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oliverreeds's review against another edition
adventurous
tense
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.25
Okay. This book has the heart and soul necessary for a good YA novel/novel in general; however, it was simply confusing. The first third of the book is completely dedicated to characters who either die or become increasingly unimportant. In making the first section so long, the author lost something important. She overemphasized how important these people were to Zafira instead of showing it. I wanted to see what Deen meant to her, what her sister meant, what Yasmine meant. The dialogue is amazing, but there was too much showing. Specifically with the Deen timeline: what? why was he there? what did he prove? what did the book gain from him being there and then going with Zafira? It didn't add anything to either character. The journey to Sharr was also like one page. I wanted it to be longer. I was confused at how much time was spent establishing the norm for Zafira and then how little that actually mattered. Three-four days were spent in her home town and it did almost nothing to further the plot. It isn't like Deen motivated Zafira in any way. She made a half-hearted promise to him but like overall his inclusion was just... unnecessary in my opinion. And then there was the whole thing with Zafira's mother. It would have been so much more impactful had it been written, described, understood differently. As a reader I had no attachment to the character before she started laying down trauma and recovering from it. I had no emotional stake for her and her mother's relationship. Also in terms of plot introduction, sometimes the chapter would just start. And things would be different in a weird unexplained way and I would fully go back a couple of pages to make sure that I didn't miss something. Like one time they're j chillin on Sharr and the next chapter they can't find Zafira? There's no explanation for her being gone. There's not like we went to sleep and then woke up and now we can't find her. She just is somewhere else. Same with the darkness subplot. There was a lot that could have been done with that. The foreshadowing. The ~energy~ was there but it wasn't enough. I was just confused. What do these power mean? What are the stakes I think the biggest issue I had with this novel were things a good editor should have caught. There were a couple of character inconsistencies. The chapter openings were often unexplained. The subplots were not explained, foreshadowed, or developed enough. The lore was absolutely beautiful but the author expected the reader to just know it. It needed to be presented in a better way for the minute detail aspects. It seems like the biggest issue in terms of plot had to do with transitions. Whenever there was a lull, BAM weird chapter where something happens that is important!!! But it was unexplained. It was out of pocket. I think the author just needed to listen more to her story. To focus on how someone who didn't know the world would see it.
Things I loved: the characters. They are all incredibly distinct. They are the reason i kept reading. The writing!!! Is beautiful. This author describes characters in such a clear, precise, and beautiful way. The metaphors hit so hard. Just wow. I think that this author is incredibly talented. She clearly had a vision, knew her characters, and crafted a beautiful world, but some things just fell short. They didn't work quite the way they should have. I would love to return to this author once she has written more and really honed the novel crafting and transition aspects of writing.
Things I loved: the characters. They are all incredibly distinct. They are the reason i kept reading. The writing!!! Is beautiful. This author describes characters in such a clear, precise, and beautiful way. The metaphors hit so hard. Just wow. I think that this author is incredibly talented. She clearly had a vision, knew her characters, and crafted a beautiful world, but some things just fell short. They didn't work quite the way they should have. I would love to return to this author once she has written more and really honed the novel crafting and transition aspects of writing.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Blood, Body horror, Bullying, Child abuse, Child death, Chronic illness, Confinement, Death, Death of parent, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Fire/Fire injury, Gore, Grief, Kidnapping, Misogyny, Murder, Physical abuse, Racism, Sexism, Suicidal thoughts, Torture, and Violence
maurits's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.25
I'm bit conflicted about this book. It has a lot of great components, but also clear missers. On missers: when it comes to handling the mixture of grief and distrust, I think the author kind of glosses over it. Moreover, an important theme in the book is darkness, but we are sort of left in the dark (haha) about the specifics and how darkness relates to magic. Lastly, it can get kind of annoying that the author uses Arabic or made-up words that definitely can just be in English. I understand wanting to preserve things like "habibi" and "hayati" (both terms of endearment), but things like "hashashin" (assassin) and "shukrun" (thanks) are better to put in English.
But the things that I like about the book are more numerous. First off, Faizal's writing style is impeccable. She knows how to choose her words, and it makes her writing a pleasure to read. An example:
But the things that I like about the book are more numerous. First off, Faizal's writing style is impeccable. She knows how to choose her words, and it makes her writing a pleasure to read. An example:
You and I are strangers, Huntress. Allies by circumstance. We may leave Sharr and never think of each other again. But in this moment, we are two souls, marooned beneath the moon, hungry and alone, adrift in the current of what we do not understand. We hunt the flame, the light in the darkness, the good this world deserves. You are like Tamin. You remind me that hope is not lost.
