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Stepbrother Prince Part 1 by M.P. Tanner
Purchased: Free on Kindle
My Rating: 1 of 5 Stars
Spoilers!
What's it all about?
Ella’s mother married a King and now has a new stepbrother who is a prince. She fights her feelings for him until he makes her cave in.
The sad part about this story is that is literally all I have to give to its description.
The Best Parts:
I couldn’t find anything redeeming about this book which is sad because I love the Cinderella story, but this one didn’t even feel like it was anything. There were too many flips of character personalities between Ella and the prince. There was also a lot of grammar and technical errors that needed to be fixed.
The Worst Parts:
This story is just a story. There isn’t any substance to what is going on. There is no character development at all, and the characters are dull considering there is only two with a few other people that only get mentioned. All this story focuses on is the sex that never happens until Part 2, and even then all the sexual actions are on the prince’s part. Also, the prince doesn’t even have a name. No one but Ella and Prince Michael have a name.
One thing that I found disturbing was that when Ella and the prince were in a compromising situation the prince pushed too far. Ella was a virgin and basically all but told her that she WOULD give that to him. He forced her into each sexual act until she caved. Even when she said NO he still went on. I felt very uncomfortable with reading this, but finished just to see where it would go.
Final thoughts ...
I accidentally clicked on this book and got it for free, so I said why not just read it. I will not be reading Part 2, and recommend that the author go through and expand on the story. It could be good if they actually tried harder. I know this all sounds harsh, but it’s my honest opinion.
Purchased: Free on Kindle
My Rating: 1 of 5 Stars
Spoilers!
What's it all about?
Ella’s mother married a King and now has a new stepbrother who is a prince. She fights her feelings for him until he makes her cave in.
The sad part about this story is that is literally all I have to give to its description.
The Best Parts:
I couldn’t find anything redeeming about this book which is sad because I love the Cinderella story, but this one didn’t even feel like it was anything. There were too many flips of character personalities between Ella and the prince. There was also a lot of grammar and technical errors that needed to be fixed.
The Worst Parts:
This story is just a story. There isn’t any substance to what is going on. There is no character development at all, and the characters are dull considering there is only two with a few other people that only get mentioned. All this story focuses on is the sex that never happens until Part 2, and even then all the sexual actions are on the prince’s part. Also, the prince doesn’t even have a name. No one but Ella and Prince Michael have a name.
One thing that I found disturbing was that when Ella and the prince were in a compromising situation the prince pushed too far. Ella was a virgin and basically all but told her that she WOULD give that to him. He forced her into each sexual act until she caved. Even when she said NO he still went on. I felt very uncomfortable with reading this, but finished just to see where it would go.
Final thoughts ...
I accidentally clicked on this book and got it for free, so I said why not just read it. I will not be reading Part 2, and recommend that the author go through and expand on the story. It could be good if they actually tried harder. I know this all sounds harsh, but it’s my honest opinion.