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Mirage

Somaiya Daud

3.7 AVERAGE


I liked Mirage!  Originally, I wasn't sure about it, because I had a hard time getting past the first couple of chapters.  I ended up giving the audio book a try, and I'm glad I did, because I don't think I would have made it very far otherwise.

Even with switching to the audio book, I had a hard time getting through the first few chapters.  Once I got past it, I was fine, but initially, I didn't care about what was going on, and it didn't really get my attention.  It took a while to get into Mirage, but once I did, I ended up liking it.

It's your typical brutal empire takes over a planet meets being a body double for the hated princess story.  It's a story I'm pretty familiar with, especially since the brutal empire and the rebellious people they're ruling over seems to be pretty popular right now in both sci-fi and fantasy.  I think, if I hadn't read other books like it, I would liked it a lot more.  I still liked it, of course, but I just wanted to like it more.  

I liked Amani, though it took me most of the book to remember her name.  I completely forgot that she was her own person for a good portion of the book and she didn't really stand out as her own person.  I wish I could say a lot more about her, but I'm having a hard time with that.  Amani and Maram felt like the same person, which was the point, but I wish there had been more to distinguish Amani as a person with her identity.  

The narration pretty much saved this book for me.  Zamaimri did a great job at narrating Amani, and what she was going through.  She was great to listen to, and while I thought Amani didn't particularly stand out as someone with her own personality, Zamamiri did add to her character.  There's something about her Amani's voice that worked a lot more for me, and I think it's because I did feel like Amani was telling me her story.

My Rating: 3 stars.  I didn't love Mirage, but I still liked it!  I'll probably pick up the sequel, just to see what happens but I'm not in any rush to read it.

This audiobook was such a unique read and leaves me craving the rest of the series. Daud creatively added her own twist to the Star Wars sci-fi genre making it feel like you were truly on a whole other planet. I didn't read the summary too closely so every plot point took me by surprise and I loved it. This series has potential to be a new favorite for me depending on how it continues. I highly recommend it.

An interesting premise, but the actual story isn’t particularly memorable. I really wish the Moroccan setting was more than just decoration and that the threat to the princess’ life felt real, more than a plot device.

I would’ve loved to read more about the various tribes, how the planet was terraformed, and how her religion functioned. Instead, we got lovely descriptions of palace buildings and clothing, interspersed with some interesting myths. Not quite the immersive experience I was hoping for. However, I must point out that this is Somaiya Daud’s first book and I’m still completely in love with the Daevabad trilogy.

I found the main character rather naive, especially after living in the court of her conquerors. Even after seeing and hearing what the Vas have done to her planet, she’s constantly surprised when they do something horrible. While I didn’t expect her to be ruthlessly undermining the system, she seemed to wander towards the rebellion out of luck. I did like her survival instincts, though. Otherwise, she reminded me of so many other YA heroines: tough, family-orientated, kind, unsure of her future, and just a little bit artistic (by not too much, because she grew up poor). Even her belief that Maram could reconnect with her family with a little love and trust goes to show how little she understands the trauma incurred by colonialism.

The romance seemed a little fast for my taste, although it’s hard to tell how much time is passing. Given that the two of them are caught up in a deadly game of politics, they get a pass. But, while it’s somewhat believable under the circumstances, it’s also insanely foolish to let their love put everything at risk. I know, I’m old and jaded, but those two made me what to yell at them, rather than cheer them on.

The story really shines when it came to its side characters. The few interaction we got with Maram’s friends were really interesting, and delving into their experiences of colonialism was my favorite part. And, of course, there’s Maram herself. She’s torn between worlds, which has formed her into a proper antihero. Maram and Amani’s friendship is easily the most interesting part of the book, given how badly things begin.

I think this book would’ve been hugely improved by showing us why Maram needs a body double. We hear lots of talk about threats, but Amani never once feels threatened, except at the hands of the princess. It becomes very clear very quickly that the rebels are absolutely no threat to her, but that’s simply not true—orders get misplaced, and insurgency is often bloody and confusing. I’m all for rebels and spying (court intrigue w/spies is one of my favorite genres) but it’s hardly utilized.

I hope to see more sci-fi and fantasy set in African worlds, but this book didn’t seem fully realized. This book suffers from prominent YA tropes, showing not telling, and a lack of action in genre. I’m a little frustrated, since the concept is so good, but I won’t be reading the rest of the series.

I can't BELIEVE I waited this long to read Mirage! It was exactly the type of book I ate up in high school, and it's still my cup of tea!

Political intrigue, sci fi / fantasy, and romance! SIGN ME UP.

Amani you are so loved by me: your strength, your hope, your sense of justice, your spirit, your courage. You are incredible. Maram I have SUCH hope in your potential. I see the seeds of doubt in you!!

I’d requested an ARC of Mirage and lucky me got sent a copy a few days ago from Hodder and Stoughton and I was ecstatic to have it in my hands. To some, the plot may seem ‘basic’ but if you think about it, it actually isn’t. I’ve never heard of a book where it has the same/similar plot and it really interested me as I wanted to see where the author would go with this. The setting was also really interesting as I hadn’t expected to be set in basically ‘space’ even though the characters mentioned and the places Amani visited are only one planet and its two moons on which people live on. I wasn’t sure if I was going to like that aspect, but actually, it made the book even more unique. At first, when Idris and Amani started acting on the feelings they had for each other, I was a bit alarmed as it felt sudden, but every time their affections for each other were shown, I was reassured with the fact that Somaiya was making sure to mention that they’d spent a long time together whilst as Amani was pretending to Maram in public and that it makes sense how ‘quickly’ they fell for each other. Getting closer to the end of the book, you see Amani and Maram’s relationship getting better and the beginning of the journey of Maram’s development as a person and it made really happy for some reason. I think that’s a reason why Maram didn’t mention what Amani did to Nadine at the end of the book, as she most probably still cares for her, despite the fact that she felt Amani had betrayed her. The ending was written so beautifully and it left not only Amani hopeful in the situation she was in but also the readers as the bird mentioned on the last pages was meant to reassure Amani that there was more to come for her. The book ended on such a beautiful note. It may seem like I give out 5 star ratings quite often but I only do it for books that I genuinely believe are amazing and deserve a 5⭐️. If you haven’t already, make sure you preorder this book before August 28th!

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there are a number of things i admire about mirage , and its vivid commentary on colonialism is at the top of the list. this story masterfully conveys the realities of a people living under the rule of their colonizers. it speaks of the pain of losing your own heritage and culture, and of forgetting your own language and history. as somebody who has lost so much of her own culture due to centuries of colonialism, this book really struck a chord within me.

however, despite my affection for some aspects of this book, there were also things that i wasn't quite satisfied with. i was not invested with the main romance, because for me it felt rushed and underdeveloped. i also think that not a lot happened in this book, which is not entirely bad since i get that it's only setting up Things for the second book. the ending also caught me by surprise in its abruptness. i wanted something more from the conclusion, which is why i was left unsatisfied when i heard the closing notes of the audiobook.

overall, this was a pretty good read but it felt lacking in some areas. still enjoyable though and im holding a lot of hope for the sequel!!

What I don’t understand...they have ships that fly through outer space, droids, and holograms, but no one gave the assassin a communication device to try to call off the assassination? The rebels give Amani a communicator, but to the one who is going to try to kill the heir they can’t so much as give him a mobile phone or something? Additionally, the story can’t make up its mind...are there electric lights or do they have to use lanterns? I would assume they’re advanced, what with the space travel and all, but they’re carrying lanterns everywhere?! Just weird.

As far as debuts go, this is one of the stronger ones I’ve read in some time. While the blurb promises a thrilling saga about survival, Mirage is focused less on characters dodging assassination attempts and more on holding on to one’s identity in the face of cultural suppression. I very much enjoyed Daud’s prose and her way of communicating emotion, which forged meaningful connections between characters and overcame what qualms I had about plot. While I talk about those qualms below, I do think that Mirage is a thoughtful book, and I am looking forward to the next installment in the series.

Writing: Daud’s prose is very descriptive and flows nicely without straying into purple territory. I wouldn’t call it “poetic,” because Daud doesn’t burden the reader with metaphor or lush descriptions of her world, but she does provide enough vivid detail to give the reader a clear picture of what’s going on, and then lets the rhythm and mood sweep the reader away. For example, Daud might leave a description of a palace as having “geometric designs” or a qaftan as “grey with red detailing” but focus more attention on how characters are feeling or interacting with each other.

Daud also has a talent for setting a good pace. While reading, I was worried that we were going to be subject to a lengthy “training session” in which Amani learns the ins and outs of court life, and while we do get some of that, it doesn’t go on for pages and pages. The training isn’t important, and Daud knows that. She describes just enough for the reader to get the idea of what kinds of things Amani has to learn and moves on. She also doesn’t linger in scenes that don’t need it, so we aren’t reading pages and pages of, say, Amani at a party - we get just enough to see Amani accomplish her goal before we’re on to the next thing. It was refreshing and kept the plot moving.

Plot: The premise of this novel is that Amani, an 18-year-old woman living under an oppressive regime, is taken from her home and forced to serve as a body double to Maram, the princess and heir to her oppressor’s empire. Amani’s people inhabit a planet called Andala and its moons - Amani herself lives on a moon called Cadiz - and are ruled over by the Vath, who have partially occupied, partially colonized the area. Though the Vath have a firm grip on power and have suppressed much of Kushaila culture (the Kushaila being one of the cultural/ethnic groups on Andala), rebellion still lingers in various pockets around the star system, threatening the life of Maram, who has made herself despised by the Andalaans through her cruelty.

The plot isn’t so much about Amani encountering life-threatening situations (by posing as Maram) as it is Amani struggling to hang on to her cultural identity. She becomes every bit the Vath princess, but finds comfort in her native language, her religion (or spirituality, or folklore - I’m not sure how to describe it), poetry, culturally-significant tattoos, and so on. As a result, this book is a wonderful exploration of how survival and preservation can be act of rebellion, which Amani herself thinks about this often. The sense is enhanced when we consider that Maram, the princess she is tasked to protect, is half Vath, half Kushaila, and struggles with accepting her Kushaila heritage, while Idris, Maram’s fiance and one of the few living members of a major Kushaila house, longs to connect to his native culture after living under Vath rule for so long.

