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mallorypen's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.75
I particularly enjoyed the set up of a poison taster as the protagonist in this harsh, no-nonsense society of rules. I’m sympathetic to the Commander - especially because of his secret - but the totalitarian rule feels like the pendulum swung too far in the other direction. The mercy he shows at the end is a little weird, but I got what the author was trying to do.
Overall, Yelena is a little one-dimensional - she’s powerful, good, is able to succeed in everything she’s tasked to do. I would have enjoyed seeing her with a few more human qualities, especially as it pertains to dealing with her traumas.
I really liked Ari and Janco as side characters - supportive, loyal and funny, but also good foils to all of the political intrigue. Their loyalty to Yelena felt a little intense very early, but I enjoyed reading about them.
Valek … what to say about Valek? I love an enemies to lovers, but I don’t like a power imbalance breeding romance. The author was careful to say they were equals once they confessed their feelings to one another, and Valek had revealed Butterfly Dust wasn’t a thing and Yelena told him about her magic, but it didn’t feel like the most natural romantic development, or that the power imbalance was really gone or not. I liked Valek’s character as an assassin and loyalist to the Commander, but the example of Valek being merciful to the farmer but still being willing to kill Yelena if the Commander ordered it felt a little weak. The farmer example made Valek much more likable, but I would have preferred a “Don’t make me choose” moment where the Commander allowed Yelena to escape without having Valek prove that he would be more loyal to the Commander versus Yelena.
Again, I enjoyed this book overall, and I’d be interested in reading the sequels!
Moderate: Rape
aseel_reads's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.0
Moderate: Child abuse, Confinement, Death, Physical abuse, Rape, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Torture, Violence, Blood, Vomit, Medical content, Trafficking, Stalking, Murder, Sexual harassment, and Injury/Injury detail
siglerbooknook's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.75
Graphic: Child abuse, Rape, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Torture, and Violence
Moderate: Slavery, Kidnapping, Stalking, and Murder
Minor: Mental illness
Enemies to loverskincardine's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.0
Graphic: Rape
ardentlyalexia's review against another edition
5.0
Graphic: Rape and Sexual harassment
lisa_m's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
I think the reason I didn't like it as much as I could have is how much YA Fantasy I have already read. At some point it just starts to become repetitive. I really hope that is not true though because I love YA Fantasy. :( If I read this book 2 years ago I would have probably liked it more.
Another concern I had was that certain serious topics where discussed quite graphically which I don't like and which always makes me uncomfortable. It was used to establish Yelenas character and her past trauma but still I wished it had been less graphic.
Nonetheless I will definitely be reading the following books of the series. I also hope Ari and Janco will be in the next booka as well since they were my favourite characters. (Btw. I thought their friendship could have been established better. They basically went from not knowing Yelena to wanting to die for her which felt very rushed.) I guess I just wished it was longer but since it is the first book of a series that's not really a big issue.
Edit: One more thing. I didn't expect the romance to be Between thlse two people for two reasons. 1. it was underdeveloped and 2. he is 33 and she is 19!! I didn't even realise it that much while reading the book but at first I did think he was going to be a sort of mentor/father figure. When they started hinting at a romance I aged him down in my mind but now that I finished the book I looked it up and he really is 33! Idk what to think about that tbh
Graphic: Body horror, Bullying, Child abuse, Confinement, Deadnaming, Death, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Gore, Physical abuse, Rape, Sexual assault, Torture, Violence, Blood, Vomit, Medical content, Kidnapping, Murder, Fire/Fire injury, Sexual harassment, and Injury/Injury detail
lusouto's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? N/A
- Flaws of characters a main focus? N/A
4.0
Moderate: Rape
katiefronk's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Moderate: Physical abuse and Rape
Minor: Child abuse
deenice2819's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
Graphic: Child abuse, Confinement, Physical abuse, Violence, Blood, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Rape, Sexual assault, Sexual content, and Torture
earthlyfaerie's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.5
Minor: Rape