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The City Beautiful by Aden Polydoros

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bluejayreads's review

3.75

I'm generally not interested in historical fiction or murder mysteries. However, I am interested in Jewish protagonists and characters getting possessed by ghosts, so I decided to give it a shot. And it was good. I read it in a single evening, which is impressive for a 500-page book, but honestly that says more about my mood that day than the book itself. Not that there was anything wrong with it - in fact, there was a lot that was good. The historical Chicago setting felt vivid, the characters were solid, the emotions were done well, the plot was strong, the romance developed well with a lovely touch of angst, and I loved the Jewish community and tradition that infused every page. But the possession element was much smaller than I expected (more a catalyst for the plot than a main element) and the primary plot was the murder mystery of tracking down Yakov's killer. Which, unfortunately, I wasn't all that into. Again, not a failing of the book, just a personal opinion, but mysteries in general aren't and have never been my thing. If you enjoy mysteries (and/or historical fiction), you'll probably like this a lot more than I did. Again, it's not bad, and there's a lot about it that's really good - it just didn't really appeal to my personal reading tastes.

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hobbithopeful's review

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adventurous challenging emotional mysterious tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.5

Queer Jewish historical fantasy? Yes please!
Aden Polydoros wows in this gripping tale about the demons inside all of us, and the consequences of guilt.
Set in Chicago in the 1890s Alter works himself to the bone, numbers running through his head all day as he saves up to bring his Mother and sisters over from Romania. His plans become derailed when his best friend is found dead, and soon he finds himself embroiled in the mystery of missing and dead Jewish boys. To make matters worse he has become possessed by Yakov's dybbuk, his past has come back to haunt him, and it seems his only solution is to ask his ex friend Frankie for help. (Frankie who is doing very well for himself with his mini crime empire, overall attractiveness, and assimilation into "American ways")
Please check your trigger warnings, as this does go to dark places. (It's worth it, I promise!)
I loved how incredibly honest and angry this book was. Every page just felt raw, not in an unpolished and unedited way, but as if the author was baring his heart and soul for us to see, his emotions bleeding through every page and character. (Seriously y'all, you can feel the rage and injustice) I saw so much of myself in so many of the characters, but most of all Frankie. I wanted to scream at the police officers who refused to help, and when

it is revealed what Mr. Katz has been doing to young boys, and Frankie, I cried. I wish such lengths could be taken for every person who has committed such despicable and inhumane acts.

I honestly went in with pretty low expectations after reading The Bone Weaver, and to say this book blew me away was an understatement. The City Beautiful has won a ton of awards, and rightfully so.
The only reason this isn't a 5 star read for me is I felt it kinda slowed down near the end. It was all going so well and great and then

with multiple different bad guys it was a bit hard to keep up with and

I just felt like it lost steam for me.

I highly recommend this book, and with a renewed interest in the author, I look forward to what he will write next.

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tangleroot_eli's review

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adventurous challenging dark emotional hopeful informative mysterious sad tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated

H.H. Holmes/White City + dybbuk + queer Jewish immigrants + anarchist + right up my alley! Gorier than I usually go for but well worth handling the "ick factor."

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toopunkrockforshul's review against another edition

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challenging dark emotional hopeful mysterious reflective sad tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Plot
Strong character development? It's complicated
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

5.0

Loved this book! Its definitely not "feel good" in the cozy and soft sense but it made me really happy to have so many Jewish and Yiddish references. The mystery was also very compelling, and I loved the development of

Frankie and Alter's relationship

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spookily's review

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adventurous dark emotional sad tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

5.0

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leahkarge's review against another edition

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dark emotional tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? N/A
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.0

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jessthepiratess's review

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dark emotional mysterious tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.5

Rape, Pedophilia, Sexual assault

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thecriticalreader's review

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dark sad slow-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Plot
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.75

I bought The City Beautiful by Aden Polydoros because I am obsessed with everything related to the 1893 Columbian Exposition, which happens to be surprisingly underrepresented in historical fiction. Thus, I was intrigued by this book because of its historical setting.

Blurb:

Alter Rosen is a seventeen-year-old Jewish immigrant who turned his back on a life of crime and wants nothing more than to keep his head down and work to buy his family’s passage from Romania to the United States. When his friend Yakov dies in a mysterious “accident,” Alter recognizes an ominous pattern of Jewish boys who go missing. Alter is spurred to avenge Yakov’s killer after he is possessed by Yakov’s dybbuk, or spirit, and he unwillingly ends up working with an old friend from his criminal days, Frankie. Alter struggles between his forbidden desire for Frankie, his need to avenge Yakov, and his resolution to be a law-abiding member of his religious and civic community as he finds himself confronting the wealthy and powerful who control Chicago.

