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The Forever Watch by David B. Ramirez

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mysterious slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.0

The story and mystery was fantastic, as were many of the characters, but the writing as a whole was problematic.
The full first half of the book reads like it's trying to be noir in space, but it's written from the love-interest's POV instead of the detective. I think it took almost a third of the book before it passed Bechdel, and there was a lot of weirdness over how Hana referenced or noticed her body. Also, wtf, why was rape necessary to the story? Just a weird catalyst that didn't seem to do anything except make Barrens want to be around her; could've just as easily been a robbery or death of a loved one or something. Just odd. And the lascivious gay bestie/assistant? Great character without that stereotype.
Just lots of unnecessary choices.

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