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The Dance by S.R. Jones

pioneer's review

3.0

God, I missed Andrius. Every time he was mentioned I couldn’t help but grin a little. He does that to me.

But this story wise… it followed the basic outline for the mafia world.
Guy sees “innocent” girl and want to smash? Yes.
Girl gets taken or attacked? Yes.
Guy rescues girl? Yes.
Guy “kidnaps” girl? Yes.
Girl runs away after hearing guy lying about her? Yes.
Guy finds girl and explains? Yes.

Typical mafia template. Could’ve been more… unique.

They always fucking run. Always fucking run. Trust his actions more over his words. Wait for an explanation. But no. They always fucking run.