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Thirteenth Child by Patricia C. Wrede

mrsbrharris's review against another edition

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2.0

A lot of the characters bothered me. I was confused by the setting-some things were similar to real history and I couldn't figure out where the deviations were. That doesn't really make sense, but I was kind of confused. I did think the end was good. I will get around to reading the second one sometime, but I'm not in a big hurry. Maybe they will get better :)

kangokaren's review against another edition

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5.0

Very good. Coming of age in magical, alternate USA world. I really liked the main character, Eff. Can't wait to read the sequel!

kitdunsmore's review against another edition

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3.0

I love the premise, the world, and all the set-up, but things don't really get going until the last quarter of the book. hoping the sequel will pick up the pace.

inkfire's review against another edition

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5.0

Marvelous worldbuilding, well-rounded characters, and an intriguing plot. Excellent pacing, amazing character development - honestly, I couldn't ask for more.

fiatlux78's review against another edition

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adventurous medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.0

rgjpointer's review against another edition

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2.0

It was slow at the beginning but the end made it a pretty good book

mamap's review against another edition

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3.0

i really am picky about my books! i find myself impatient with writing aimed to the young adult age. i found myself less impatient with this one. a young girl who is born an unlucky 13th in a family of 14 with a twin brother who is the lucky 7th son of a 7th son. in an america filled with magic and magical animals, life did not progress the same as it did in our history books. set soon after the 'civil' war as people are pushing to settle the west.
"Eff" must overcome her own personal demons to learn and use magic as only she can. this author lets you think without getting bored.

lisawreading's review against another edition

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4.0

I recently finished reading Thirteenth Child with my son, and while we both enjoyed it, I hesitate to declare this book an unmitigated success.

First, the good: In the world of Thirteenth Child, the American frontier is redefined as a place in which magic is the only thing standing between people and all sorts of deadly beasts. In the country of Columbia, the Great Mammoth River marks the barrier between civilization and the wild, and as settlers venture west, they rely on magicians to provide the protective spells needed to keep out the wild. The world-building here is quite imaginative -- a world in which magic is commonplace, used on a basic level to manage household chores and day-to-day tasks, and on a more complex level, to provide the means of human survival.

Main character Eff is a girl whose powers are just beginning to emerge by the end of this book. Brought up believing herself to harbor some inner evil, thanks to being a thirteenth child, Eff is hesitant and uncomfortable when it comes to using magic, until a gifted teacher introduces her to non-Avrupan (read non-European) approaches to magic. Eff's worldview is expanded, and she starts to tap into non-traditional approaches to magic, realizing that her talents may be positive after all.

The not-quite-as-good: Thirteenth Child is the first book in the Frontier Magic trilogy, and as such, has to cover a lot of ground in terms of exposition and explanation. Likewise, quite a lot of time is covered, as we follow Eff from age five to age eighteen. Because of the length of time covered in a relatively short book, many of the chapters feel more like summaries than actual events -- basically, well, that year, not much happened except Eff's brother went away to school, or, that year, Eff was sick for a while, missed a lot of classes, and ended up having to repeat a grade.

The author is building a world system from scratch, and at times the jargon threatens to overwhelm the plot. We have Avrupan magic, Hijero-Cathayan magic, and Aphrikan magic, as well as Rationalists, the North Plains Territory Homestead Claim and Settlement Office, and circuit magicians.

The climax of this volume involves a plague of grubs that threaten the western settlements, and Eff's role in fighting the bug invasion. The solution to the problem comes across like convoluted mumbo-jumbo, not that it's not exciting to read.

Finally, on the negative side, I'd be remiss in not mentioning the to-do over this book from when it first came out concerning the lack of a Native American population. The only people in the book are the (presumably) white settlers, with a couple of people of color mixed in among the townsfolk and school magicians. There isn't a native culture, at least not one that's mentioned at all in this book. Apparently, there was quite a bit of criticism over this when the book came out. As a work of fantasy fiction, I suppose it's the author's right to create whatever world she sees fit... but I leave it to potential readers to decide whether or not this is a deal-breaker for them.

Bottom line: My son and I enjoyed Thirteenth Child enough to continue with the series. Despite uneven pacing, the story itself is fresh and intriguing -- so that the duller parts are easily outweighed by chapters and sequences that are suspenseful and highly engaging.

surlymanor's review against another edition

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3.0

Interesting world building - I've heard it described as Little House on the Prairie meets Harry Potter meets hmmm, Jane Yolen (?) but the story is dragging for me & it's time to move on to the Summer Reading List. Maybe I'll pick it up again at the end of the summer.

marialuice's review against another edition

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adventurous hopeful slow-paced

3.5