Reviews with content warning for Child death - The Battle Drum

I just.. whew. This plot got thicker and more twisty in all the right ways! I need Book 3 to hurry up and come out. Took off half a star because Anoor’s character development I wish would have not been so painful at times.

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malinhalia's review against another edition

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adventurous fast-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Plot
Strong character development? No
Loveable characters? No

0.5

I will admit I wasn't going into this book unbiased as I disliked book 1. So why read the second one? I really wanted to review it, and I was intrigued about where the plot was going after the reveal at the end of the first book. I also hoped that maybe the writing would be better than the first, but boy, was I wrong.

The characters are extremely one-dimensional and most are straight up unlikeable (unable to conjure the slightest bit of empathy, emotion, critical thinking, or even a consistent plan of action). The writing style itself is very heavy-handed and every plot point is carefully and patronisingly explained to you in detail (you really don't need conclusion-drawing skills to read this book). In addition to this, the author in multiple instances unnecessarily spoils the plot in advance by having chapter openers (for example, notes to or from certain characters). This works well in some books but not in this one. They detract from rather than add to the story, as they make - in some places - several chapters unnecessary as the plot point is glaringly clear from just this short text. The writing is choppy and doesn't feel suitable for a book marketed to an adult audience.

Whilst I found the background of

the Zaalam, the Kabut religion and how it came to spread to the Warden's empire

, I thought this was the only redeeming thing of the book. The magic system, which is a very interesting concept in itself, is very underused throughout the book. The plot is shallow and so much of the book feels superfluous - I think it would have worked better as a shorter, more carefully edited book.

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alilbitofeveryth1ng's review against another edition

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slow-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.25

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caseythereader's review

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adventurous challenging dark mysterious tense slow-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.25

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barda's review

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adventurous challenging dark mysterious sad tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? It's complicated
Loveable characters? No
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.75

I'm very frustrated by having to rate this book so low, but I definitely didn't enjoy it as much as the first book.

The first book had some flaws, but I still broadly enjoyed the characters, the setting, and the worldbuilding. While this second book fixed my biggest pet peeve of rapidly switching POV's (this one had the more standard format of a chapter only having one character's POV), it felt like this one was actually more confusing than the first one, and that the author lost plot momentum from the first book.

The characters just weren't as likeable in this book. I still really enjoyed Hassa and she's easily a stand-out character, but Jond was just boring and Sylah was not in the book enough for me to judge her characterisation. Anoor, however, I was the most disappointed in. Like Sylah, it feels like she barely has any screen-time in this book, but most egregiously she seems to regress in all of her character development that she gained in the first book. I hate to criticise characters who make seemingly stupid mistakes, as oftentimes they'll be realistic mistakes that you might expect one to make, but Anoor keeps making mistakes over and over and doesn't seem to learn from the negative impacts of these. She's incompetent and seemingly regains her naivety that she grew out of in the first book. This makes the twist

of her being the Child of Fire also come out of left-field, as she goes from being exceedingly naive and sad to suddenly angry and wanting revenge over the space of a chapter

.

The plot certainly had some interesting bits, particularly with the Academy and how the cultures of the mainland work. I did also broadly enjoy the plot reveals towards the end of the book; however, they were all suddenly shoved into the end of the book leaving little room for the characters to breathe, and many of the plot twists could have been revealed and solved earlier if characters simply communicated with each other (

for instance, with Jond not telling Sylah that the other disciples were Sandstorm - what was his reasoning for not telling this to Sylah in the first place? It's not really explained in the text

).

Broadly, this book's usually interesting plot was dragged down by its characters and overall characterisation. I still might pick up the next one when it comes out as I think the mysteries that have been set up are worth reading, but I do hope that the author can figure out where they want their characters to go.

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hailstorm3812's review

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4.25

I think this was an interesting second installment in the series. The twists and turns had me on the edge of my seat. I audibly gasped at the end. The development of 3 of the POV characters was so good.

I hate to admit it, but especially Jond. Anoor on the otherhand is being manuevered to have interesting developments in the next book so made a lot of not good choices now.

Excited for the next book!

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luckylulureads's review

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adventurous dark tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

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4.5

[This review can also be found on my BLOG]

**I was provided with an ARC through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review**

CW: violence, blood, injury, death, child death, murder, miscarriage, body horror, self harm, addiction, drug use, emotional abuse, physical abuse, sexual assault, torture, confinement, religious bigotry, colonisation, slavery, medical content
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A good sequel expands the world, continues the story on from what came before and keeps you engaged. The best sequels twist the additional world building and the new direction of the story in such a way that it circles back to everything that came before and sneakily links everything together so perfectly that you’re left floored. That is exactly what Saara El-Arifi has done here.

The Battle Drum is a phenomenal follow up to the fantastic The Final Strife.

We return to the Warden’s Empire and the malevolent Tidewind with a handful of new mysteries unravelling, splitting the 3 primary protagonists on journeys of their own. Anoor as the newly appointed disciple of her mother, the Warden of Strength, wants to use her position to help all the people of the nation, not just the ruling class, but suddenly gets accused of a murder and has to work to prove her innocence. Hassa, as ever working in the shadows is also still in the Warden’s Empire and stumbles across another string of dead bodies with their own mystery. And Sylah has of course set off beyond the borders of the Empire to uncover the secrets of the outside world and hopefully find help to stop the Tidewind before it destroys all.

“The world is broken, but like an eggshell, life can bloom from broken things.”

Rejoice because there is a handy recap at the beginning of the book to catch us up to speed with the key events of book 1! Though I personally felt all was immediately familiar anyways as El-Arifi’s storytelling immediately sucks you back in. Through Sylah’s mission as well as Anoor and Hassa’s personal quests we’re introduced to new places, new faces and new reveals about the deeply rooted history of the world and it is all wonderfully compelling.

There are some additional perspectives added to the mix too, one being a known character who supplements Sylah’s chapters well and another point of view from a character all new, an outsider, who adds much in terms of intrigue, worldbuilding and the magic which is meticulously expanded on in this sequel.

It’s always fascinating to see when an author shows how multifaceted their magic system is through how it is interpreted and used differently across cultures and locations in their stories. At times it did feel like there were a lot of moving parts in this book but trust me the way everything falls into place is so so clever just be patient with it, I’m definitely not getting over it anytime soon!

Some things to expect from the first book that are the same here are that sometimes the chapters aren’t chronological and will take you back in time a little but this doesn’t throw you off too much. In fact past and present work hand in hand beautifully in the story but I shall say no more.

“Forgiveness should never be requested. Only granted. Work for it.”

The characters and their development are again equally frustrating and fascinating to follow. Anoor probably annoyed me the most out of everyone with how naïve she seemed at times but as I mentioned before when everything clicks into place just wow I have so much to say but also want to keep my mouth zipped because spoilers…

Hassa is still my favourite character and I thought I’d end this review by stating that Saara El-Arifi I do not forgive you for chapter 50, HASN’T MY BABY SUFFERED ENOUGH!?

Anyways, I enjoyed this sequel immensely and will now be eagerly awaiting news on the big finale that is book 3 because it is without a doubt going to be epic!
Final Ratings – 4.5/5 Stars

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