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nosfredatu's review
5.0
As much as Douglas Clegg can write serious quiet horror (The Hour Before Dark), The Abandoned shows that he can also write a fun-filled gorefest. I really loved this novel and found it very refreshing. It's another story about Harrow, the haunted house that is the subject of a few Douglas Clegg novels such as The Infinite, Mischief and Nightmare House. This is gory fun. I just loved it.
This review was first published on amazon.ca.
This review was first published on amazon.ca.
paperbackstash's review
2.0
You know the feeling of anticipation you get when you pick up a book by a beloved writer, or watch a movie that's been hyped out the yang hole? Only to feel like you've swallowed a rock and the world will never look quite the same? I guess my over-dramatic personality is leaking in here, but you get the point. I'm a big fan of Douglas Clegg, the man can write captivating horror tales that can actually be creepy. Regrettably here I found rocky terrains instead, a ride that was anything but smooth, sending me to the nearest cabinet for an aspirin.
The plot? Unfortunately, the plot is bloated, congested, and confusing. After the beginning, the middle went downhill, with Clegg choosing to hop all over the place with characters and events. After a time this grew strange, then tiresome. I understand many writers now of days are trying to create confusing works that a reader can’t possibly put together until the end, I really do, but this isn’t the way to accomplish that. There was too much narrative distance from what was taking place, not enough emphasis on a certain person or event, just continuous changing. Sure, some of the ‘attacks’ were cool, creepy, etc, etc, but a reader has to have something to latch on to, to care about, in order to continue a story and keep the smile.
The pacing was semi strong but because of the plot’s direction and the method it was told, I just didn’t give a damn much of the time. In other words, just because you have things happening at a rapid pace doesn’t mean they have to be interesting. The atmosphere is dark and depressing, which is good for this type of work, but it also enhanced confusion the plot conveyed.
None of the characters were written badly, but I didn’t care about any of them. If I blinked, I’d forget who was who. They’re shown too briefly and come across ineffectual. The only exception is possibly the psychic woman and the writing teen, but even they didn’t rock my boat all that hard. Sam was a cool outcast type, but he shows up so briefly you forget he’s there.
On the plus side, Clegg’s writing style is as strong as ever. His words are confident, clear, and masterful. He usually ends a scene with some sort of dramatic note – I love when writers do this. The beginning of the book also intrigued me; the characters were well written then, the dialogue realistic, and I appreciated the nods toward horror films and directing masters. Great stuff for fans.
Before the first few chapters ended, he had a strong thing going. If he had stuck with the two main characters of Sam (he intrigued me more than the others, I was saddened he wasn’t used much) and Lizzie, this story may have worked. Instead he hopped around like crazy, even to more irrelevant characters, taking the reader down unneeded roads and weighing down the excitement. The middle was sogged down by too much ‘mystery, out-there enthusiasm’, and the end may have wrapped the book up well, but – well, by that point the reader’s mind is elsewhere.
If you’re new to Clegg’s work, I recommend starting with another novel. He really is a great writer, but I guess most have to have some stinkers in the barrel. This is obviously one of them. Despite high reviews of Naomi, I also consider that a weak work. So the ultra bottom-bottom line? Look elsewhere for good Clegg writing.
The plot? Unfortunately, the plot is bloated, congested, and confusing. After the beginning, the middle went downhill, with Clegg choosing to hop all over the place with characters and events. After a time this grew strange, then tiresome. I understand many writers now of days are trying to create confusing works that a reader can’t possibly put together until the end, I really do, but this isn’t the way to accomplish that. There was too much narrative distance from what was taking place, not enough emphasis on a certain person or event, just continuous changing. Sure, some of the ‘attacks’ were cool, creepy, etc, etc, but a reader has to have something to latch on to, to care about, in order to continue a story and keep the smile.
The pacing was semi strong but because of the plot’s direction and the method it was told, I just didn’t give a damn much of the time. In other words, just because you have things happening at a rapid pace doesn’t mean they have to be interesting. The atmosphere is dark and depressing, which is good for this type of work, but it also enhanced confusion the plot conveyed.
None of the characters were written badly, but I didn’t care about any of them. If I blinked, I’d forget who was who. They’re shown too briefly and come across ineffectual. The only exception is possibly the psychic woman and the writing teen, but even they didn’t rock my boat all that hard. Sam was a cool outcast type, but he shows up so briefly you forget he’s there.
On the plus side, Clegg’s writing style is as strong as ever. His words are confident, clear, and masterful. He usually ends a scene with some sort of dramatic note – I love when writers do this. The beginning of the book also intrigued me; the characters were well written then, the dialogue realistic, and I appreciated the nods toward horror films and directing masters. Great stuff for fans.
Before the first few chapters ended, he had a strong thing going. If he had stuck with the two main characters of Sam (he intrigued me more than the others, I was saddened he wasn’t used much) and Lizzie, this story may have worked. Instead he hopped around like crazy, even to more irrelevant characters, taking the reader down unneeded roads and weighing down the excitement. The middle was sogged down by too much ‘mystery, out-there enthusiasm’, and the end may have wrapped the book up well, but – well, by that point the reader’s mind is elsewhere.
If you’re new to Clegg’s work, I recommend starting with another novel. He really is a great writer, but I guess most have to have some stinkers in the barrel. This is obviously one of them. Despite high reviews of Naomi, I also consider that a weak work. So the ultra bottom-bottom line? Look elsewhere for good Clegg writing.
5wamp_creature's review
3.0
Audiobook. This reader was not to my liking. An older (sounding) gentleman doing child and female voices gets on your nerves after a few hours. Lots of gore-sex. Is that a word? Inappropriate character delivers long lecture of exposition near the end. To me that usually means the author didn't leave enough breadcrumbs to even mislead. But. I liked the haunted house gets into your dreams bit and will not compare to other similar books. The gore is, uh, creative and the reader registers his disdain at having to say it out loud. I think I would have enjoyed this much more in print.
smcscot's review
1.0
Ugg. I had a hell of a time finishing this, half conceptualized novel. I have read Clegg in the past and where he is a paperback writer, and you cant expect a whole lot of of paperback writers (because of the time constraints on their contracts, not because of their talent), this one was particularly bad. Going straight to the shock instead of trying to be scary, using Pattersonesque short paragraph chapters to try and increase the tension which only distracts the reader, and introducing flat characters and giving them good page time, but obviously only to have them be killed. There were no perceptual main characters, in fact one of the characters who lives doesn't even get introduced until halfway through the book. Just avoid it.
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