Second, the setting deserves mention. The fact that Faizal is building on Arabia for her fantasy world helps defeat some clichés.
Lastly - sort of related to her writing style - Faizal knows how to take you on a journey with the characters. I wouldn't say the characters are exceptionally well-written (because they're not) but you can actually feel what they feel.
The plot isn't much special, but it didn't bother me. I suck at predicting plots so any plot is surprising to me.
All in all, 3.25 stars. I would recommend it. I hope, in future books, Faizal will further improve her writing. She shows great promise and I'll keep an eye on her upcoming works.
Lastly - sort of related to her writing style - Faizal knows how to take you on a journey with the characters. I wouldn't say the characters are exceptionally well-written (because they're not) but you can actually feel what they feel.
The plot isn't much special, but it didn't bother me. I suck at predicting plots so any plot is surprising to me.
All in all, 3.25 stars. I would recommend it. I hope, in future books, Faizal will further improve her writing. She shows great promise and I'll keep an eye on her upcoming works.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Blood, Death, Death of parent, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Murder, Physical abuse, Torture, and Violence
Moderate: Child death, Confinement, Grief, and Misogyny
aseel_reads's review against another edition
adventurous
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
obsessed 😍😍😍 this was definitely an Arab inspired fantasy, all the language, food, clothes, political system, loved it!! I really liked the characters and their personalities/dynamics!! said NO WAY so many times at the end, which is always a good sign!! the plot was semi unique but I really enjoyed it. can't wait to read the next one
Content Warnings
Graphic: Death of parent, Emotional abuse, Grief, Murder, Misogyny, Sexism, Torture, and Violence
Moderate: Confinement, Injury/Injury detail, Kidnapping, and Mental illness
sadiefc's review against another edition
adventurous
emotional
funny
mysterious
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
Content Warnings
Moderate: Abandonment, Blood, Confinement, Death, Death of parent, Injury/Injury detail, Torture, and Violence
sapphic_reader's review against another edition
adventurous
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
5.0
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Gay side character
Gay side character
Content Warnings
Graphic: Violence, Murder, Grief, Gore, Death of parent, and Blood
Moderate: Child abuse, Confinement, Misogyny, and Torture
Minor: Kidnapping, Child death, and Animal death
bookishundercover's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
emotional
funny
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
I really loved this book!! The first 160 pages was too slow!! Hard to get in to. But after that I forgot I was reading! It was hard to love Nasir character but after getting to know him and his background I started to like him. Loved Zafira!! Just....I love her!! And Altair is my comfort character.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Abandonment, Child death, Colonisation, Confinement, Cursing, Death, Death of parent, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Gaslighting, Genocide, Violence, Torture, Sexual harassment, and Misogyny
baexlee's review against another edition
adventurous
inspiring
reflective
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
We Hunt the Flame is spell binding and magical and despite my initial challenges to adjust to Faizal's unique writing style I really enjoyed Zafira's journey. The story is told through Zafira and Nasir's third person limited point of view which allows Faizal to introduce the larger world and Nasir's complex character despite Zafira's rather limited experience beyond her own village and the Arz. Some of the things that I struggled with were related to my own preference with writing style, I just found that the shorter chapters and short sentences made it hard to motivate myself to read when I was picking up and putting it down constantly. If you don't like long winded writing then you will love this book.
Despite my qualms with the style, the overall story is beautifully told and the pacing builds Zafira into a stunning and compassionate heroine that is complex and multifaceted. This is not to say that Nasir falls flat in comparison to her in any way either, as their tale and the adventure the ultimately brings them together takes care to equally develop and pay attention to each of them as it builds. The thing that holds me back from rating this anything higher than four stars is that there were many times where I felt battles, conflicts or other challenges were resolved with a bit too little detail for my taste, some of them felt a bit too non-descript or fade-to-black so to speak. Now my opinion could very well be colored by the fact the last book I read was extremely over detailed in it's battle scene's, so take that with a grain of salt, but I believe my rating to be fair.
