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Fourth Wing by Rebecca Yarros

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kmsander4's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging dark emotional tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

I literally just finished this book and I'm not sure I'm ready to review it yet or that I'll truly do it justice.

I saw this book explode online and simply decided I had to read it to see what all the fuss was about. I didn't read a summary, didn't watch a single review video, nothing. I was honestly surprised when I saw the dragons on the cover and pages when I picked it up.

But I could not shut up about this book as I read it. There was a dystopian feel that reminded me of books I read when I was much younger, but then there was spice that was definitelt not from the books of my childhood. I just couldn't put it down AND I couldn't stop picturing it as a movie or tv show at every turn.

And then, and then you get to that ending. The final battle. The twists. The turns. The betrayal. And then the FINAL REVEAL?!? That had me truly gobsmacked. While I did see the creatures they battled at the end coming, I did not see the final scene unfolding like that at all and hooooooly crap was I surprised! 

Cannot wait to get my hands on book 2!!

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adventurous challenging dark emotional funny sad tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0


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laurenleigh's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

If I did quarter stars, this might be a 4.25! I’m not quite sure if I understand the extreme amount of hype, but I did enjoy this. I can see why it’s often grouped with ACOTAR (fantasy romance with some definite spice), but I liked this way more than that. There seems to be a greater acceptance and mainstreaming of more explicit sex scenes in fiction these days, and I’m all for sex positivity! I also LOVE how this is the second spicy book I’ve read recently that talks about consent, even if briefly. It felt like if you removed dragons and magic from this, you’d just have a modern day enemies to lovers romance in a military school. Personally, I could have used more fantasy, more diving into the magic systems.

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mattiedancer's review against another edition

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adventurous fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

Writing: 3⭐️/5 
The writing was there. I’m a big quote person. Generally, I write down at least one quote from every novel I read, one line that just felt so beautiful and powerful I can’t resist putting it in my notes app to look back on it later. I don’t have a single one for this book. And that’s not to say it’s poorly written. It’s more of the opposite: it was well-written, but unremarkable. It existed to serve both the plot and the characters and, while that means there was nothing terribly wrong with the writing, it was not the book’s strong point either. 

Beyond that, I believe the novel started at maybe the worst possible start. I either needed more of Violet’s life before joining the Riders or less. I had a sliver of it, and it served only to push back the action without doing any concrete service to the characters or the plot.

Characters: 4⭐️/5
Alright. Xader is amazing. Love him. Perfection, don’t change a thing. Our main character, Violet or Violence: she’s very awesome, but I felt like her inconsistencies as a character were pushed off as ‘character growth.’ I saw no scribe here, despite everyone’s insistence that there was one. I saw a nerdy girl with a love of reading, but not a scribe, and it bothered me for the first half of the novel, despite loving the strengthening and self-improvement of our MC. The side characters felt forgotten at times and well-fleshed out at others. And Dain. He’s believable to a point, but I really had a hard time taking him seriously after a while because he was too easy to hate. I wanted a bit more out of him. But also, I had fun with the characters, and I’m pretty sure most fantasy-novel lovers would, too.  

Plot: 3.5⭐️/5 
A world with a strict government that is allowing the death of many innocents. A girl who is exceptional in her powers, despite looking small and weak. A rebellion alliance that is gaining traction. A love interest who is forced upon our main character. It’s a lot of things I’ve seen before, and a lot of things I’ve seen before together. That’s not to say I didn’t have fun reading the plot, but I found myself often a bit bored with the tropes and overused plot points. At one point I found myself wondering why we can’t have a functional government in fantasy novels. After all, it is fantasy. And the fact that I spent a portion of the novel daydreaming is probably not the best evidence for a fully engaging and exciting plot.

World: 4.5⭐️/5
Can’t help but add a whole category to my review process in order to tell you about this world. I was intrigued and enthralled by this world. I loved the dragons and, even more, I loved that the dragons rule this world. I enjoyed the powers, the explanation of the academy, and the vibrancy of the processes the dragon riders had to undergo. I tired a bit of the exceptionalism of the world – I don’t need an explanation of fertility suppressants, personally. We can just call birth control, birth control – but otherwise, I found it fun, exciting, and intriguing.

Who Should Read This Book? 
  • Fans of ACOTAR & TOG
  • Fans of dragon-centered books
  • Readers not deterred by a few tropes and predictable plots
  • Someone looking for a fast and fun fantasy read

Content Warnings? 
  • Death, sexual content, death of parent, grief, torture, murder, fire/fire injury, blood, ableism, violence, war, bullying

Post-Reading Rating:  4.25⭐️/5
Will read the next book; however, I am not excited for us to pretend to be mad at the main love interest for the first bit.

Final Rating: 4⭐️/5

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adventurous inspiring medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0


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adventurous dark inspiring mysterious tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0


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selestre's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional mysterious medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0


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adventurous mysterious tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

Amazing from start to finish! It was so hard to put down. Can't wait for the next book to come out!

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passionatereader78's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging emotional hopeful sad tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

Where to start with this explosive book! I was sucked in from page one! The epic battles, spicy romance, secret societies, corruption, and DRAGONS. And were still in the academy. Violet has been informed by her mother that she will be a Dragon Rider instead of a Scribe which she's trained for all her life.  Violet realizes she has to fight to stay alive in this school she attends with all of the children who lost their parents in the rebellion. Many would be happy to take their revenge out on her since they can't get to her mother.  She has heart and courage which attracts her Dragons to her. Now she has to learn to stay on her dragon.  That's just the beginning!

