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La Fiancée by Kiera Cass

4 reviews

nerdybookqueen's review against another edition

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slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

1.0

I was so disappointed by this.

First, I'm just disappointed by the very prevalent use of slurs for Romani folks, combined with the tired and prejudice trope of associating them with thieves. This book came out in 2020. People have been talking about how offensive the word and the stereotype is for way longer. I expected better out of this author I had enjoyed before.

On to the actual book.

I really enjoyed the Selection series and The Siren. I did. They were fun, entertaining reads. I binged the first three Selection books.

This was no where near as enjoyable. 

The protagonist is boring. She's kind of stupid. Everyone thinks she's funny and charming but she just...isnt? The love interests are boring. The king isn't interesting, and the other dude is just kind of randomly there to cause conflict? I had zero investment in their story, they only talked a few times but I'm supposed to believe she suddenly fell in love with him? Like the king was shit too but damn at least you knew him longer. 

And who cares about the other love interest when he's just dead at the end? Like things where trailing along then suddenly, here's a massacre. Then back to boring.

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acogna's review against another edition

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lighthearted fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

0.25

This was the opposite of an enlightening experience to me. I felt I was reading something 400 pages long with the writing skills of a toddler. This genuinely is a horrible book and would not recommend it to anyone, not even my worst enemy.

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elderflower's review against another edition

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challenging slow-paced
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No

1.25


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mdemanatee's review against another edition

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lighthearted fast-paced
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No

1.75

When we meet Hollis she has already caught the eye of the king, an eye that before now ahas been known to wander the court. So, Hollis has no expectations beyond enjoying her time as favorite. But,  it soon becomes evident the king has plans to rise her higher. With an imminent arrival of a rival king, Hollis is moved into the Queen's suites and her ascension to the throne becomes a fact taken for granted. Soon she is balancing her existing friendships, politics, and the King's affections. But she also catches her eye wandering to the oldest son of a family from the neighboring kingdom that has recently taken refuge in the castle.

 I probably didn't go into this completely fair. I didn't find the Selection series to be good, but they were at least entertaining.  I did not enjoy the Siren. Still, Cass plays into a very specific brand of ballgown fantasy that can be appealing, especially to teens. And while I don't personally her writing is particularly good, it is easy and readable, which I do think serves her audience.

 Overall, this has thin characters, world building, and plotting with no real romance.
 Hollis' main character trait seems to be that at the beginning of the book she got in a play fight and fell out of a boat. (See, she's quirky and carefree.) From there it's that she makes the King, Jameson, smile. Everything else we know about her is from comparisons to her best friend. So, she's not shrouded in a. family scandal and apparently not particularly studious? And it seems Cass wants us to be able to see her grow into herself and find her voice and assert herself. But she's never particularly interesting. And in finding her voice, she still doesn't have a whole lot to say.

 This wasn't a romance. There is a love triangle if you squint. Or if you take that Hollis has two boys she picks between. But she doesn't really have a relationship with either. I hesitate to call her relationship with Silas insta-love, because they really have no chemistry. There's no development of that relationship. All declarations of feeling in either relationship are overly flowery and seemingly untied to any actual emotion.  So, if you're going in to this for the romance angle, know that going in. Rather, Cass seems to be using these relationship to try and position Hollis into having a personality. I don't think it works.

 Also, a slur, g**** was used twice, the first time when referring to a group of murderers that might be attached to the king of a neighboring kingdom, and why? Why was this very specific cultural slur needed in these two vague made-up kingdoms when we don't have a sense of the larger world...or even if Cass didn't know it was a slur, it should have been caught by the publisher. It serves no purpose and really took me out of the narrative. Especially as everything else was so vague, to have this be a thing that was specific? No thanks.

 I will be honest. I will probably read the next book to see where this goes because I'm interested in what Cass' vision for this is. But they're also quick reads. I wish I could have enjoyed this more. At least the Selection had a fun kind of camp to it.

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