Scan barcode
tinewen's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Graphic: Panic attacks/disorders, Sexual content, Torture, and Murder
Moderate: Child abuse, Death, Violence, Kidnapping, and Death of parent
Minor: Drug abuse, Stalking, and Toxic friendship
abception's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
1.0
My biggest issue with this book, which took any and all potential enjoyment out of it for me, is that Alex is a terrible person, in a very abusive, disrespectful, aggressive way, and that over the course of the book he did nothing to redeem himself - instead, he got worse, and the book actually culminates
First of all, very early on in the book, Alex tells Ava (on the authority of being asked by her brother to 'look out for her'): 1. what she can and cannot wear (cannot: anything he deems too revealing (except for the scenes requiring her to be wearing something sexy for him)), 2. who she can and cannot be around (can: women, can't: men), and 3. what she can and cannot do (can: self-defence classes chosen by him, can't: boudoir photography, going anywhere alone). As well as constantly belittling her feelings or outlook on things as childish or optimistic and therefore silly.
Secondly, he is extremely aggressive in a multitude of ways, e.g.:
• Generally, he approaches every single problem with threats of financial ruin or violence, if not outright reacting with violence.
A few other problems with Alex, specifically, are:
• He's a CEO (derogatory) - he literally treats people like dirt, he financially ruins people with no empathy at all, he looks down on all of his employees and is overall an entitled prick.
On the other hand, I had no problems with Ava whatsoever - with the exception of wishing her experiences of mental illness (i.e., insomnia, panic attacks, flashbacks, repressed memories) was more fleshed out and less 1-dimensional. She was a really sweet and loveable character, and I would have definitely enjoyed a novel with her characterisation in a less disturbing romantic situation.
Outside of Alex's problematic characterisation, I also disliked Huang's:
1. Unrealistic depiction of flashbacks
2. Constant references to sex (this is just a personal preference)
4. 1-dimensional/cartoonishly evil villains
5. How overpowered Alex is
The writing of the main characters' trauma (both Alex and Ava) really did not read as realistic/well-fleshed-out to me - primarily, due to the depictions of flashbacks for both characters. Very early on in the book, both Ava and Alex experience flashbacks in the middle of completely mundane/untriggering conversations. For example, Alex has a flashback
Overall, I would not recommend this novel to anyone due to the disturbing romanticisation of criminal harassment and abusive/controlling behaviour - and, I'm not happy that I bought the rest of the series before reading (though I'm crossing my fingers that Huang writes at least one romantic male lead that isn't just plain abusive).
Graphic: Child abuse, Emotional abuse, Misogyny, Panic attacks/disorders, Sexual content, Toxic relationship, Violence, Stalking, and Murder
Moderate: Child death, Death, Gun violence, Torture, Kidnapping, and Death of parent
Minor: Drug abuse, Infidelity, and Blood
saturnpersonified's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Graphic: Panic attacks/disorders, Sexual content, Toxic relationship, Stalking, Death of parent, and Murder
Moderate: Child death, Gun violence, Suicide, Violence, and Gaslighting
Minor: Torture and Kidnapping
chloelj27's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Child abuse, Death, Gun violence, Sexual content, Violence, Death of parent, Murder, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Cursing, Infidelity, Panic attacks/disorders, Suicide, Torture, Blood, and Gaslighting
Minor: Drug abuse, Alcohol, and Sexual harassment
bookswithjess's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
📋 So I liked Alex in the middle of the book; the beginning and the end? Not so much. Ava and Alex should NOT have gotten back together - some things are unforgivable and he became a stalker under the face of "omg! possessiveness!" it's not cute (again, I don't mind this trait but I guess it depends).
📋 Would it have killed Alex to have flaws and not be great at absolutely everything though? Characters being bad at things is fun! I mean he was super flawed, so at least he wasn't Absolutely Perfect.
📋 I really liked that this book had a plot and it wasn't just sex in every chapter! Like was the plot over the top? Yes, but it was fun.
📋 I also like that we got to know more about Ava outside of her feelings for Alex. I wasn't expecting the plot twist regarding her storyline although in hindsight I probably should have.
📋 I have heard the rest of the series is better, so I'm looking forward to it!
Graphic: Child abuse, Child death, Death, Gun violence, Panic attacks/disorders, Racism, Sexual content, Torture, Toxic relationship, Violence, Blood, Kidnapping, Grief, Death of parent, Murder, Fire/Fire injury, and Injury/Injury detail
edmarodz's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Graphic: Death and Death of parent
Moderate: Child death, Gun violence, Sexual content, Torture, Blood, Kidnapping, and Murder
abbycassidy17's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Child abuse, Torture, and Violence
ilka00's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
1.0
Graphic: Child death, Death, Panic attacks/disorders, Torture, Violence, Grief, Death of parent, and Murder
ohlovehandles's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.75
Graphic: Body horror, Child abuse, Emotional abuse, Mental illness, Panic attacks/disorders, Sexual content, Violence, Blood, Kidnapping, Death of parent, Murder, Gaslighting, and Abandonment
Moderate: Drug use, Suicide, Torture, and Toxic relationship
Minor: Stalking
zc2's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Graphic: Death, Domestic abuse, Panic attacks/disorders, Sexual content, Suicide, Torture, Toxic relationship, Violence, Stalking, Death of parent, Murder, and Toxic friendship
Moderate: Body horror, Child death, Emotional abuse, Genocide, Gore, Gun violence, Physical abuse, Blood, Grief, Fire/Fire injury, Gaslighting, and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Chronic illness, Drug use, Mental illness, Kidnapping, and Alcohol