You need to sign in or sign up before continuing.
Take a photo of a barcode or cover
emotional
lighthearted
slow-paced
I loved that man ! I will always love a man that worship his woman ! But ho boy that book was Long for nothing.
funny
lighthearted
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
A mix
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
Unfortunately there were many consistent grammar and spelling errors, sometimes with the same word. That might not bother some people, but I was certainly aware of it while reading. I didn’t think the problems were realistic or well flushed out. The third act break-up was very confusing to me. I didn’t love how the issues for the characters in the plot were explained chapters much later. There’s a way for writers to leave things up in the air for readers to interpret, but it’s better to just be straightforward with how issues/tension comes up (for example, the aftermath of miles at the bar in Palm Springs and who he talked to). Also there were some times where characters personalities were not consistent. Wren was always supportive of Miles talking about Carter, working through trauma, and getting back on track and back on the team… so I was really shocked when she interrupted Miles talking to the alumni player about his goals and Carter. It was so uncharacteristic of her to interrupt, to pout at him to dance with her, then sulk, and then ultimately dancing with one of his teammates to make him jealous. It just wasn’t useful for the plot and was really strange change for Wren. Wren’s sister was kind of a strange character and their dynamic was hard to piece together. I wanted to hold out and finish the story bc I love fake dating and Wren and Miles’ dynamic. I really enjoyed how their story didn’t completely revolve around their sports but also talked about school, social lives, and other interests (like Wren’s writing). I’m still going to look into Janisha’s other books in the future in case I just didn’t love this one :)
to be honest, i stopped reading this book on the 75% mark and for a good reason (to me).
it was the same thing over and over again, same conversations, it boring at this point. nothing had happened until the middle of the book which was boring. so many typos too, this book definitely needed an editor because it is unnecessary longer than it should be. and that's cause its repeating the same thing over and over again. honestly i could have used my time for something better but its whatever now. i saw the potential this book had, it just didn't reach it. i see how it could end, but i couldn't care less about the end.
2.75 ⭐️I liked the story line but couldn’t get past the amount of grammatical errors! Also in one of the chapters the MMC has green eyes and then brown eyes and then back to green the following chapter
lighthearted
medium-paced
thumbs down
This was not good. It was very Wattpad. The gramatical and spelling errors were honestly so bad it was awful. The author really needs an editor. This book should have been half the length.
This was not good. It was very Wattpad. The gramatical and spelling errors were honestly so bad it was awful. The author really needs an editor. This book should have been half the length.
This book was such a drag. It should’ve been about half of the length and I felt like I was reading the book embodiment of a Naruto filler episode. So many spelling mistakes :,(