3.5 AVERAGE


Story was a little confusing but had a premise based on a town story

Not quite the creepy vibes I usually get with a Jennifer McMahon book but still a good mystery.

This book blended urban legend and small town life together very well. Each page kept your attention, and the McMahon had you wondering--is it super natural or real.

Some of it was good but the "ghost story" parts were kind of dumb...

this was a very interesting book to say the least. it was a fast paced read that dealt with small town murder, ghosts, & childhood friendships.

even though i gave this 3 stars I’d definitely still recommend if you’re wanting a quick read about a who done it murder mystery!

I legit cannot believe this was written by the same person as the other books I've loved by this author. This one is so casually, offhandedly offensive (r word usage, jokes about "Indians" etc) and at the same time completely ridiculous (I'm supposed to be afraid of a ghost that's called the potato girl?) that put together it just wasn't some personally readable for me. DNF at page 100.

As I am enamoured with Children on the Hill, I put all the former McMahon books as tbr and presto!
What I can say is this: the author has made a whole lot of progress over 9 books as this debut was decent but it couldn’t grab me. The ghost story aspect just didn’t work out.
The writing is ok and the characters are well crafted and I can spot the hint of greatness to come, it just isn’t there yet.

At first I found this book to be quite boring and confusing with the amount of characters and bouncing back and forth between the past and present. BUT… 1/4 of the way in I got hooked and couldn’t put it down!! I ended up really enjoying this read.

Very well written. Great characters, clear plot, moved between time periods gracefully. I enjoyed it.
dark emotional mysterious sad tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes