186 reviews for:

When it Raynes

Montana Fyre

3.64 AVERAGE

vmith4's review

4.0

This first book I have read by Montana Fyre and it didn't disappoint. This is an Ininstant attraction mafia romance. Emerson and her dad own a youth center that she loves. Her ex screw her causing her to have to work 3 jobs. Raynes is having to do community servies to fixs heis public image. Emerson is miss independent and helps others, well not letting them help her. And Raynes is an possessive alpha male that gives huge touch her and you die vibes. This 18+ please check tw. And i cant wait to read more by montana.

tinarae90's review

5.0

I received this as an ARC and really enjoyed it. Already looking forward to the next book and the rest of the Saint James family.

khriz26's review

5.0

I was lucky to be given this as an arc to read and this is my honest review.

This book was an amazing read.
Mafia based romance.
It was fast placed, lots of drama and spice fantastic storyline.
I loved raynes character of cause he was the guy who did all the dirty work in the family but showed a caring and beautiful side in his own way on top of his need be over the top possessiveness towards her.
Falling in love at first sight with emerson she takes time to realise she did too. She is well written and you will fall in love with her and raynes relationship.
The ending i cant wait to find out whay happened

First book ive read from montana and ill definitely be looking forward to read the next one in this series and more.

msuttle12's review

5.0

So much more than expected

It was rough and dirty. Rayne is the perfect alpha male. I didn't know what to expect from this but it was so much more. This is my first book from author Montana Fyre. I hope to read more from this series when it becomes available.

charlie_'s review

4.0

Insta obsession / Insta love
Mafia romance
Lots of spice / BDSM

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_ninareads's review

3.75
dark mysterious medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No
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drkrmnc's review

3.25
lighthearted fast-paced

It gave what it said would give, obsessive MC, enjoyed the way he talked. Book pet peeve tho, when characters have parents that live very close to them but are written like they live across the world, like why isn’t her dad calling her. But still enjoyed it for what it was.

I found this author via Instagram when I came across someone promoting When It Raynes. Mafia romance is my guilty pleasure, so I immediately went and read some of her previous works, and when I found how compelling Fyre’s writing style was I headed straight to the ARC application form and was lucky enough to be gifted one!

When It Raynes has so many of my favourite tropes.

Instant Attraction
He Falls First
Possessive Alpha Male
Praise Kink

As well as this the balance of mafia violence to romance was executed well. I look for a good dose of the drama and angst that comes with the mafia plot, and Fyre does a fantastic job of ensuring that side of a mafia romance is included.

I will say that I think the ending felt a little bit rushed compared to the steady pacing of the first chunk of the book, but overall this was a fantastic mafia romance. I can’t wait to see where things go from here for the rest of the Frost Industries books!
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kay93's review

4.0
adventurous dark mysterious fast-paced

marauch's review

3.5
challenging dark emotional tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes