Reviews with content warning for Trafficking - Captive Prince

It's hard to put into words my feelings for this book. It reads a bit like fanfiction in that there are a lot of aspects of the world that seemed underdeveloped. And for a first book, while it definitely felt intriguing, I felt needed more to be able to call it a book with a plot. So when I found online that the story had originally been posted on Livejournal as a serial it made a lot of sense. This doesn't feel like a book so much as the 1st part of a story.

The sexual content also weighs the book down, I was thinking "do these ppl do anything else?" And again that made the world building feel underdeveloped. But it mostly goes away in the second half and that's around when the actual plot of political intrigue begins. I wouldn't have planned on reading the next books in the series based on the first half, but the second does have me hooked. But this book for sure isn't like, high literature. It's pulp.

Big trigger warnings for sexual abuse.

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magicshop's review against another edition

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challenging dark tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? No
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

2.5

'Is there anyone at this court who isn't my enemy?'

'Not if I can help it,' Laurent said.

this book got me out of a months-long reading slump and was actually quite enjoyable for the most part, despite all my notes of mild-to-extreme disgust peppered throughout and my actual score. buckle up, it's a long story.

p.s.: if you read this review, regardless of anything else, make sure to pay attention to the many, many warnings listed below it.

you should read this series if...

you're looking for a well-written queer enemies-to-lovers story full of satisfying cliches that are deliciously coupled with the author's clever originality, the literary cherry on top
you like political intrigue and worlds that feel alive and lived in without getting overly convoluted
you're willing to get through a rough first half of the first book; more details in the actual review below

the good

solid writing style "despite" having fanfiction-adjacent (original fiction published serially online) origins. in my experience i think fanfiction has had some of the best writing i've seen in my life, so i've never quite found this argument very fair, but there you have it.
lots of words for me to learn! i consider this a positive cause i like learning new language bits and it wasn't so excessive that i needed to pick up a dictionary every 5 words or anything. it was a perfect amount. apparently the author used the story as a kind of thesaurus exercise, which explains a lot. this aspect was mostly lost in the 2nd and 3rd books as she became more focused on other aspects of the writing process instead.
political intrigue up the wazoo.
this book had me guessing 3 different possible scenarios within 2 pages as resolution for a plot point.
this just so happens to be one of my favorite things for any media to do so i was charmed instantly
interesting and mutually unique characters, who become infinitely more interesting and well-developed as the series goes on

the bad

no real plot until uhhh. halfway through? it's pretty much just exposition coupled with varying flavors of sexual assault. 😬
the pov main character has a bizarre and partly sexual fascination with fair skin, while being dark-skinned himself and oh did i mention he's also a slave. enough said lol.
this would not have necessarily been a negative had it been explored adequately by the story, but that was not the case. this fascination does, however, dwindle to practically nothing for the remainder of the series.
the pov main character (again, curiously so since he's supposed to be the least offputting character — i actually think he has some of the most ingrained controversial shit to unpack) has a bizarre and vaguely pedophilic fascination with another character's "beautiful" 14-year-old face, among other, more concerning adjectives
and my biggest fear: that the previous two points are actually a trait of the author and not of the characters involved. this is admittedly unlikely since, like i mentioned before, pacat thankfully reduced the presence of most of the upsetting elements from this book as she wrote the rest of them. i assume she realized their precariousness and how much her story's success depended on hooking the reader without potentially triggering them every other passage. as far as i know, in many ways captive prince started as an experiment and wasn't meant to be much more than a story exploring multiple sexual concepts, but quickly became more than initially imagined. pacat therefore adapted, and very well at that.
like previously mentioned: excessive rape/sexual assault/coercion scenes, if there can even be such a thing as a "necessary" or story-sanctioned rape scene. this is the most controversial and most famously debated point within this book. my personal take is that some scenes are excusably useful to the setting and the story and others, the majority, seem to be there simply to attempt to titillate the reader, if they're inclined to react in such a way to that kind of content. these i quite disliked and wish they hadn't been there. the book shows a lot of promise in ways entirely unrelated to these acts, almost as if there's a divide within it. see my next point.

the complicated

the slow heel-turn (i promise these words can go together lol) from
sexual slavery fantasy sprinkled with political elements book to full-on political intrigue book was. something. i read the second half of this thing within a day; i couldn't keep my eyes off the twists and turns it took.
this would go (and sorta did go) in the good section, but fits better here because i do absolutely wish the first half had been... easier to digest and enjoy, to put it mildly.
damen's entire deal.
he's incredibly hypocritical when it comes to vere's culture, being that his own country not only also keeps slaves but actively grooms them to be submissive and docile. he does not see this as a point of contention whatsoever from what we see in this book, and in fact acts as if akielos is the morally superior society.
this goes in the complicated section (instead of the bad one) because much of it is further explored in-depth in the subsequent books.

i think this book's controversial status is well-earned, and i didn't indiscriminately enjoy the entire ride. nor did i completely hate it. i think having grey-colored opinions about things, especially pieces of media (especially especially pieces of media that are only one part of a as-of-yet unknown whole), is a natural and healthy course of action. this is the case here. i enjoyed, then didn't enjoy, then enjoyed myself again, several times, throughout this story, and i don't regret reading it for a second since it introduced me to one of the best-written love stories i've ever seen in media.

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dark tense medium-paced

3.5

I certainly followed the hype to this book, and was left almost…dissatisfied, isn’t the right word, but something along those lines.

The story is intriguing enough that I want to continue the series and see where it heads, but the actual writing (narration, dialogue, scene building, etc) was subpar, tbh.

Going in fully armed to deal with the horrific subject matter and CWs, I didn’t find it to be as brutal as I expected, though I don’t know if that says more about me than the actual content! Certain scenes are uncomfortable, and just seem titillating for titillating’s sake.

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nicamooch's review against another edition

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adventurous dark funny tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.75

The amount of foreshadowing just in the first few chapters of Book 1 that don’t get their payoff until the final book is incredible to me. I liked Book 1 the first time I read it but I wasn’t wowed and after finishing the trilogy it didn’t stand out in comparison to Book 2 & 3. It was definitely better on the re-read, I really love the world building, the political intrigue, the development of Damen and Laurent’s characters. There were aspects of Damen’s character arc that were built in this book, that I had forgotten about when I’d gotten to Kings Rising and in that book some of his actions had felt out of nowhere to me—but going back to Captive Prince now, it was there!! It was still budding but it was always there!! 😂

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megsg's review against another edition

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dark fast-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? It's complicated
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? N/A
Flaws of characters a main focus? N/A

4.5

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adventurous challenging dark emotional tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

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