3.3 AVERAGE


Lucian and Dahlia?!
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3.0

This had a lot of potential to be a deep romance instead of just the surface level physical relationship. I felt disappointed because the romance was only hinted at instead of developed. I know it is slightly touched upon in future books in this collection, but it felt incomplete. It wasn't bad, but it wasn't great. 3 stars

Yummmmm Lucian !!! Loved it. Now I need to go to an auction and be bought
adventurous challenging tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
dark fast-paced

This was a meh read for me.

I delivered on the smut part, don't get me wrong. The issue was...the characters had 0 depth/substance. And I'd have let that be, but they did confess their "love" for each other and it felt like the "love" came out of nowhere. It just didn't make sense.

This is completely a soft-core bdsm setting. In that context this was so well written. Like it had me comparing this book to fifty shades of grey lol. And it wasn't too in ur face. Things flowed in and out so well. Tactfully and deliciously written.

The heroine wasn't that whiney, and the hero wasn't that annoying so that's definitely a win in a book where all the characters constantly sounded fake and forced. It was definitely more than I expected from the two MCs given they were so two-dimensional from the get go.

Plot-wise...there's kinda no plot. At least not one that makes sense. So if you're gonna read it, read it for the smut and don't expect much of anything else.

Quotes


Just thinking about my money woes stresses me out.

Subs and Doms are all familiar terms to me… I mean, everyone’s read Fifty Shades, haven’t they?

If the President of the United States is a member of Club X, I think to myself, then this entire country is going straight to hell.

A few hundred grand a month is a reasonable rate.

“You’re beautiful, Dahlia.” I turn to face the woman behind me. “These men know what real women look like.”

It was good. A quick read and an okay intro to Dom/sub relationships. It's a surface level book on the sex and BDSM aspect.
I did find it a bit much on the one true way type of bdsm and being a perfect submissive. They also didn't do anything too extreme on page
dark medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Read the salacious player’s club series instead…. This wasn’t great. Won’t finish the series. Check content warnings before reading. 
dark tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
emotional medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes