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Moderation

Elaine Castillo

3.88 AVERAGE

adventurous dark emotional funny hopeful mysterious reflective fast-paced
funny mysterious reflective medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
emotional funny reflective medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
emotional funny reflective medium-paced
dark medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: N/A
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
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DID NOT FINISH: 33%

The premise of this story really intrigued me but unfortunately it just didn't deliver. The writing is wonderful in many respects but I found myself glossing over many paragraphs of in-depth tangents about watches and lifting weights, wondering when the plot would move forward. It felt superfluous rather than necessary character building. The first third of the book is setup and I felt the pacing was just off.
A shame, but I found myself not really caring what happened.

i do love elaine castillo's writing very much and she has such a gift for lush grounded imagery and tender painful family dynamics. however i find heterosexual yearning (especially of the woman-desiring-man variety) intensely boring and the anglophile parts of this were kind of physically embarrassing to read. "everyone looked hot and well dressed" on the tube in london? they had their final reconciliation outside a COSTA? don't piss me off
dark emotional funny inspiring slow-paced
dark tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

It’s true, honest, well-observed. Tension built beautifully. 
Very present. Very of this moment. With all the references I kept wondering how well it will age. Reading it today felt intimate, immersive. 
The big fil-am family scenes … I can see my family in it vividly, and I teared up at the end. That was cathartic!