186 reviews for:

When it Raynes

Montana Fyre

3.64 AVERAGE

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monuj's review

3.5
dark emotional sad tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: No
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brianas_bookhaven's review

4.0

Rating: 4⭐️’s
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martiq_16's review

3.0
lighthearted relaxing

emmajean44's review

1.5
dark tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

The insta-love from Rayne was a bit annoying. This book also became very repetitive. I swear the same sentence was rewritten slightly differently every two pages. This book could have been edited to be about half the length and it would’ve been a good novella. I probably won’t continue the series. 

rosarinho's review

2.0
dark emotional tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
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rileyk's review

2.5
dark emotional tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

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mrsmorris0620's review

3.5
dark emotional tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
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pslili1998's review

2.5
dark tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
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haleiyoung's review

3.0
dark medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
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msjodi's review

5.0
dark tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

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The way Rayne takes care of Emerson…it’s everything! 

Emerson is struggling, workin 3 jobs to pay off debt her ex left her in. She and her father run a youth center and that’s her real love. It’s there she meets Rayne who’s volunteering. Rayne is the “enforcer” in his family who owns “Frost industries” which skirts between legit and criminal. 

Rayne falls first and is obsessed with her and will do anything to keep her safe but will Emerson let him? 

P.S. Emerson is a bad ass! 

This book was so good! 

Tropes: he falls first, mafia, touch her and die, one bed trope, close proximity, Strong willed heroine 

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