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spootilious's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.0

 Read: October 11, 2023
 Title: Fourth Wing
 Series: The Empyrean #1 
Author: Rebecca Yarros 
Genre: New Adult Fantasy
 Rating: 2/5
 Review: 

I won’t say that I didn’t enjoy this book…. Honestly, if I didn’t enjoy reading it I wouldn’t have given it 2 stars… it would have been lucky to have 1. 

I could spend pages discussing what I didn’t like about the book but instead I’ll list the things I like and disliked then put some notes at the end. 

Dislikes first because there are so many: 

·         This book would have been better if it wasn’t in first person. 
·         The writing is very juvenile 
·         The storyline is unbelievably predictable (including the ‘twist’ at the end) 
·         The plot may have worked better without such a heavy focus on the romance. 
·         The romance includes EVERY single cliché I can think of (and I do enjoy dark romances so it’s not that I don’t like a good romance… it just need to be… not bad.) 
·         Repetitive 
·         The worldbuilding is extremely lacking. 
·         The protagonist basically gets away with everything 
·         The protagonist has not self-accountability 
·         The objectification of other sexes 
·         I’m unable to find a single original idea in the plot. 
·         So many plot holes! 
·         Endless use of the words Fuck and Hot 
·         The dialog is TERRIBLE. 
·         Every character is unbelievably immature (including leadership and the parents). 

Likes: 

·         Liam is definitely a gem. 
·         The plot was entertaining if unoriginal. 

Ok, so digging into the details. I have a feeling that if Yarros chose third person for this book it wouldn’t feel so immature or cringe worthy because we wouldn’t be listening to a lot of the cliches that are present. The writing feels like it should be a YA book and not New Adult (though the sex is obviously what pushed it into the category) I probably would have enjoyed this WAY more if it was YA. This was a book club book for us and I made my predictions less than 100 pages into the book about the war and how the book would end and sadly I wasn’t wrong, though it may be because Yarros seemed to take bits and pieces of all the best selling fantasy franchises (particularly ones that have been made into movies) and copy and pasted them into this one after just changing some names. 

I love a good romance, especially enemy to lovers with some really dark themes… but this felt, once again… juvenile, forced, and utterly cringe, and to be honest I’m too lazy to provide examples but pick a page at random and I’m sure the main character feels tingling at the back of her neck because the man in question entered the room, or her body heats because she glanced at him, or his core turned to liquid…. Which brings me to my next point, the back and forth and romance between the two main characters were so repetitive that it was almost painful and I really just wanted to skip it all and get back to the story. 

The world building is lacking as well. The reader only get tidbits here and there and only if the author thinks its necessary but because of this the sense of the world is so vague it hurts. The reader should know a lot more about the war, considering that this is taking place in a school for military cadets that will be fighting on the front lines… instead it’s ‘guys with griffins are the enemies and they’re attacking us’. Okay…. Who are they? Why do they attack? Did they use to be part of us and broke away? That would make sense with the whole unification thing… Are they attacking the government or just the land…. Etc etc. (this is just an example and the answers can be inferred but they’re never truly explained). 

Moving on to the main character who basically undermines her leadership and is constantly insubordinate and breaks practically every rule and never gets in trouble for it. She also never takes responsibility for herself. Everything is always because she’s too small or fragile or because of someone else… and I’m not here for it. 

I’m gonna skim over the objectification of the sexes, because it doesn’t need explaining. As mentioned above the story line seems to be cut and paste from a lot of very popular franchises. When I started reading I even mentioned to my buddy that it reminded me of Hunger Games, then Harry Potter, Mulan, Game of Thrones… I could go on. Unfortunately, I wasn’t able to find a single original aspect to the story, which I was a little disappointed in because, as I said, I enjoyed the read… But then again who wouldn’t if its made up of some of the best and most consumed fantasy entertainment out there. 

The plot holes were bothersome for me. I won’t go into too much details to avoid spoilers, but specifically the final War Game. It he main character is so smart then why isn’t she asking questions about the control of the enemy to participate it in, or how could she not come to the conclusion of both betrayals on her own… That along with the reasons the failings are happening and the 400 yr verses 600 year thing… Idk… It’s super bothering me though. 

The last three dislikes roll together honestly. I’m so sick of the words Fuck and Hot that I’m ready to pull my hair out. The dialog sounds like a bunch of horny kids just reaching puberty. Actually that’s not fair to the kids… The characters themselves acted that way as well. Even the ‘adults’ or leadership figures were immature even if they didn’t have that kind of dialog. I mean… Violets mother was so one dimensional it was painful. Evil step mother vibes much? 

I can’t even justify my likes. The only character I found the least bit rounded was Liam. Which I can’t say more about… So… yea. 

Will I recommend this book? Yes, absolutely. To those individuals that love to read YA and are looking for a step into New Adult or Fantasy Romance like The Cruel Prince or ACOTAR or something similar and have never really been interested in High Fantasy. 

 

Will I read book 2? Also yes, as I said I enjoyed the book and despite all my dislikes of it would come back for more. I think its important to realize that something can be objectively mediocre or bad and still have value/still be enjoyable. If it wasn’t we wouldn’t have junk food XP 
 
 


  Quotes: 
 “One generation to change the text. One generation chooses to teach that text. The next grows, and the lie becomes history.” 

 


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