Despite my qualms with the style, the overall story is beautifully told and the pacing builds Zafira into a stunning and compassionate heroine that is complex and multifaceted. This is not to say that Nasir falls flat in comparison to her in any way either, as their tale and the adventure the ultimately brings them together takes care to equally develop and pay attention to each of them as it builds. The thing that holds me back from rating this anything higher than four stars is that there were many times where I felt battles, conflicts or other challenges were resolved with a bit too little detail for my taste, some of them felt a bit too non-descript or fade-to-black so to speak. Now my opinion could very well be colored by the fact the last book I read was extremely over detailed in it's battle scene's, so take that with a grain of salt, but I believe my rating to be fair.
Content Warnings
Moderate: Child death, Confinement, Death, Death of parent, Grief, Physical abuse, and Sexism
Minor: Blood
psydneigh's review against another edition
adventurous
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
I really enjoyed this book. One issue I usually have with slower paced books is that it can’t hold my attention, but that was not an issue with this book. I enjoyed the multiple POV. I liked how the chapters were relatively short, and I enjoyed all the characters and their relationships with each other. Altair was my favorite. Can’t wait to read the next one!
Content Warnings
Moderate: Child abuse, Confinement, Kidnapping, Misogyny, Physical abuse, and Torture
booksthatburn's review against another edition
adventurous
emotional
mysterious
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.0
WE HUNT THE FLAME drips with lush descriptions and evocative imagery, linked by the often scattered thoughts of two very different narrators as circumstances and a bit of a death-wish pull them inexorably closer.
I loved the setting and most of the characters. I was frequently lost in the prose of an individual moment but I find myself now able to recall the entire story, somehow whole in my mind even as the scenes sometimes felt scattered. If you’re reading this for the beautiful setting, twisting quest of a plot, and intense yearning to belong, you’ll love this. I plan to read the sequel because I want to know how this story ends. It’s literally part one of two, so a lot of stuff was left open to be handled later, but there’s a definite endpoint to the initial quest which brought everyone together.
The world-building is really really good, especially around language. The text is full of places where a word is left untranslated from the speaker's dialect (or possibly a completely different language, depending on the instance) and the point-of-view character thinks about the meaning in a way that conveys the translation. It happens a lot and helps to deepen immersion in the setting, since the the various regions having different dialects/languages is a very important part of this world.
If you’re planning on reading this because you heard it was queer, my answer is that it probably is, but I cannot predict whether you’ll be satisfied by the portrayals within.There’s a character whose every word drips with what looks like queer longing, but the main person he’s been possibly flirting with is completely off limits for plot reasons and he knows it the whole time. There’s a woman who dresses as a man and jokes about kissing her sister of the heart, but they don’t kiss, she drops the masculine guise very early on, and she ends up with a guy. It feels either like it was heading for maximum queerness in a society which punishes women simply for existing (the male guise was necessary for the main character to feed her family), or one which describes very intense bonds but resolutely caps any possibly queer bonds at platonic, no matter how intensely they banter and stare at each other. I don’t know whether almost everyone was straight or if several key characters were bi, but the book also doesn’t provide an answer. And so I’m left with “is it queer? Yeah, probably.
I loved the setting and most of the characters. I was frequently lost in the prose of an individual moment but I find myself now able to recall the entire story, somehow whole in my mind even as the scenes sometimes felt scattered. If you’re reading this for the beautiful setting, twisting quest of a plot, and intense yearning to belong, you’ll love this. I plan to read the sequel because I want to know how this story ends. It’s literally part one of two, so a lot of stuff was left open to be handled later, but there’s a definite endpoint to the initial quest which brought everyone together.
The world-building is really really good, especially around language. The text is full of places where a word is left untranslated from the speaker's dialect (or possibly a completely different language, depending on the instance) and the point-of-view character thinks about the meaning in a way that conveys the translation. It happens a lot and helps to deepen immersion in the setting, since the the various regions having different dialects/languages is a very important part of this world.
If you’re planning on reading this because you heard it was queer, my answer is that it probably is, but I cannot predict whether you’ll be satisfied by the portrayals within.
Content Warnings
Moderate: Blood, Confinement, Death, Gore, Kidnapping, Misogyny, Murder, Sexism, Torture, Violence, and Xenophobia
Minor: Animal death, Child abuse, Child death, and Death of parent
CW for major character death.megthepoet's review against another edition
adventurous
emotional
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Content Warnings
Graphic: Child abuse and Torture
Moderate: Child abuse, Torture, Confinement, Violence, and Murder