challenging dark mysterious tense slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
dark sad tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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slow-paced
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No

What was the point of this. Thought the first story was going somewhere but it doesn't. Did think the format was interesting but the way both characters talked pulled me out of it a lot. 

Just not for me.
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
challenging dark emotional mysterious reflective sad fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
dark emotional mysterious sad fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
dark tense
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4.0
challenging dark mysterious reflective fast-paced

First story I’d give ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Second story ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Third story ⭐️1/2

Last story felt kind of xenophobic tbh

Readable prose, but none of this really hit quite right. The titular short story felt like a poor attempt at doing Brainwyrms (which I didn't love, but at least it nailed the execution in a way that this didn't). It all felt like it wanted to be meditations on humanity but it couldn't do something really compelling. As I recently saw someone say about a different piece of media: it's all sauce, no meat.