Helpful Note:
If you are anything like me and do not recognize the many Yiddish words and phrases used in this book, the glossary is at the back of the book!

Review:

The strongest parts of The City Beautiful rest heavily on Polydoros’s strong character work, especially with the protagonist, Alter. Alter, despite being a little pathetic, is a believable and likable character and his voice shines through on every page. His motivations and development are easy to track as the plot escalates. Side characters such as Raizel and Frankie, although significantly less developed than Alter, are similarly likable and fun to read about.

The prose in the book is adequate most of the time, although Polydoros has an annoying habit of repeating certain phrases too often. Some of these phrases stuck out to me as particularly amateurish or fan-fictiony, such as “purred” or “my knees weakened.” The most annoying offense is that he describes one character’s eyes as being “sepia-colored” at least four times. Whenever he used these words or phrases, I was pulled out of the story.

The biggest flaw of this book is that Polydoros tries to do too much all at once, resulting in a story that feels claustrophobic and underdeveloped. Each individual element captured my interest—the backstories of the characters, the Jewish mythology, the dybbuk possession, the Chicagoan history, the queer love story, the mystery of the missing boys—but none was addressed with enough detail or complexity to sustain my attention. The book felt especially bogged down by the complicated plot in the last quarter, and I had to push myself to keep reading at times. The villains, in contrast with the main characters, came across as flat and one-dimensional. The City Beautiful could be significantly improved if the author either cut certain elements to focus on others or if he had expanded the book to address everything adequately.

As a history major who specializes in this time period, my expectations for historical accuracy are far more stringent than the average reader’s. I am pleased to say that the author gets the big details right. There were no glaring errors or inaccuracies that I picked up on, although I am not well-versed in Jewish immigration history. He captured the most important trends of the time and place, especially when it came to America’s class divide and industrialization.

***The rest of this review lies more in the realm of personal taste rather than objective criticism***

Modern historical fiction authors inevitably bring their biases and agendas into their stories, which can create tension when they want to create stories that are set in the past, yet at the same time champion certain contemporary ideas about identity and class. They especially face this tension when writing about queer relationships, because although queer people (at least how we think of them today) certainly existed in the past, people in the nineteenth century navigated gender in ways that can substantially deviate from the twenty-first-century paradigm. Authors can either research nineteenth-century gender and sexuality and attempt to create queer characters who accurately reflect how someone in that time period would think about gender and sexuality—even if that means writing about things that make modern readers uncomfortable or confused—or they can mold their characters in a way that appeals to current gender ideology. Either choice is completely valid, although I personally find the latter more interesting, and I find it difficult to suspend my disbelief when certain historical characters act anachronistically. Polydoros attempts to keep the historical situation in mind when he writes the queer relationship within The City Beautiful, yet for the most part, it feels quite modern.

I cannot speak to the historical portrayal of Jewishness, but my guess would be that it shares similarities in historical accuracy to the portrayals of queerness. At times, the author inserts what are clearly modern academic arguments about race, religion, and gender into the text, hitting the reader over the head with his viewpoint. To be clear, I do not mind historical fiction stories that have an agenda or something to say that pertains to modern society. However, I appreciate it when the issues are tackled with subtlety and sensitivity for the historical time period.

The Run-Down:

You will probably like The City Beautiful if you love the idea of a queer Jewish historical fiction fantasy/mystery, enjoy books in the Young Adult category of literature, and want to learn more about Chicago and Jewish culture/immigration in the 1890s.

You might not like The City Beautiful if you are uncomfortable with any of the content warnings (this book can be quite graphic and dark), if you dislike tropes commonly found within Young Adult literature, if you dislike historical fantasy, or if you are looking for a complex, nuanced dive into historical issues of race, religion, and queerness.

A Similar Book:

The Witch Haven by Sasha Peyton Smith. Similarities between these two books include:

· A Progressive-Era American setting

· Fantasy elements

· A protagonist who tries to solve the mysterious murder of someone close to them and uncovers the dark side of society’s ruling class in the process

· Romance

· Social justice themes

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kirani's review

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adventurous challenging emotional mysterious tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

I don’t even know where to start on this review because this book is EVERYTHING! It’s beautifully written, it kept me on the edge of my seat, it made me laugh, it made me cry. It’s queer, it’s Jewish, it’s fantasy, it’s historical, and it’s in Chicago! I really don’t know how to explain it but I *saw* myself in the characters and I love when I can connect to characters, so I was immediately hooked. Also I will think about

“I love you!” “I love you, too, that’s why I have to let you go.”

for the rest of my life.

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ashleycmms's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional informative lighthearted sad tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Plot
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus? No

5.0

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