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Damsel by Elana K. Arnold

23 reviews

mypatronusisajedi's review against another edition

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dark sad tense slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
Nothing will ever scar me as much as this book did. It will live rent free, on a loop, in my brain for the rest of my life. 

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finch_sturgis's review against another edition

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I was about 30 pages in when i guessed the twist, and i was like "i really hope this isn't the twist. that would really suck" but i couldn't stop thinking about it so i looked it up and i was correct. the twist is
the prince stabbed the dragon in the armpit and he had sex with the wound which turned her into a human girl. this is so disturbing. I'm very upset this was the the twist, the concept was so good and if it had been better executed it could have been amazing but instead we have this.

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and_cats's review against another edition

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Completely recordable plot, boring characters, overused tropes — but not in  a self-aware, satirical sense, just in a way that’s trying to be deeper than it is

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heidi1213's review against another edition

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dark medium-paced
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Strong, but lacking in subtlety.

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plutotoujors's review against another edition

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dark emotional slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

1.0


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scribblesandsuch's review against another edition

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dark slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
God this was awful. The writing was clumsy. I figured out the twist on page 8. In all fairness you were probably supposed to work it out early on anyway? But the pacing of the book means the character doesn't work it out until literally 300 pages in, right at the end of the book, so you're just waiting the whole time. The whole book has a feel of thinking it's giving subtle nods and hinting at complexities whilst being incredibly blatant and superficial. The obsession with male genitalia was not subversive, and having the protagonist being the obeying victim until the very end is neither empowering or believable characterisation. It contains things that are unpleasant to read, such as triggering topics, and because it's written so badly none of them have any real impact on the story or reading, turning them into ineffective shock tactics. Despite all the descriptions of just how hard the prince's 'yard' was, all in all I found both the characters and plot to be v limp. It also isn't bad in a fun way, so I couldn't even recommend it as something to love hating. 

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egurgens's review against another edition

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challenging dark emotional sad tense slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

2.5

 TLDR: excessively obscene writing, excess of misogynistic characters, and weak willed women.

First of all, let me just say the writing in this is VULGAR. Now, I'm not afraid of smut, even graphic smut. But the author added obscene details to parts of the book where they don't belong! Like during sex, I get it. But when the character is just being dried off, you don't need to go into such detail.
"...he started with her arms, rubbed her breasts, the hard, pink, nubs of her nipples, her stomach, her buttocks, the fire of red hair between her legs, her legs themselves."
Keep in mind, this is supposed to be a young adult novel. This is meant for 12-18 year old kids. Just so much unnecessary graphic nudity. Now, there is no smut, or any sex written in this book. Just graphic nudity. While reading this, I thought the author was a man, based on the descriptions used. How overly sexualized un-sexual moments are. Like, I don't want (or need) to know that
"...the thick meat of him, a fleshy tusk, white like ivory in the bed of curled black hair."
Like, it was a non-sexual moment. The reader does NOT need to know that much detail. Like sure, you can describe the dick some, but maybe not to that amount of detail. Damn.
Anyways. Now for the actual review. Rant over. The character of Emory is so wholly misogynistic, I wanted to stab him myself. Through the pages. As if rescuing someone makes them your property. As if her being your fiancé gives you the right to gaslight her, emotionally abuse her, and more. The men in this story are so shitty, not one is even decently mannered. You would think that the queen mother, who was in the same position as Ama, would be sympathetic. It seems as though Ama is the only sane character in the book! Like, who doesn't resent
  someone forcing themselves on you, someone that tries to kill your only companion, someone who won't even let you go OUTSIDE on your own? Who parades you around on a leash because you didn't ask permission for something? Who treats you like an object, "You are my bride, and your flesh is my flesh. Do not treat it so roughly," she literally just got a small burn, dude. She is not your property.

I am sorry that I am so critical of this book. I really enjoyed the general idea, and the general plot. But some things I just cannot get over. I read the whole book, and I greatly enjoyed the end. However, the whole time I was just super frustrated with the writing and the characters. The only acceptable characters in this are Ama, Tilley, and Sorrow. That's it. Ama did grow throughout the story. She tries to accept her role, but as she learns more about it, the more uncomfortable she becomes with her role. But still, she stays long after any reasonable character would have taken some sort of action. I mean, to be fair, she has no prior knowledge of any family or anything, so she would try to make the best of things. But I think there should be a limit. It's not like she loves him, or anyone in the castle. She is not pregnant with his child. She could have left. Where would she go? I don't know. Anywhere but there. So she is a bit weak willed, but eventually takes action. Tilley isn't perfect, she was only a servant, and she obeyed what she was told. She could have helped Ama, or told her what she knew about the other Damsels. Anyways. There were no strong female characters in this book. As a 20 something woman, I think we need to do better. Women need to write strong women, to help raise other women up. Don't write every woman as pathetic or weak, have some diversity, set some good examples for your young readers. Do better, Elana K. Arnold. 

TLDR: excessively obscene writing, excess of misogynistic characters, and weak willed women. 

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mayhem24_7reads's review against another edition

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dark sad slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

0.5

Until now, I have never hated a book so much that I drove back to the store to return it

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amanda12's review against another edition

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dark tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.0

Spoiler warning. Trigger warnings for sexual assault and animal abuse.

Okay, so when I bought this book I was expecting a wild dragon escapade with some twists and turns. Instead, I got a book that I can't really comprehend. I mean, I can, but at the same time I'm just so confused as to why this book is the way it is. Right of the bat, based off summary alone, I figured that Emory, the soon to be king charged with rescuing the damsel, wasn't going to be that great of a character. The summary mentioned that Ama, the damsel, would face great dangers after being "rescued" from the dragon and that there was like an air of mystery to the whole rite of the damsel, I figured she'd probably been kidnapped or something especially since she didn't remember anything. 

What shocked me was that early on, I managed to call the twist: Ama herself had been the dragon. It was easy to spot in the description of Ama because it briefly mentioned amber eyes which had been a big talking point when Emory had first faced the dragon. I thought to myself, okay cool, an interesting twist.

And it was interesting, the last few parts giving the story of how Ama had become human and how she remembered her lair of spice-tang scents and mountains of gems. I had been ecstatic when she finally killed Emory, ate his heart, and finally became a dragon again, fleeing the castle she'd been confined too.

My problem is honestly the author's seeming obsession with detailing animal abuse (that rabbit killing scene haunts me to be honest) and Emory's blatant abuse of Ama. Acting like he owns her, putting her on a leash like an animal acting as if was a bit of fun, threatening to kill her animal when she "stepped out of turn", ranting about a woman's place and how he should be revered by everyone as a hero, and sexually assaulting her on many occasions. He claims she should give him thanks, though, because apparently he has more restraint than other men in the kingdom. Like, yeah, oh gee thanks, dude, you're such a winner.

So honestly, while the book has a good twist, I don't really think it's worth a read. I gave it two stars for the twist and ending alone, where Ama was finally able to kill her captor and be free as a dragon once more. Emory's entire character was so off putting I almost didn't finish this thing, but maybe that's just me.

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emakay's review against another edition

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challenging dark emotional mysterious sad tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.75


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