champipen's review

3.0

Starts off strong, interesting premise, decent world and whatnot. Doesn't take long to throw all of it off a bridge. Stopped at chapter 80, most likely will not continue it.

The main character is interesting at times, specifically in the beginning. Surviving? Cool. Figuring out what's happening? Cool. Trying to hide his godly strength in a world where being outed is a death sentence? Cool. Some of the art is fantastic, and there are several panels I've saved due to admiring the composition and whatnot; there are segments that are absolutely art.

However, it's not all up to snuff. There's no standard, in art or pacing or storytelling. The author is either making things up as they go or think that outlines are for losers because half of the content could be cut and it wouldn't have an effect on the overall story. The overall story, as well, doesn't know what it's trying to do and jumps around from action to korean drama to sad backstory to useless side characters to mondo-evil mustache-twirling villains.

It lacks focus. There's a lot of potential, but introducing a new character every time the story slows down isn't good writing- it's lazy. I could explain the main plot to a new reader in a single sentence, but I'd probably make it sound more interesting than it actually is. Additionally, the characters suffer from Exposition-itus, where they can't help but scream out loud about things that we already know or actively see happening.

All in all, it's trying. Not doing so hot, but trying. I most likely won't finish it unless I have some time I don't mind putting towards it, but so many of the supporting characters are insufferable to my personal taste that it most likely won't happen.
mythos05's profile picture

mythos05's review

3.0

3/5 stars

I managed to finish the novel version of this and barely remember anything because so much is going on. I had to have a doc of notes in order to follow along with the story. This may be just my case because I read multiple books at once and tend to forget a lot of things.

In terms of the webtoon, I'm up to date. I liked the part where the MC realizes how his actions or mere presence can affect both him and the people who care about him. I didn't necessarily like that he just ran away, but he didn't have many options in the first place. Another aspect I liked was the arks of some of his more long-term companions.

Still, it gets repetitive at times and can cause you to want to drop it. If you don't like manga to be repetitive at times, then I don't recommend it because I don’t believe you can skip the fights because there are important bits of information for the story in between the fighting. I do recommend it if you can stand manga to be repetitive at times and like an isekai that is action-packed and has game-like dynamics.
mimirtells's profile picture

mimirtells's review

2.0

2/5 Stars (%44/100)

PS: I'm writing this review for Season 1 of the series (First 50 chapters).

The premise of the series: Ryu Han-Bin, ex-military, is chosen and transported into a magical world. Everyone is given a guideline (you can level up, use stats, see skills etc) but his guideline is glitched. So, he spends a long time in the tutorial area because he can't level up properly. This is why he is super strong.

It was okay in general. I would have quit but I wanted to give it more chance and I managed to finish the 1st season. There are a lot of problems with this one and I won't continue with the 2nd season. It actually starts out pretty interesting. When we get past the introduction part, the problems start to occur as well. Here are some things that bothered me:

1)The pacing is terrible. It is very slow most of the time. However, sometimes, especially during the fights, it ends so quickly that you don't even have any time to comprehend. Because the pacing is almost always slow, it gets boring to read and I really forced myself to finish mere 50 chapters.

2)The protagonist is problematic. I love overpowered main characters but there needs to be a balance. Our MC is so strong that even absurdly strong villains are piece of cake for him. So, no matter how brilliant you write the fight scene or draw it, it becomes meaningless because you know the MC will just beat him in 2 hits or something.

3)There is a lack of interesting characters. The MC is interesting and funny most of the time. Other than him, there is Atisse and later Ephyr. Lots of characters are introduced but they are easily forgettable and you don't see them after 2 chapters anyway.

4)The worldbuilding is bad. There is not enough explanation for the power system, the world, its people, the otherworlders, and so on. Sometimes something happens and you don't know what is going on. There are also other times where you see 5 pages of information about some skills.

In short, the series had a potential but that potential is wasted really quickly. I liked the humour, the character design and art style. However, those are secondary when compared to plot and characterization. Try it if you are curious but I'm dropping the series after Season 1.