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ninj's review
4.0
At times a bit of a word salad, at other times poetic:
'As Babs eyes Bob, Bob snaps time open.'
Which even makes some sense, given the 'plot'.
Where a typo is noted - "Ariadne, I felt, negates heros [sic]." the [sic] itself is of course later part of the palindrome.
And within the palindromic story, there's a palindromic refrain near the start and end which I thought worked really well.
Perhaps this is all just warmup for reading something like Finnegans Wake...
'As Babs eyes Bob, Bob snaps time open.'
Which even makes some sense, given the 'plot'.
Where a typo is noted - "Ariadne, I felt, negates heros [sic]." the [sic] itself is of course later part of the palindrome.
And within the palindromic story, there's a palindromic refrain near the start and end which I thought worked really well.
Perhaps this is all just warmup for reading something like Finnegans Wake...
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