Despite loving the message about cultural identity and survival, I do with Amani’s body doubling duties had been presented as a bit more risky than they were. The first few times Amani poses as Maram, there seems to be little threat to either Maram’s or Amani’s lives. Amani (as Maram) goes to a couple parties or visits Maram’s relatives or sits in on a political meeting - nothing where an assassination attempt seems to be a real possibility. The only time I got the sense that body doubling was necessary was towards the end, when more public appearances carried more potential for disruption. While I don’t think this book needed more threats of violence or “action adventure” to be considered “good,” I do think more risk could have enhanced the message about survival and sisterhood (which comes to fruition later).

Eventually, Amani does involve herself in riskier scenarios when she agrees to act as a spy, feeding information to the resistance while becoming increasingly more sympathetic towards Maram. While I liked that Amani got more to do, Amani’s efforts at playing politics seemed sloppy. While posing as Maram, she advises her father’s war council on which cities to bomb, which could have been a good subversion (to direct attention away from certain areas), but she advises them to bomb a culturally significant region of the planet and then acts like she had no choice. Moreover, Amani didn’t seem to be enthusiastic about the rebellion; she does her part, but it’s not necessarily a driving force in the decisions she makes. I put this down to her evolving feelings towards Maram, but still, I would have liked to see her be more passionate about the cause so that the conflict between supporting the rebels and supporting a friend is more pronounced.

Characters: Amani, our narrator and protagonist, is easy to connect with because she voices her emotions so much. The reader is always aware of how Amani is feeling, when she’s sad or lonely, when she’s finding comfort, when she’s connecting to others or to her poetry. Being privy to these emotions helped overcome moments when Amani is relatively passive. Throughout much of the book, Amani is obligated to do as she’s told, act as she’s expected, etc. which makes her seem like a mere pawn and just trying to survive the day. Of course, preserving her cultural identity is active, but I think even these moments could have been put into Amani’s hands a bit more. I also think

Maram, the princess for whom Amani serves a body double, has a very satisfying arc. She starts out cruel and arrogant, mistrusting everyone around her and doing her best to assert that she’s Vath, but over time, the facade begins to break down, and she becomes more sympathetic. I very much enjoyed how her relationship with Amani evolved, and her crisis of cultural identity complimented Amani’s story nicely.

Idris, Maram’s fiance and Amani’s love interest, is compelling in that he embodies a different facet of cultural suppression and identity crisis than Maram or Amani. He was only 10 when his family was wiped out for first rebelling, then surrendering to the Vath, and has primarily grown up in Vath courts ever since. He is engaged to Maram in the attempt to appease the Andalaans, making Vath rule more palatable if the heir to the empire is half-Kushaila and is married to a Kushaila. Idris remembers almost none of his native language, nor does he recognize the cultural significance of certain Kushaila things (like tattoos, etc.). His connection to Amani, then, is partially a connection with his native culture, and he learns more and more about where he came from by talking to her. While I enjoyed the drama inherent in his romance with Amani (how does one overcome the obstacle of being engaged to the princess but falling for her body double?), I did wish more was done to show a connection between them on a personal level. Idris seems to be in love with Amani primarily because of what she can teach him about Kushaila culture; most of the intimacy between them springs from discussions about Idris’ past or his lack of knowledge, with Amani filling in the blanks. Granted, there is a moment when Idris expresses admiration for Amani’s bravery, but I thought it was overshadowed by his draw to her as a representation of what he lost.

Worldbuilding: The worldbuilding in this story was fairly compelling, combining the realities of cultural suppression with a unique science fiction setting that drew on Middle Eastern/Arabic/Islamic (I’m not sure which, specifically) aesthetics. I liked how the richness of Kushaila culture contrasted with the minimalism and austerity of the Vath because it reminded me of discussions about aesthetics and class or aesthetics and power - the “clean,” conservative tastes of the ruling class are in part an exercise in suppression and conformity, so I thought that worked well in the political environment Daud had created. I do think, however, that there were times when Daud would introduce something and not make full use of it. Maram, for example, has a large bird of prey called a roc, which does Maram’s bidding - but it only shows up once. There are droids roaming around, mostly in combat or violent situations, but I frequently forgot that they existed because they are almost never integral to the scene. I hope that the worldbuilding will continue to grow in subsequent installments in this series, as I really liked what I read in Mirage, but just wanted a bit more.

Recommendations: I would recommend this book if you’re interested in science fiction and fantasy, space operas, questions of cultural identity, poetry, and growing rebellions.

The world building still vague for me, and i dont like the romance part :/ maybe it's just not for me

It truly felt nice to hear my language transcribed in a YA book. It felt amazing to read about instruments, clothes, and food inspired by my culture.
Thank you Somaiya Daud for this Arab inspired tale.