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Strike the Zither by Joan He

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bluejayreads's review

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3.25

I didn't realize when I picked this up that I'd already read one book by this author before - or at least attempted to read, as I DNF'ed Descendant of the Crane in 2021. But the back cover on this one sounded much more interesting, and I didn't DNF the other book for being bad, just because I wasn't able to get into it - which could very easily have been more about my mood than the book itself. So I gave this one a shot. 

And at first, I was really glad I did. I didn't love the world-building - I've read too many fantasies set in actual ancient China, so this Chinese-inspired world felt like a discordant mishmash of ideas instead of a cohesive world, but I could live with that. What I did like was Zephyr, who was clever, calculating, always three steps ahead of everyone else (a trait I love in a character), and some intriguing combination of dedicated to her warlordess and desperate to prove herself useful. And even though the plot involved a lot of politics, it wasn't slow and managed to involve a fair bit of action and intrigue along the way. 

The back cover really doesn't tell you much about what's in the book. The infiltration happens almost immediately, and while Crow is definitely an antagonist, he's not really a major player in the story. Just about every bit of the story you think you're going to read wraps up in part one. Then in part two things go way off the rails, and that's where I started to really struggle. 

My big criticism of the story itself is that it sacrifices background for speed, and that blunts any potential emotional impact. I don't disagree with the choice - a long setup would have done the story a disservice. But often the reader finds out about crucial pieces of information the moment they're supposed to be connected to an emotional moment, so the emotions have to share my attention with the process of mentally putting this new information into the overarching picture of the book. This also makes the big revelation at the start of part two feel unexpected, but in a jarring, random way. I may have had a different experience if I'd read Romance of the Three Kingdoms, the Chinese classic that this series is based on, but I haven't. So maybe this is true to the original, but it was still difficult for me. 

The problem I had with part two, and the reason I won't be continuing the series, is definitely a case of it's not the book, it's me. A major event at the end of part one and a character's response to it at the beginning of part two resulted in one major character ending up in the body of another major character. I do not like body-swapping. I can't even really explain why, it just makes me extremely uncomfortable. It's worse if the body-swapped characters try to pretend that they are the person whose body they're in, which also happens here. So I spent most of part two wanting to leave the situation but also hoping that the characters would get back to the right bodies, because I was sure I would start to like it again once the body-swapping thing was fixed. But based on the ending and reading the back cover for the sequel, I think the characters are likely to stay in the wrong bodies until near the end of book two. And I do not want to deal with that. 

On the whole, this is not a bad book by any means. It had a lot of aspects that didn't do it for me, personally, but that's not a judgement on the book itself. I'm having a hard time expressing any sort of overall opinion about it because the biggest thing I didn't like about it (and quite possibly the smaller thing I didn't like as well) were all matters of personal opinion. I like the ideas, it's well-written, and it kept my interest despite being fairly politics-heavy. It just has some elements that aren't for me, personally - but might be for you. 

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olive_lol's review

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adventurous medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.25

Whether you like Zephyr will make or break this book for you. I loved Zephyr, so I had a great time reading. Her ego gives the narration so much personality, and every description reinforces her character and how she sees the world. I spent most of the book ignoring her romance, though. I thought it was unnecessary, and I was more invested in other parts of the story.

Because of the nature of the plot twist in the middle, I felt like the second half was somewhat disconected from the first. However, putting Zephyr into a warrior's body is a clever way to spark character development, considering she originally didn't respect warriors.
I also wish we had gotten to know side characters like Lotus and Cloud better in the first half.

Overall, a fun book with a lot of personality and a divisive protagonist.

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azrah786's review against another edition

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3.25

 **I was provided with an ARC through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review**

CW: violence, blood, injury, war, death, animal death, death of parents (off page), vomiting, physical abuse, terminal illness, grief

It breaks my heart to say this but I did not enjoy this book as much as I had hoped to :(
I absolutely loved both of Joan He’s previous books, I just felt like there was something missing for me in this one that I can’t entirely put my finger on.

Strike the Zither is a reimagining of the Chinese epic Three Kingdoms with the twist that the leading characters are predominantly female – it has such an noteworthy and unique premise but I just couldn’t click with the story.

Don’t get me wrong He’s writing and twisty storytelling is as brilliant as ever here and the characters were interesting and well established enough. However, the fast pacing with not much action was reminiscent of She Who Became the Sun and Daughter of the Moon Goddess, two other reads that I didn’t vibe with this year for similar reasons.
Everything was happening too fast for me, relationships and alliances included, and then the big plot twist didn’t shock me at all, I just skimmed over it and continued reading without much other thought.

Maybe being more familiar with the original story that this was inspired by would have given me a better understanding and appreciation for the nuances and links but unfortunately this wasn’t my cup of tea so I doubt I will be picking up the sequel.

If you’re a fan of historical c-dramas and Wuxia then I’d definitely recommend checking it out though!
Final Rating – 3.25/5 Stars 

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caseythereader's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.25

Thanks to Books Forward PR for the free advance copy of this book.

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marywahlmeierbracciano's review

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adventurous challenging medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes

5.0

This book is chock-full of some of the most badass female characters you’ve ever met.  A feminist retelling of an ancient Chinese classic, this women-led epic is a wartime story of loyalty, trust, honor, and betrayal—it’s absolutely brutal, at times.  The narrator, Zephyr, is a brilliant young strategist who is always three steps ahead, predicting and orchestrating events with pinpoint accuracy, until something unforeseen changes everything.  Be prepared to get hooked on this series!

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