'm counting it as a short story. Anyway, it was EXCELLENT. I've had it on my to-read shelf for a while, and with [b:The Goblins of Bellwater|33973968|The Goblins of Bellwater|Molly Ringle|https://images.gr-assets.com/books/1487692398s/33973968.jpg|54960132] coming out (inspired by this poem), I got in the mood to finally read it.

Honestly, not enough people write about goblins. They really should.
relaxing
dark fast-paced

what can i say? i'm a sucker for bodies and food as an imagery for desire and consumption?

a fascinating poem that can be read as a coming of age story, perhaps a metaphor for sexual violence from the goblins given the way that the goblin fruit is heavily sexualized. this reading would be particularly notable due to the way that laura & lizzie's relationship is--
Spoilerin offering her sister the goblin fruit to cure Laura of her ailment, lizzie turns their relationship sexual, so incest here, while still a taboo ("forbidden fruit") is the beautiful softness that comes after laura's assault.


another potent reading of this story is an examination of antisemitism in european literature/poetry. why is it these two young christian girls whose innocence are stolen by the jewish-coded goblins? interesting musings, and something i've started working on critiquing/commenting on by writing an adaptation of the story...anyways i digress. good poem.
dark mysterious fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes